I recently finished
Louise Penny’s eighth and latest book, How
the Light Gets In, and I felt
frustrated because I had no one to discuss the ending with. I love Penny’s
books and each one is better than the last, but maybe it’s because not only her
protagonist, but also the characters with all their idiosyncrasies seem real
enough to become my friends. So I lay awake thinking about the ending and
considered calling my brother-in-law in Tacoma since he’d already read it and
enjoyed it, too. But even with the three hour time difference, it was still too
late to call him. A few days later my Tacoma sister and I did have an online
chat about the ending and where Louise Penny would go with her next book.
Then I got to thinking
about her main character, Armand Gamache, and remembered meeting him the first
year Louise Penny came to Malice Domestic with her first book, Still Life, What? How could I meet a
fictitious character? Well, I did sort of because Louise Penny and her husband
were at my table for the beginning of Malice-go-round. She had three minutes to
talk about her book and told us about Armand Gamache and how he was based on
her husband, not that her husband was Chief Inspector of Quebec’s Surete, but
because Gamache had all her husband’s characteristics. The expression on his
face as Penny talked about her book was full of pride and love for his wife.
Even in the years that followed at other Malice’s I could see the love between
the two of them, just like that of Armand and Reine-Marie Gamache. It’s in their
expressions and body language.
Although Still Life wasn’t nominated for an
Agatha that year, it won numerous other awards, and five of her subsequent
books won an Agatha, something no other author has done, and her book The Beautiful Mystery debuted at #2 on
the New York Times bestseller list. Because I believe in starting a series at
the beginning, I picked Still Life
for both of my book clubs and reread them several years apart. I enjoyed it
just as much the third time and maybe more because I found clues to the
murderer I hadn’t noticed in the first read as well as little things that would
turn up in future books.
So next I thought about
my main character Catherine Jewell. A lot of people have asked if I based her
on someone I knew or if she were me. She’s not really either one totally, but a
mixture. When one of my sisters and I collaborated on The Blue Rose, which for years was called Murder at Elmwood Gardens, we decided on a gardening theme since
our whole family of six siblings were gardeners. Our youngest sister, Catherine,
is a botanist so we gave the protagonist her name and made her a botanist. My
sister wanted our Catherine to be in her twenties and a very ambitious person
who would expand her horizons into creating gardening businesses and a show on
TV or the radio. Within a month I had taken over the writing because we lived
too far apart to get together very often, and she still had kids living at
home. I didn’t. But I couldn’t get into the head of an ambitious twenty
something year old woman, so I aged her to forty. I also gave her a past life
before coming to the little town of Portage Falls that was somewhat similar to
mine. Catherine lost her husband and only child in an accident ten years
before. Because my oldest son had died, I could write realistically about her
loss. I am not a botanist, but I can contact my sister for anything I want to
know that I can’t find in the many gardening books I have. Although Catherine
has a few quirks or beliefs that are mine, for the most part she is a totally
fictitious character sprung from my imagination.
I wonder how many other
authors, especially of series, can write a protagonist without making them at
least a little bit like themselves or like someone they know well even if they
switch genders.
How much of your main
character is like you?
As a reader, what main
character resonates most with who you are?
The protagonist of my series, Seamus McCree, shares many of my interests, and I never have a problem figuring out how he would say something because he speaks as I speak. However, he is a bit larger than life. So he’s richer, smarter, taller, stronger, faster, and has more hair than I. He is not partnered, but I am. I have two children, Seamus has only one; athough he is special, he is not like either of my children or an even an amalgamation of their best characteristics.
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~ Jim
I haven't had my MC's abusive background, but since my father was bipolar, I understand having a dysfunctional youth. Abby and I also share a love of champagne and sparking wines, an inquisitive mind for understanding what makes people tick and a fascination for problem-solving to gain peace in our lives. We also believe in spirits and that there is another game being played here on earth that has nothing to do with labor, land and capital. I think she's a bit braver than me. She stands up to many terrifying events that would have me diving under the covers.
ReplyDeleteI've had people who know me and read my books tell me they hear me in the dialogue. I'm sure they do, because the characters come from my head, and we can't help leaving our thoughts on the written page. When I write a character, I become them, and their story becomes my story. How else can a writer make it real. I do take traits from people I know, but I doubt they'd know it.
ReplyDeleteThe novel I have waiting at the publisher to be read is based in large part on the childhood of a close friend. I imagined what it would be like to live in the family situation she described to me. My protagonist is like what I imaged she was like at the protagonist's age. I asked her about incidents in her family for the book and she told me a number of them.
ReplyDeleteJim, after meeting you in person at Malice this past spring and also after being one of your blog partners for almost two years, I saw you in Seamus. I don't care if a character is male or female as long as I can relate to them in some way.
ReplyDeleteE.B. my protagonist is braver than me, too. At least I think so since I've never been in the dangerous situations she gets into although I guess making a rattlesnake get off a trail that I didn't want to leave could be considered brave - or foolish.
I agree with you, Polly, the characters do come from our heads and we do tend to take traits from people we know even if we change the character to suit our purposed.
I also use myself in my main character, Penny Weaver. She is a poet and a small farmer, but she has a successful love life, and I'm single after two marriages. She is slightly more sarcastic than I am in her voice, which seems to happen naturally. She can also deal with lots of people dropping in, whereas I like to plan things. Judy Hogan
ReplyDeleteI see the similarities between you and Penny, Judy. There is an age difference, too, but maybe not when you first started writing Penny. I'd still like to read those earlier books.
ReplyDeleteThere's always a bit of me in my main characters, but they're always much braver than I. My historical MC is also much more of an extrovert and more apt to take action and help/interfere in other people's lives, whereas I stand back and keep my curiosity in my head (or use it to fuel more stories).
ReplyDeleteGood questions, Gloria, and a thoughtful post. I, too, am a huge Louise Penny fan.
Good question, Gloria. My main character is a male cowboy in the late 1800s who rides in a horse race whereas I'm a terrible horseback rider and am allergic to hay. The similarity is that we both have endurance. Thank you for making me think.
ReplyDeleteNancy, I always like hearing from another Louise Penny fan. I think many writers are not near as brave as their main characters. :-) I don't interfere in other people's lives, but I'm very curious about people. I tend to talk to people in line or other places I meet them like waiting for an airplane, etc.
ReplyDeleteOnce in my seat on an airplane, though, I tend to stick my nose in a book.
Kara, as a kid I galloped everywhere on my imaginary horses. I still love horses although the ones I got rather late in life (38 years old) have been downsized to two ponies now. I took falls off the horses I had. I can manage hay when I feed them, but when I would try to help put up hay, I'd break out in a rash and have trouble breathing.
The protagonist in my Jesse Damon crime novel series is based on several prison inmates who were locked up at an early age (14-17). Their convictions are violent and fairly serious, or they would have remained in the juvenile justice system. I have stayed in touch with a few of them and they talk pretty freely. Interestingly, none of them has ever claimed that he didn't commit the crime that resulted in the conviction, at least to me. I am also in touch with a few who couldn't make it out on the street and are locked up again, and they keep me up with developments inside the state prisons.
ReplyDeleteI think they are essential to adding a feeling of authenticity to my writing. It's important to me to present a representation of how difficult it is for these people to survive in society, despite the best of intentions. A lot of people don't think they deserve another chances.
KM, you have made Jesse Damon so real to me that I get saddened whenever he runs into problems on the outside. I want to make everything workout for him, comfort him and help him in anyway I can. What makes a great character is when the reader can totally emphasize with a character as I do with Jesse. Good writing, KM.
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