60 Second Adventure Movies
I don’t drink alcohol. It does not mix well with my cancer
medications. Except for one year in college I hardly ever drank to the point on
inebriation. Drinking only made me
sleepy and sloppy.
On the other hand I do enjoy good
writing, and Jameson Whiskey has produced a series of television ads labeled
John Jameson legends. In 60 seconds or less the watcher experiences an entire
humorous and yet thrilling adventure.
The first one I remember started when
a barrel of Jameson’s Whiskey washed overboard off a ship in a storm. The fearless hero kissed his wife and
leapt over board to rescue it. A
giant octopus intervened but John Jameson won in the end.
A second commercial described how
the Hawk of Ackle first carried off the miller’s daughter and then stole a
barrel of Jameson’s whiskey. The
hero cleverly tricked the hawk and returned with the whiskey and the woman
along with the defeated raptor.
A third commercial showed a runaway
train with screaming passengers and, critically, a rail car loaded with, you
guessed it, barrels of Jameson’s Whiskey. Jameson finished his breakfast
before jumping onto the engine from his horse. He tossed the engineer off the
train and onto his horse. Then he uncoupled
the cars with whiskey and screaming passengers. His actions unexpectedly saved Ireland from an unseen
threat.
I’ve tried to keep all spoilers
from my description so if you haven’t seen the commercials, there will still be
surprises in each one.
The ads present short lessons in
writing. Start when the action is
hot. When you hero or heroine gets
into trouble heap more trouble upon his or her head. Humor and surprise increase your audience’s enjoyment. Create a satisfying ending. Then stop.
What commercials have you seen that
have lessons in writing?
Great idea for those teaching creative writing--each student could be assigned to describe a commercial and create their own story based on it.
ReplyDeleteOne thing commercials have going for them is the visual aspect of storytelling, but even so, your point is well taken.: There is much we can learn from commercials about telling stories.
ReplyDelete~ Jim
Warren, I don't drink often or much. Usually wine if anything. It makes me sleepy, too, so that's why I prefer coffee when I'm out with friends.
ReplyDeleteI wish there were some way I could see those funny commercials without having to spend time in front of the TV. PBS that has the few shows I do watch doesn't have commercials, and I'm unwilling to give up an evening of reading to watch TV. It's all about choices, I guess.
Welcome back, Warren!
ReplyDeleteI think writing commercials is a great way to learn how to write flash fiction or very short stories. My friend, who has worked in advertising all her life, would like to write a novel but says that she can only tell a story in 30 or 60 seconds—no longer.
Good point, Warren. Maybe considering commercials could help with writing pitches, too.
ReplyDeleteWelcome back, Warren!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your synopses of the Jameson commercials, which do seem clever. Alas, I gave up TV years ago to find time to write and only catch favorite shows when they come out on DVD. I think this could be an excellent exercise, however.
I'm horrible about watching TV and pretty much only watch shows off my Apple TV (iTunes, Netflix, HBO Go, etc.), if I do watch it.
ReplyDeleteSo, I barely ever see commercials.
That said, I have been watching the US Open this week and will definitely pay closer attention to the commercials (rather than getting up to do something) after this post!
Love those ads but never viewed them that way. Great advice.
ReplyDeleteDon't have to watch the commercials to take your writing lesson from them: Start when the action is hot. When you hero or heroine gets into trouble heap more trouble upon his or her head. Humor and surprise increase your audience’s enjoyment. Create a satisfying ending. Then stop.
ReplyDeletePerfect story!
I'm sure those commercials were entertaining the first 3 times you viewed them, but now, most commercials run 20 times a show on 20 different shows for 20 days in a row. The lesson: Record and edit out.
ReplyDeletePatg
There are, and have been, some funny ads on TV that I'll never forget. I guess when we write our books, we want the same reaction. Although, a 60 second book would be fun. : ) Great post!
ReplyDeleteMarja McGraw