Last month I shared my thoughts on the blessings and curses
of being a full-time writer. When I stop to think about it, I realize that no
matter what, I’m living my dream. I’ve wanted to be a writer for as long as I
can remember. The good, the bad, the ugly, it’s exactly what I want to do with
my life.
Editing. That’s a different story. Don’t get me wrong. I
love editing. It’s where the dog’s breakfast of the first draft becomes a
cordon bleu meal. It’s fun, it’s entertaining, it’s surprising, and if it’s a
new book that is intended to be first in a series, it takes forever! Or maybe
forty forevers. I’m still working through that.
The immediate world (and certainly my blog family) all know
that the woman who used the email name DiverMiss since the inception of email
services is now writing a thriller set in the north Maine woods. Yes, it was a
transition capable of giving DiverMiss a bad case of the bends. Be that as it
may, I’m a Mainer now. I wanted to pay homage to my adopted state. Since I’m
also what tropical divers call a warm water wimp, there was no way that homage
would include underwater activities. Instead, I turned to my second love – the
woods.
My great-grandparents had a farm in upstate New York, and
I’m lucky enough to have memories of that special place. Anyone familiar with
upstate New York knows that it is (or was) heavily wooded. My male cousins took
advantage of that to drive my mother crazy. Mom wanted me to be a girly girl.
That didn’t work out. First, there were my cousins who had me in the woods
before I was out of high-top leather shoes. They taught me to fish, track,
build fires, camp, and survive in any weather. Trust me, my cousins made
Outward Bound feel like a relaxing vacation. Then there was my home
neighborhood. I was the only girl. If I wanted to play, it wasn’t going to be
with dolls.
Rural Maine felt like home, and I knew I wanted to set my
next book in the woods. My house is surrounded by them. In fact, if you walk a
straight line from my back door, you won’t see paved road until you swim the
St. Lawrence and power-walk your way to Quebec. There are some camps (Mainers’ name
for rural cabins) and maybe some abandoned logging camps, but that’s all. It’s
a magical place. And the perfect setting for a murder mystery. I grabbed it, sat
down and wrote a novel.
I won’t lie. With the Florida mysteries, I’m mostly a
two-draft writer. I know my setting and the ins and outs of my story. Things
are different when you change settings, characters, and I won’t even mention
the law enforcement aspects. Writing the first draft took a year. The book came
in at 60,000 words. Not unusual for one of my first drafts. Then came the
editing. That was where things changed. When I performed my first read-through
I ended up with more questions than resolutions. That meant more research. Oh,
and there were several plot holes large enough to drive a loaded logging truck
through. That meant isolating and drafting a synopsis for each plot point.
Several went the way of the circular file. The rest were vamped or revamped
until the loose ends were all tied up. That meant more words.
At this point, I’ve been working on this novel—tentatively
titled
No Return—for a year and nine months. The bad news—I’m still
editing. The good news—I’m almost ready to type the two most glorious words in
the English language, THE END. How will I know when I’m done? Easy. I’m ten
chapters away from my next (last) read-through. The book is at 70,000 words and
the plot holes have been filled. Barring a catastrophe, all that remains is a
final pacing check and finding those pesky typos that multiply while I sleep.
It has been a long road. Almost as long as the road from the Florida Keys to
Fort Kent, Maine.
Writers, do you find writing is slower when you change
settings and characters? Readers, are you willing to follow authors into a new
series?
Kait Carson writes the Hayden Kent Mysteries set in the beautiful Florida Keys. She lives in the north Maine woods with her husband, four cats, a flock of conures and a cavapoo puppy. All rescues.
Yup! Probably because I don’t want to miss anything and then I need to go back and take out the info dump.
ReplyDeleteIsn't it amazing the difference established characters make!
DeleteIf a new series interests me, I'll follow the author. But there are some I haven't followed to the new series because it didn't appeal to me for whatever reason.
ReplyDeleteGood information, Mark!
DeleteThe first of a new series always takes longer. We have an entire cast to get to know, including the protagonists and recurring characters. Plus there's the new setting to explore. It's a lot! I'm looking forward to No Return, Kait!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Annette!
DeleteI am also working on the first of a new series and yes, it's taking me 2-3 times longer to create this book than the most recent of my Seamus McCree series. Partly for reasons Annette mentioned, and partly because I used beta readers who did not know my work at all to get their take on the story.
ReplyDeleteThat's a great idea. So, not a spinoff?
DeleteFor me, the speed with which a piece comes together is more a feature of the main character than anything else. Some characters dictate the entire story in one sitting, and I just need to go do some light editing.
ReplyDeleteSometimes it's slower. The character I'm channeling now is a bit of a ditz. As my brother used to say, a smart space cadet. She dithers, which means lots of changes, and she's not at all sure of many elements or the proper vocabulary for some things, so I'm finding myself doing lots of rewrites and research.
But she insists she has a story to be told.
I love your description KM. It's so true, the characters tell the story, and they are pushy. Keep at it, she sounds wonderful.
DeleteSo much slower, Kait. Congratulations on nearing THE END!
ReplyDeleteThanks! It's amazing isn't it.
DeleteA new setting definitely takes longer. You want to make sure to get all the details right. Congratulations on typing the end!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Shari! So true, even when you're inventing your town, you still need to get the venue correct.
DeleteI'm starting a new series, too, and it's taking me twice as long as I had anticipated, so I feel your pain. (Of course, life in the form of a cross-country move is also interfering!) Can't wait to read your new one, Kait!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Lori. I'm looking forward to your new series as well. Yes, uprooting your life and your series can definitely be a challenge of the first degree!
DeleteLooking forward to reading your new book! The first in my series was too long, my current WIP is too short. I wonder if I'll ever achieve "just right."
ReplyDeleteYou will! I always write short - somehow when all is said and done, I manage to hit the mark.
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