All
authors want to “get it right.” No one wants to get emails pointing out
typos, incorrect grammar or worse of all, errors. Just like Mary Poppins, we
would like to believe we’re practically perfect in every way.
Unfortunately, writers (and editors) are human, and regardless of the number of
times a manuscript is edited, sometimes mistakes happen. While I can’t speak
for every author, I can say that most of us don’t mind when readers point out
typos or grammatical errors that wheedled through rounds of editing to make
their way into the final book. Sadly, if the author is traditionally published,
there may not be anything they can do once a book makes its way to print. Although,
indie authors have a bit more flexibility. However, I do think there may be a
time when authors may choose errors over accuracy.
Before
you panic, hear me out. Authors spend a lot of time researching. Chances are if
you checked the browser history of your favorite crime writer, you would find
some alarming things. You’d likely find research on poisons, bombs, guns,
knives and other weaponry, not to mention details on corpses, insects and
decomposition that would make your blood curdle all in an effort to provide credibility
and realism to a story (and avoid being called out by the crime savvy reader). However,
authors have to walk a fine line between getting it right and getting it
too right. Today, authors need to take into consideration how someone
will use the information. Thanks to the Internet, it’s possible to find
detailed directions on things that a naïve soul or someone intent on evil and
destruction could use to harm others. Recently, I saw a story about David Hahn,
who at 17, attempted to build a breeder reactor in the shed behind his mom’s
house in Michigan in 1991. Hahn was a Boy Scout who hoped this project would
gain him his Eagle Scout badge. While he didn’t succeed in building a breeder
reactor, he did manage to create a neutron source. Not sure what the difference
is? Me either, but it’s on the Internet. Was this overzealous boy scout an intentional
harbinger of death? Or were his actions the innocent mistakes of a misguided
youth? Schlemiel, schlimazel. It was still radioactive and had to be cleaned up
by The Environmental Protection Agency with the potential to cause a great deal
of damage.
So,
where do authors draw the line? What’s the balancing point between accuracy and
public safety? Nobody can know how the information in a book will be used.
However, sometimes in the interest of the public good, it may be best to omit a
detail. Do readers need to know all of the ingredients that can be purchased on
Amazon or your local supermarket to cook up an undetectable poison? Or, is it
critical to the story to provide a shopping list of ingredients to make a
breeder reactor (or nuclear source)? Ultimately, that decision will be up to
the author. Keep in mind, savvy readers, there are times when a deliberate error
or omission has its place, especially when it comes to crime fiction. Typos,
not so much.
great topic! I can talk to the local PD community liaison officer about what not to include.
ReplyDeleteSo many readers (and editors) "know" things that aren't true. Authors have to tread a fine line between being believable & not stopping readers dead in their tracks (a definite killjoy you want to avoid in your writing) to question something.
ReplyDeleteAnd yes, no one needs all the picky little details that might spur someone to try something dangerous.
Thanks for bringing this up, VM! It's a good point to consider. I know that people in prison read mysteries. I wonder if this is why.
ReplyDeleteExcellent topic, VM. I think I can build a bomb from reading a few Clancy novels, but I bet he left out pertinent details, too. Don't think I'll try to find out though, among other things, the science of it is beyond me. As Margaret mentioned, one of the most important questions we can ask our experts is what should not be said.
ReplyDeleteGood point. It reminds me of the quote about being so busy trying to do xxx that we didn't give thought as to whether we should.
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