Thursday, February 20, 2020

What To Keep Track of When You're Plotting a Mystery by Marilyn Levinson



Keep in mind all aspects of your sleuth's personal and professional life.

Don't forget to include updates in the lives of your sleuth's love interest, family, and friends.

Who are your victims and why were they murdered?

Who are your suspects and why are they considered potential murderers?

Make the most of the season (holidays, special events and celebrations.)

Always keep your setting in mind. Have a mental map of your town. Even better, draw one.

Make a list of all your characters and make sure you don't change their names midstream. (Don't laugh. My editor caught me putting Sammy, my real cat's name, in the manuscript instead of Smoky Joe.)

Most important: as you write, keep track of your days so that Friday follows Thursday. And of your weeks, so that you know if you're still in April and not yet in May. It will save you time later on.

Be careful when you name your characters. Don't start too many names with the same letter. Vary the number of syllables. Consider that some readers might confuse names like Don and Bob. Don't end all of your female names in a or ie.

Keep track of where all your suspects are at the time of each murder.

If you're writing a series, be sure to vary your methods of committing homicide. Whatever the method, the details may be few, but those you include must be authentic.

Have your sleuth acquire information in various ways. Consider that some sources of information may not be accurate or truthful.

Create secrets for your characters. Whether or not they are part of the murder investigation, secrets intrigue readers. Unearthing secrets may provide a piece of the investigative puzzle. They may also be used to send your sleuth in the wrong direction entirely.

Consider your characters' emotions. Readers love to cheer your sleuth on. They love to see her nemesis get put in her place.

A love interest adds a dimension to your book, but don't let it overshadow the mystery.

Red herrings and misdirection are necessary to maintain suspense.

Even if your protagonist is an amateur sleuth, the police will have a place in your book. Don't make them out to be idiots. While your sleuth may not have access to their labs and equipment, he/she may know the victim's family, friends or neighbors, who may be more willing to talk to share information.








13 comments:

  1. This is so wonderful. I printed it for my notes file. Great tips, Marilyn!

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  2. Excellent list, Marilyn! No wonder my head is exploding at the moment!

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  3. I printed this up for my checklist file. Thank you!

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  4. And readers think we simply sit down and write a book from beginning to end. You have certainly proven them wrong!!

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  5. Yikes! No wonder it's hard to keep everything in mind when I'm writing.

    Great checklist. I'm going to print it out, too.

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  6. So glad you can all make use of this list. Annette, we do all of these things and more!!

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  7. Very helpful list, especially for someone writing their first mystery novel. Thanks!

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  8. Terrific list--and apropos as I'm plotting out Act 3 of my WIP at the moment. So much to keep track of, so a list helps.

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  9. I'm so glad that many of you are using this as a check list. I should print it out myself.

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  10. What a great list. Thanks for sharing!

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  11. Marilyn, what a great list! Lots of things to track when plotting a mystery. Thanks for sharing your expertise!

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  12. Maryiln, your list was clear and uncluttered. I'm putting it plain sight on my bulletin board for easy access. Thanks you.

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