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Here are the upcoming WWK interviews for the month of July!

July 4th Christopher Huang, A Gentleman's Murder

July 11th V. M. Burns, The Plot Is Murder

July 18th Edith Maxwell (Maddie Day), Death Over Easy

July 25th Shari Randall, Against The Claw


Our July Saturday Guest Blogger Schedule: 7/7--Mary Feliz, 7/14--Annie Hogsett, 7/21--Margaret S. Hamilton, 7/28--Kait Carson.

Our special bloggers for the fifth Monday and Tuesday of July--Kaye George and Paula Gail Benson.


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Congratulations to our writers for the following publications:

Annette Dashofy's Uneasy Prey was released in March. It is the sixth Zoe Chambers Mystery. The seventh, Cry Wolf, will be released on September 18th. Look for E. B. Davis's interview with Annette on September 19th.

Carla Damron's quirky short story, "Subplot", was published in the Spring edition of The Offbeat Literary Journal. You can find it here: http://offbeat.msu.edu/volume-18-spring-2018/


Tina Whittle's sixth Tai Randolph mystery, Necessary Ends, debuts on April 3, 2018. Look for it here. Tina was nominated for a Derringer Award for her novelette, "Trouble Like A Freight Train Coming." We're all crossing our fingers for her.

James M. Jackson's Empty Promises, the next in the Seamus McCree mystery series (5th), was published on April 3, 2018. Purchase links are here. He's working on Seamus McCree #6 (False Bottom)


Dark Sister, a poetry collection, is Linda Rodriguez's tenth published book. It's available for sale here:


Shari Randall's "Pets" will be included in Chesapeake Crimes: Fur, Feathers, and Felonies anthology, which will be published in 2018. In the same anthology "Rasputin," KM Rockwood's short story, will also be published. Her short story "Goldie" will be published in the Busted anthology, which will be released by Level Best Books on April 25th.


Shari Randall's second Lobster Shack Mystery, Against the Claw, will be available in July 31, 2018.

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Monday, October 13, 2014

Fight Scene Choreography the UFC Way


Recently I attended a full day of training sessions for the staff of my public library system. (Wait! Don’t go to sleep yet!) That there were sessions for meditation and self defense tells you everything you need to know about working in a modern public library.

First session of the day was Self-Defense. Expecting mats, sparring dummies, and punching bags, I was disappointed when I walked into a regular classroom and saw a police officer standing by a chalkboard. Then the police officer started his presentation. I am sure it was not his intention, but his class turned out to be a master class in choreographing a realistic fight scene.

When she is threatened with assault in my current work in progress, my MC resorts to that old standby of eight year old girls everywhere – hair pulling. Turns out, that wasn’t as lame as I thought.

Our self defense class was taught by an ultra sharp and engaging police officer I’ll call Officer X. The first slide he shared with us listed the top banned moves (“fouls”) of the Ultimate Fighting Championships. UFC fighters are mixed martial artists, which means that anything goes in fights of incredible brutality and intensity. If the fighters in the UFC were allowed to use these moves, fights would be over too quickly because the banned moves cause significant pain, injury, and surprise. These moves, Officer X said, were the “go to” for self defense. Why? Because they work.

There are 31 fouls on the UFC list. Officer X shared the top 14 since after that the moves become increasingly less effective for self-defense. Timidity, applying substances to the skin or hair, or foul language are probably not going to help you or your MC defend yourselves.

Hair pulling is number five on the list.

I realized that this list was a good menu of moves for fight scenes. Not that I think I’ll need many. My MC is a lover, not a fighter, and like most women, she’s more likely to use her intuition and street smarts to avoid danger than her fists or feet to get out of it. However, in a mystery novel, danger cannot be avoided – what a dull book that would be! – so I’m glad to find her some effective moves, just in case.

As the UFC website states: “The following acts constitute fouls in a contest or exhibition of mixed martial arts and may result in penalties, at the discretion of the referee, if committed.”

1.                   Butting with the head
2.                   Eye gouging of any kind
3.                   Biting
4.                   Spitting at an opponent
5.                   Hair pulling
6.                   Fish hooking
7.                   Groin attacks of any kind
8.                   Putting a finger into any orifice or any cut or laceration of an opponent
9.                   Small joint manipulation
10.                Striking downward using the point of the elbow
11.                Striking to the spine or the back of the head
12.                Kicking to the kidney with a heel
13.                Throat strikes of any kind, including, without limitation, grabbing the trachea.
14.                Clawing, pinching, or twisting the flesh.

Officer X told us he hoped we’d never need these moves. The best defense, he said, is not needing one. And if you haven’t read The Gift of Fear by Gavin deBecker, you should – it offers valuable insights to ways your intuition will keep you - and your characters - safe.

Does your story include a fight scene? How does your character get out of scrapes?


14 comments:

KM Rockwood said...

Very interesting list. My characters don't fight often, but head butting is a move I've used.

And when I was working in a large prison, I had several people tell me, "I didn't mean to kill him (her.) I grabbed him (her) by the neck and then he(she) was dead," so I think that must be a very effect move and one that's easy to have very effective results.

Warren Bull said...

I agree that safety training for staff is a good source of information for writing about fights. I block out fights like a director of a play has actors move through what he or she wants them to do in a performance.

James Montgomery Jackson said...

My main character, Seamus McCree, is a former soccer player, so kicking comes naturally to him. He’s attacked heads and knees with his feet. He also managed to accidentally head butt his son and break his nose.

Good information should I disable his feet!

~ Jim

Shari Randall said...

KM, you mean it's a move you've used on the page, yes? Though I wouldn't be surprised. Sam, speaking from experience, mentioned that when head butting you have to be sure that you hit soft tissue (e.g., nose) so you don't knock yourself out.
This is not your typical writers' blog…. :)

Shari Randall said...

Warren, that's exactly it! I feel like I'm blocking a scene. Theater experience is definitely useful.

Shari Randall said...

Jim, I thought about Seamus and the head butt in CABIN FEVER. He is definitely a character who can take care of himself. Having an athletic character gives you a lot of choices in a fight scene, and boosts the believability factor.

Gloria Alden said...

Shari, my main character only fought once in the first book, and then it was in a fight for her life with a crazed woman. I had to wing the description of that fight because except for fights with my brother, when we were young, which involved more hair pulling on my part until he got his hair cut short. Other than that I've never been in any physical fight and hope I never have to do so, but I'll remember that list just in case.

Kara Cerise said...

Thank you for the list of self-defense moves, Shari. I've had my character kick and claw, but never spit or put a finger in an attacker's cut or orifice to defend herself. I wonder how well spitting works although I suppose the ick factor might stop someone.

Sherry Harris said...

Great post, Shari! I'd add to the list screaming, practice screaming. And like you I hope none of us ever have to do any of this!

E. B. Davis said...

My second manuscript had a fight scene, which one of my beta readers (luckily) edited. In my current WIP, I have fight scenes, but some of the fighters are of the "spirit" so human rules don't apply! :>)

Thank for the information, Shari!

Shari Randall said...

Gloria, I thank God I've never been in a fight. I think I'd just flail. And getting into a fight with a crazy person, like your protagonist, would be especially frightening. Hope I never have to. *knocking on wood*

Kara - I'm with you. The ick factor of all of this is too much. No thank you!

Sherry - You're right. Screaming should be on this list. I think it doesn't apply for UFC but it sure does for self defense.

E.B. - a supernatural fight! That's something I want to read!

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Carla Damron said...

Loved this. Both practical and scary.

Pam De Voe said...

Very informative post. Thanks a lot. This is interesting for our writing and for our (hopefully never having to use) self-defense.