I try to be a good citizen of the writing community. I’ve
received help and encouragement from other authors, and I try to pass it on
myself, teaching, mentoring, blurbing, reviewing, answering questions about
writing and publishing, and generally trying to help boost other writers.
Sometimes, though, I have to pull back from that stance when asked for help.
I’m a Cherokee poet and novelist who writes about a Cherokee
protagonist and also reviews books, so people send me just about every novel
written that has a major Indigenous character in it. A terrifying number of
them are romances with generic spray-tanned hunks on the cover, love interests
who are half-Cherokee, half-Navajo, half-Sioux, or just plain half-Indian
(these authors don’t seem to know any other of the 500 tribes exist) and
written without the least tiny bit of knowledge of any of these different
cultures. Recently, I received a non-romance novel written by a non-Native
author with a Cherokee female protagonist. The blurbs made me hopeful, but once
I started reading, it became apparent that the writer had done a little
haphazard research online about the Cherokee to give “flavor” to her work. She
got many of the most basic things wrong, but oddly enough had a few unusual things
right. I don’t suppose I have to state that I won’t be reading any more of her
books.
I also get contacted repeatedly by people who want me to
give them a crash course in being Cherokee (or even just Native) because
they’ve decided to make the protagonists of their books, or even a whole
series, Cherokee (or just Native). These are people who know nothing about the
Cherokee, not even the most basic information, and apparently have no Cherokee
friends or acquaintances. My attitude toward them, I’m afraid, is not much more
sympathetic than toward the authors wanting reviews for their books with
“Native” characters. Basically, these folks are saying to me, “I want an ‘exotic
Indian’ protagonist and the Cherokee are the most famous tribe, so I’ll choose them,
but I have no real interest in the culture or knowing anyone in it. I’m too
lazy to do any research on the most documented tribe in American history (the Cherokee were over 90% literate in
their own written language and had a bilingual newspaper long before the
Removal in the 1830s), so please do my research for me—and maybe I’ll use
it or maybe I’ll just do what I want to do, whether it’s true to the culture or
not, while putting your name down as the ‘expert’ I consulted. Because I
clearly don’t give a real damn.”
Indigenous cultures have been misrepresented by Anglo
anthropologists and folklore collectors for centuries. An awful lot of books,
especially novels, written by outsiders to a culture end up written from the
viewpoint of caricatures rather than real people, and the culture is presented
as a collection of stereotypes of that culture (often derived from those
misrepresenting researchers). These books almost always, in one way or another,
diminish or denigrate those cultures. This totally hilarious and tragically
true poem by Sherman Alexie, "How To Write the Great American Indian Novel," speaks to that experience. http://www.poetryfoundation.org/poem/237270
Tony Hillerman is usually brought up by these people as an
example of what they want to do. Hillerman wrote his novels the way a writer
should write about another culture—with respect, extensive research, and the
input of members of that culture. In fact, the Diné officially declared
Hillerman a Special Friend of the Navajo Nation for his knowledgeable and
sympathetic presentation of their culture and people in his books. But
Hillerman grew up in Oklahoma and actually attended an Indian school, although
he was white. He spent decades in New Mexico before he started his novels, studying
the Diné because he admired their worldview and way of life and had friends
among them. He didn’t just decide to write about them because he’d read a book
or seen a movie and found them exotic. He knew the Diné and had friends among
them long before he decided to write about them—and then he learned more.
I question whether someone who expects a stranger to offer
an entrée into an entire culture will do the same. This is not the same as
asking a police officer questions about police procedure. A culture is much
more than a mere profession. And certain cultures in the United States, such as
mine, have been relentlessly exploited, twisted, and even made illegal through
the centuries by the mainstream European-American culture, which tried to wipe us
out altogether not too long ago. Why should anyone from that culture expect
that we would welcome their desire to exploit us one more time?
Do I not think that an Anglo writer can write a character or
even protagonist from another culture, especially one of the Indigenous
nations? No, I think s/he can and should, but if such a writer wants to write
such a character, it should not be because they just want to make their
character “something exotic.” If all of these writers who say they want to do
what Hillerman did would actually do it the way Hillerman did, I would have no
problem with that. But that seems to be too much work—and too much investment
in actually getting to know Native people and learn about their cultures
without having an ulterior, selfish motive. Too many writers today who write
about other cultures in their novels are appropriating those cultures
and propagating stereotypes. If your interests truly lie with other cultures,
don’t be like those authors.
Following the first rule of writing, Write What You Know, would eliminate the problem, Linda. I don't understand why writers don't follow that rule. Doing so provides authenticity and enables writing with authority. I wonder why they find Native Americans more "exotic" than German/Scot/Hawaiian/Polish (fill in the blank) Americans? It is offensive.
ReplyDeleteI think the first rule of writing is more applicable when expressed in a negative way Don't Write What You Don't Know. If you want to write about something learn all you can about it before starting to write. There are no shortcuts to writing well. Acting in an offensive way toward other writers does not help your career.
ReplyDeleteAnd if you are intrigued by a different culture, GET EDUCATED about it. You raise so many valid points, Linda.
ReplyDeleteElaine, I think the main reason we're found "exotic" now is because most people really think of us as extinct, not as living peoples with ancient cultures negotiating modern American society, as we are. Most people think we're quaint relics of the past living on reservations (sort of like zoos) when 70% of all American Indians now live in urban areas. Things like that.
ReplyDeleteWarren, you're so right. There simply are no shortcuts, no matter how much some people don't want to do the real work.
ReplyDeleteCarla, that's the thing that gets me. We Cherokee have been documented for centuries by the European-Americans who encountered us (and still are being), and we have documented ourselves. The Cherokee Nation has a huge website full of good information and a wealth of resources, and it's the first thing that pops up when you Google Cherokee, so it's clear they never even bothered to do that.
ReplyDeleteSuch a great post, Linda. You are right on with this issue.
ReplyDeleteLinda, I hope you return those books to their authors with a copy of this post instead of a blurb!
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ReplyDeleteLinda, I can't imagine why people think they can impose on you or why they would even attempt to write about a culture they're not only not familiar with, but haven't done any research on.
A few years ago I looked forward to a book a fellow Guppy was writing that would be taking place in Holmes County in our state, which is know for having more Amish than any place else, so I thought it would include the Amish. I was so wrong! There were only two Amish in it, and the author obviously knew nothing about the Amish culture. And this was a book she'd been contracted to write so obviously the publisher and editors were clueless, too.
Thanks, Sarah!
ReplyDeleteShari, I just get rid of the books. I found, if I returned them with a polite refusal, it opened the door to abuse.
Gloria, the funny thing is they never ask. They just send books or long lists of questions with the assumption that I'm bound to do what they want. My friends who give demonstrations of traditional dance or crafts at public events have found that, if they're dressed in traditional clothing, people feel free to grab their jewelry, their instruments, their clothing, even their hair--even when they ask them not to. A lot of people seem not to think that Indigenous people are real people like them with the same feelings and rights. I myself have had strangers come up and pet my hair without permission.
ReplyDeleteLinda, how rude of people to invade your personal space, or to grab their jewelry or clothes, etc. And petting your hair like you're an animal or something! What do you say to them when they do that?
Thanks for the gift of your wonderful books.
ReplyDeleteYou owe nothing to these clueless, imposing persons.
A teaching friend taught me that our high school students loved to argue and that my mantra should be "Do not engage." As another friend would tell me, "You don't need the aggravation." They can get their education through their own efforts, and should, as others have responded, write what they know.
A storytelling friend was once asked for permission to tell his personal story of his grandmother's final months. His response was, "Don't you have a grandmother? Tell her story."
Gloria, yes, it is rude, and these are adults who would never think of going up to a white person on the street and grabbing them by their hair or necklace. It's a sign of their underlying contempt and disrespect for us as human beings.
ReplyDeleteWhen they pet my hair, I grit my teeth in a grin and say, "Be careful. It's a wig. You might pull it off. I lost my real hair through illness." They back off quickly.
Mary, I love your storytelling friend's answer!
ReplyDeleteI have to agree with Warren's "Don't write what you don't know."
ReplyDeleteCharacters have to "speak" to me, and while I realize they have to be variants of myself, since there is no other source for their voices, I try to recognize when their "experience" and mine diverge, and know I have some research ahead of me.
When I first took a few writing classes, I encountered a few people who seemed to think that they were "geniuses" whose every word & thought was relevant, no matter how far off base they were. I can see some of them thinking that you (or someone else) owed it to them to validate their work.
KM, I think you've hit it right on the head in your last paragraph.
ReplyDelete"... I just get rid of the books. I found, if I returned them with a polite refusal, it opened the door to abuse."
ReplyDeleteI wish I had seen this earlier, Linda. I'd be interested to hear a little about what shape abuse might take in such a situation.
Excellent blog, as usual.
Reine,
ReplyDeleteThey'd write back, calling me names, etc., or they'd write back, demanding that I reconsider or else they would ruin my reputation in the writing/blogging community--things like that. I just found it not worth the time, so since they were all unsolicited, I stopped sending any of them back.
Linda, thank you for responding. I am guessing that I shouldn't be shocked that other writers would do this, but I am. Also, knowing how helpful you are, how helpful and kind… well, it is all the more stunning.
ReplyDeleteReine,
ReplyDeleteIn general, I've found mystery writers to be much better, though there have been a couple of exceptions. But then I was stunned to find what a generous, welcoming group mystery writers were when I first encountered them.