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5/5 Lynn Calhoon, Murder 101
5/12 Annette Dashofy, Death By Equine
5/19 Krista Davis, The Diva Serves Forbidden Fruit
5/25 Debra Goldstein, Four Cuts Too Many

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5/1 V. M. Burns
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E. B. Davis's "The Pearl Necklace" will appear in the new SinC Guppy anthology The Fish That Got Away to be released in July by Wildside Press. The anthology was edited by Linda Rodriguez.

Paula Gail Benson's monologue "Beloved Husband," from the perspective of Norton Baskin the second husband of Marjorie Kinan Rawlings (who wrote The Yearling and Cross Creek), appears in the Red Penguin Collection's An Empty Stage (released March 28, 2021).

Martha Reed's "Death by GPS" will appear in the Spring 2021 issue of Suspense Magazine, which will be released in the second week of April. Congratulations, Martha!

Susan Van Kirk has a new audiobook, A Death at Tippitt Pond, that will be released this month. Marry in Haste will be released in May by Harlequin Worldwide Mystery, as will Death Takes No Bribes in September. Congratulations, Susan.

Congratulations to Martha Reed. Her short story, "The Honor Thief" was chosen for the 2021 Bouchercon Anthology, This Time For Sure. Hank Phillippi Ryan will edit the volume, which will be released in August at the time of the convention.

Margaret S. Hamilton's short story, "Killer Weeds," appears in the January 20 edition of Texas Gardener's Seeds: From Our Garden to Yours. Congratulations, Margaret, who, if you follow Facebook know, is a superb gardener herself!

Congratulations to Jennifer J. Chow for garnering a 2021 Lefty Nomination for Best Humorous Mystery Novel. We're crossing our fingers for Jennifer!

Congratulations to Paula Gail Benson whose "Reputation or Soul" has been chosen for Malice Domestic 16: Mystery Most Diabolical anthology to be released this spring.

KM Rockwood's "Stay Safe--Very Safe" appears in this year's 2020 BOULD anthology. Congratulations, KM!

Annette Dashofy signed with agent Dawn Dowdle of the Blue Ridge Literary Agency. Congratulations, Annette!

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Sunday, April 18, 2021

Time for Beta Readers

 


With my debut novel out for a month, it’s time for the sequel…actually, according to my publisher, it was time for the sequel in January, except they didn’t mention that until August and, well, turns out I don’t write all that fast. It’s not that I don’t write fast, it’s just that the majority of what I write fast ends up being rewritten…and so on and so on. But here we are in April and I’ve written The End (twice), and I’m ready for someone else’s eyes.

At this point, a lot depends on where I think the story is. In this case, I think it’s close. It’s a sequel, so I know most of the main characters quite well. The voice needs to be consistent with Book 1, and I’m pretty clear on my plot, so I don’t think I need a developmental edit. I obtained one in the past for another novel. It was extremely expensive, but at least it took EIGHT (8) months. Seriously, the feedback was useful, but I was repeatedly promised, “just a couple more weeks.” I don’t have that kind of time, and while I could certainly find someone more reliable and less expensive, I plan to skip that step, at least for now.

Instead, I have had great success with beta readers I find through Goodreads: https://www.goodreads.com/group/show/50920-beta-reader-group. I’ve not tried the “free” option, figuring you get what you pay for, and I’m happy to pay someone to critically read my novel. The charge is usually around $100 for an 80K word book, some a little more, but always reasonable in my mind, and agreed upon in advance. It’s a self-explanatory process on the site. You post in the appropriate group what it is you’re looking for, your genre, the length of the book, and your timeframe, then you sit back and wait for replies, often they start appearing within the hour. Most have a website to check out with their rates and offerings and reviews. Some are less official looking, but provide references and I’ve had at least one good experience that way, and she was less expensive.

A few weeks later, you’ll receive a detailed review of the book. Generally a letter that lists overall impressions, and another more detailed chapter-by-chapter summary of what they like, what they don’t like, where they were confused or noticed errors. It’s not a line edit, and not a developmental edit either. This is a reader’s impression of your work, not a writer’s impression, which is quite different I think. Where a developmental editor will tell you what doesn’t work and ideas for how to fix it. A beta reader will mostly just do the former.

So, the new, as yet untitled, sequel to Fatal Intent will be off to the beta readers this weekend…then the nervous wait begins. I think I might write a prequel short story to offer on my website in the meantime…or maybe I’ll catch up on some sleep!

 

~Tammy Euliano

Author of Fatal Intent

5 comments:

Jim Jackson said...

I've never tried paid beta readers. I've had good luck with asking fans for feedback. It's a bit hit or miss, and the feedback is not as detailed as you receive. Some of the readers end up saying things like, "I fell into the story and forgot to take notes." While I could be flattered, I instead eliminate them from future beta read asks.

Beta readers often don't know what is wrong, but they can put their finger on something being wrong about a character's actions, or an inconsistency, or a slow section, or whether they liked the ending or not. I always ask them to tell me every place they stopped reading--clues to an otherwise undiagnosed sagging middle.

Good luck with your second novel, and I hope you receive lots of useful comments.

Margaret S. Hamilton said...

good luck! I'm glad you found beta readers.

Marilyn Levinson said...

I'm glad you've found this service, Tammy.

KM Rockwood said...

Since readers are an important part of the equation, this sounds like a really good option. I do have a few trusted readers, but more inout is always welome.

Grace Topping said...

Having beta readers is helpful, but having the right beta readers is crucial. I've had beta readers who wrote back to say they enjoyed it, thank you very much. That didn't help much.