It starts with a flash. I hear a voice or see
a character. This is usually indicative of a schizophrenic bout, but in my
case, it means I’m creating a short story or the first scene in a novel.
The concept can be my own or if
there is a call for a particular theme from an editor/publisher, given. A given
concept can be anything from holidays or settings, a picture or feeling, an
experience, but I’ve found that publishers stay away from specifics so that
writers can apply the concept within their own genre and subgenres. With or
without a concept, a flash in the form of a voice or character presents itself.
I usually have an idea or two already floating around in my head. But without
relating it to a conceptual framework, it has no shape.
Crime, my framework, leads to a
question. When I first hear or see a character, I ask if the character a
predator or is a victim. To determine this, I must visualize the character,
which means listening to that voice and attaching physical characteristics to
it, age, sex, physique, the look in their eyes. If I have a visual of the
character, I have to make them speak, which, like the eyes, gives me a feel for
their soul. Sometimes, the character is both predator and victim, a real situation
in the world. The big fish eats the little fish and the little fish eats a
smaller fish, etc. Yes, it’s a basic, base question starting on an animalistic
level. The strong conquer the weak. It’s survival. When I feel a character, I
assess the character’s intelligence and personality because in humans, physical
weakness isn’t necessarily the determining factor.
If the character is a predator, I ask what
type of crime the he or she would commit. If the character is a victim, I ask to
what crime the character would succumb. To make this determination, I have to
provide more character details, such as socioeconomic status, profession,
demeanor, level of success, personality, disabilities. Is she a killer, or an
embezzler? Once I determine the crime, then I relate the character and crime to
the concept, and the plot follows given whatever theme I’ve created or been prescribed.
In short, I start with characters
and then develop the plot given the characters’ traits.
How do you start writing, and how
do you create characters?
Wow, what an analytical approach. I tend to be that way in life, but not in my writing. I usually just hear a voice and a plot often - though, unfortunately not always - follows.
ReplyDeleteEB, for me it all begins with character also. I have to know my protagonist's character, first of all. When I know her/him well enough that I can hear that voice, then I'm ready to write. As I write, I learn more about other characters, and as I learn more about other characters, I understand more of the plot. That's the way it works for me.
ReplyDeleteEB, often a newspaper article or an item in the police blotter spark an idea. A couple of years ago, I read about a woman who only learned how rich her ex-husband was when she saw him interviewed on TV. My story "Kiss It Goodbye," which recently ran in Beat to a Pulp, took off from that idea. The characters and events in the story are fictitious, of course.
ReplyDeleteWe start the same way, Barb, but I go further on character. Characters have history, something there that will lead me to a plot. The plot can't come first, if for some reason it does, the character is already there waiting within it.
ReplyDeleteInteresting, Linda. I'm not ready to write as soon as you are. I guess when I've tried to be a pantser, I've gotten stuck so I wait until the plot comes to me, and then I develop both together, then I start to write.
ReplyDeleteWith me, the funny thing is that I can get the sequence of events out of order. I often think my last sentence is my first. So, at least I know where I'm going. But it also maybe that I think you should foreshadow or at least give your readers clues to where the story will lead.
Yes, I find real events often provide the catalyst for my fiction, Anita. I have to write them down immediately when something sparks my interest. But, I still need that character to lead the story.
ReplyDeleteHatteras Island recently had a murder occur, which is a rarity. Some guy from Ohio and his girlfriend with her two children came on vacation. She went missing. He reported her missing, and then drove the kids back to her parents (which was the nicest part of the whole thing). Her body was found on land, which was being developed as a new neighborhood, but with the stalled housing market was left mostly vacant. She had been strangled. Wonder who did it? Wonder if the guy is still in the U.S.?
It is easiest when a character reveals an ending to me, but I've started with a scene or a phrase. Then I had to dig for the rest like an archeologist at a site.
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