If you are interested in blogging or want to promote your book, please contact E. B. Davis at writerswhokill@gmail.com

Our May author interviews: Marla Cooper-5/3, Rhys Bowen-5/10, Cindy Brown-5/17, Martha Reed-5/24, Sherry Harris--5/31.

Saturday Guest Bloggers in May--Paty Jager-5/6 and Maren Anderson-5/13. WWK Saturday bloggers write on 5/20--Margaret S. Hamilton and on 5/27--Kait Carson. E. B. Davis blogs this month on 5/30.


“May 16, 2017 – The Women’s Fiction Writers Association (WFWA) today announced the finalists of the second annual Star Award, given to authors of published women’s fiction. Six finalists were chosen in two categories, General and Outstanding Debut. The winners of the Star Award will be announced at the WFWA Retreat in Albuquerque, New Mexico on September 23, 2017.”

In the general category, WWK’s Carla Damron was one of three finalist for her novel, The Stone Necklace. Go to Carladamron.com for more information. Congratulations, Carla!

Congratulations to our writers for the following publications:

Warren Bull's new Lincoln mystery, Abraham Lincoln In Court & Campaign has been released. Look for the Kindle version on February 3.

Shari Randall's "Pets" will be included in Chesapeake Crimes: Fur, Feathers, and Felonies anthology, which will be published in 2018. In the same anthology "Rasputin," KM Rockwood's short story, will also be published. Her short story "Goldie" will be published in the Busted anthology, which will be released by Level Best Books on April 25th.

In addition, our prolific KM will have the following shorts published as well: "Sight Unseen" in Fish Out of Water, Guppie (SinC) anthology, just released, and "Making Tracks" in Passport to Murder, Bouchercon anthology, October 2017.

Margaret S. Hamilton's short story, "Once a Kappa" was published as a finalist in the Southern Writer's Magazine annual short story contest issue. Mysterical-E published her "Double Crust Corpse" in the Fall 2016 issue. "Baby Killer" will appear in the 2017 solar eclipse anthology Day of the Dark to be published this summer prior to the eclipse in August.

Linda Rodriquez has two pending book publications. Plotting the Character-Driven Novel will be released by Scapegoat Press on November 29th. Every Family Doubt, the fourth Skeet Bannion mystery, is scheduled for release on October, 18, 2017. Look for the interview by E. B. Davis here on that date!

James M. Jackson's 4th book in the Seamus McCree series, Doubtful Relations, is now available. His novella "Low Tide at Tybee" appears February 7 as part of Lowcountry Crimes: Four Novellas, which is available for order.

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Tuesday, November 19, 2013

WRITING THE MYSTERY SHORT STORY: STORY STRUCTURE AND HOLIDAY STORIES






This final WRITING A MYSTERY SHORT STORY SERIES post of the year examines structuring a particular type of mystery short story and makes a few recommendations of short stories, collections, and anthologies for your holiday reading and gift giving pleasure.

Recently, Donna Andrews and Barb Goffman taught a short story class for the Chesapeake Chapter of Sisters in Crime. Barb was kind enough to share the outline from that class with me. It pointed out that there were two basic kinds of mystery short stories: (1) the whodunit and (2) the howdunit.

The whodunit follows the usual path of: (1) a crime being committed, (2) a sleuth investigating, (3) the detection leading to suspects, clues, red herrings, and twists, and (4) a satisfying conclusion. The howdunit shows how a crime is: (1) planned, (2) executed, and (3) goes very wrong causing the mark or culprit to be punished.

An approach to a howdunit that works well in short story format is to tell the story from the crime perpetrator’s viewpoint. Structuring this kind of short story lets you feature either: (1) a protagonist who may be a flawed, but ultimately redeemable and admirable character, or (2) a not so respectable protagonist, bitter toward the world, who gets his comeuppance in the end.

Depending upon his motives, the bad guy protagonist’s trajectory must follow one of two paths: (1) if admirable, he is a misdirected guy who restores his reputation through good works, or (2) if not so respectable, he is a bad guy set on doing another truly bad thing, only this time, he gets caught and punished for his misdeeds.

Three excellent holiday short stories that demonstrate this structure are:

B.K. Stevens’ “Little Dumber Boy” (individually published under the Fingerprints imprint by Untreed Reads, December, 2010).

Barb Goffman’s “Christmas Surprise” in the collection Don’t Get Mad, Get Even: 15 Tales of Revenge and More (Wildside Press April, 2013).

Earl Staggs’ “Caught on Christmas Eve” in the collection Short Stories of Earl Staggs: 16 Tales of Mystery from Hard Boiled to Humor (Amazon Digital Services, Inc. 2011).

SPOILER ALERT: The following analysis may tell you more than you want to know about these stories before you read them, although I tried not to give too much away. Proceed at your own discretion. Or, buy and read the stories, then come back for the analysis.

With an unredeemable protagonist, you need to establish the badness early on and make clear that the badness cannot be cured.


B.K. Stevens’ “Little Dumber Boy” opens with Will, the protagonist, pointing out that he is not dumb. No one can say he is dumb. Even though he has been apprehended and served jail time, he knows a viable plan when he sees one because: (1) he’s able to recognize opportunity, and (2) he doesn’t act upon the opportunity until he knows it is completely safe. Of course, by the end, the plan Will thought foolproof is ruined by the well-meaning actions of his gentle, unassuming, sweet Aunt Valerie, whom he discounts and takes advantage of throughout the story.


Barb Goffman’s “Christmas Surprise” features a disgruntled elf named Robbie. Barb explains in a note following the story that the characters were named for people who had been supportive of her writing, and that she also drew upon her own memories of watching Christmas television specials. Early on, Barb demonstrates that this elf is bad news through his revulsion to being back at the North Pole working among the happy, singing toy-making elves. He’s even calling Santa a sap by the end of the first page. After a prison stretch, he has returned to the North Pole because he’s thought of a way to use Santa’s inside knowledge to seek revenge on the woman who put him in jail. However, when he traces the woman by following a doll he has crafted for Santa to give to her daughter, he discovers that his victim, whom he thinks will show him mercy, has learned enough about him to turn the tables. As with many of Barb’s tales, the victim extracts a much deserved revenge in an unexpected manner.

Earl Staggs’ “Caught on Christmas Eve” is ambiguous. The story opens with the protagonist entering a department store on Christmas Eve and seeing all the places where security is lax. It’s not immediately clear whether the protagonist is casing the store, planning a heist, or watching to see what happens. Ultimately, the protagonist encounters a potential young shoplifter and confronts the boy about what he has pocketed. Even then, until the protagonist is called upon to explain his own actions, readers may have a doubt about the protagonist’s motives. I’m not going to say more about Earl’s story because you need to read it to see how he develops a whole life for his protagonist out of what that character observes.

B.K. and Barb’s protagonists are certain of themselves; to an extent, frustrated by the world in which they find themselves or at least very cognizant of the defects around them; and express themselves though internal monologues that keep the reader very much in the present. Being completely inside the protagonist's head, the reader sees the character’s sometimes warped responses, internalized hatred, and intent to manipulate the situation to his own advantage.

The secondary characters who love each protagonist surround him, showing him kindness and interacting with support and hope that the protagonist's lot in life is changing and improving. In Barb’s and B.K.’s stories, this outpouring of encouragement only enrages the protagonists more and leads them to the acts which ultimately condemn them.

I hope you’ll take the time to read these marvelously crafted stories as part of your holiday celebrations this year, and use the formats they provide to craft your own story. As you can see, even though each contains similar elements, each also is quite different and unique.  In addition, for your breaks in writing, here are some great anthologies and collections to keep you in the mystery mood:

Lori Avocato, Dana Cameron, Mary Daheim, Cait London, Suzanne Macpherson, Kerrelyn Sparks, Sugarplums and Scandal (HarperCollins Publishers 2010).

Carols and Crimes, Gifts and Grifters (Wolfmont Press 2009) (Authors Tony Burton, Austin S. Camacho, Thomas H. Cook, Herschel Cozine, Gail Farrelly, Margaret Fenton, Chris Grabenstein, Sue Ann Jaffarian, Frank Zafiro, and others).

John M. Floyd, editor, The Gift of Murder (Wolfmont Press 2009) (Authors Austin S. Camacho, Hershel Cozine, Bill Crider, Kris Neri, Randy Rawls, Carolyn J. Rose, Elizabeth Zelvin). 

Steve Hockensmith, Naughty: Nine Tales of Christmas Crime (an e-book collection of stories that previously appeared in Alfred Hitchcock Mystery Magazine or Ellery Queen Mystery Magazine).

Stuart MacBride, 12 Days of Winter: Crime at Christmas (HarperCollins Publishers 2011).

Margaret Maron, Five Christmas Gifts (Maron & Company; Ebook edition edition December, 2012).

John Mortimer, A Rumpole Christmas (Penguin Books, 2009).

Thanks for following the WRITING THE MYSTERY SHORT STORY SERIES. What are you writing and reading for the holidays?

20 comments:

James Montgomery Jackson said...

Paula, you've written a great series of posts on short stories. Now all I have to do is shift from novel-writing-mind to short-story-writing-mind and actually write one for the coming year!

~ Jim

Paula Gail Benson said...

Thanks, Jim. I appreciate the opportunity, and look forward to reading your short story.

Kara Cerise said...

Paula, thank you for writing this series about short stories. It was excellent!

I hope to read a number of the anthologies you recommended over the holidays.

Gloria Alden said...

Psula, I'm adding my thanks for this series about short stories. I've saved them to refer to again. I have Barb Goffman's "Don't Get Mad, Get Even" anthology and enjoyed it immensely. I'll have to check out the other ones you mentioned.

Paula Gail Benson said...

Thank you, Kara and Gloria. I've enjoyed your holiday stories so much and look forward to the ones you'll share with us on WWK next month!

Warren Bull said...

Nice way to end your series

E. B. Davis said...

Thanks for the summary, Paula, since I missed the meeting. Your blog made me think of the plot to my next short story. I will take a look at the anthologies and collections you listed at the end. Many look like great reads. Thanks!

Paula Gail Benson said...

Warren, part of my holiday plan is to get enough time to start your collection, Killer Eulogy. Elaine, I know you have stories coming out in several anthologies in the near future. I'm looking forward to reading them as well as your and Warren's holiday stories in WWK next month.

Jacqueline Seewald said...

Paula,

A great post! Love your analysis of mystery short fiction and also the synopsis of each story written by very talented authors.

Kaye George said...

Excellent addition to the series! These are three of the best crime short writers I know of today. Thanks, all!

Barb Goffman said...

Thanks for including my story in your analysis, Paula. You put me in very good company. I've read the stories by B.K. and Earl that you wrote about, and they both were solid. The authors surprised me with each one (and in once case, left me with a warm feeling in my heart), which isn't easy to do with a mystery writer.

I would like to expand on something you wrote regarding the howdunit short story. While a twist or an epiphany is highly desired (as in any short story), I don't think the culprit needs to be caught or redeemed. Authors may often take that approach, but it's not a hard and fast rule. Indeed, in my story "Evil Little Girl," as an example, there's a twist, but it doesn't fit the formula above. (I don't want to say any more without spoiling the story for potential readers.)

At any rate, you've had a great series highlighting the short story this summer and fall. On behalf of short-story writers and readers, THANKS!

Paula Gail Benson said...

Thank you, Jacqueline and Kaye. I have enjoyed your short stories so much in Beyond the Bo Tree: Ten Tales of Romance (Jacqueline Seewald) and
A Patchwork of Stories: 9 Tales from Sunny Side Up to Over Hard (Kaye George). I appreciate so much your support of and participation in the series.

Paula Gail Benson said...

Barb, thank you for writing such wonderful stories, participating in this series, and making an excellent point about howdunits. "Evil Little Girl" is story that lingered with me long after I read it, maybe as much from reading your note after as from the story itself. It showed how an author could take a fleeting incident from her own life and make it into gripping, great fiction. "Evil Little Girl" is included in Barb's collection, Don't Get Mad, Get Even. Please check it out!

KM said...

Thanks, not only for your useful comments, but also for the entire series.

I won the The Killer Wore Cranberry e-book offered on this site, and I'm throughly enjoying reading one story a night.

Paula Gail Benson said...

Congratulations, KM. Thanks for reading WWK and for commenting on our posts. It's always good to hear from you.

B.K. Stevens said...

Hi, Paula--
Thanks so much for another great post. It was an honor to have one of my stories compared to stories by two authors I admire so much. I've read your entire series and enjoyed it very much. Best of luck with your own excellent short stories!

Paula Gail Benson said...

Thank you, Bonnie. I always look forward to your stories. It's been a real pleasure to get to know you this year. Best wishes on your continued success.

Georgia said...

Paula, your series on short stories was excellent and I have printed out several pages for my reference folder. This last post with examples of terrific stories available in anthologies might boost sales for the holiday season. Very nicely done.

Paula Gail Benson said...

Many thanks, Georgia. I'm very much looking forward to reading your story in Mystery Times Ten (Buddhapuss Ink, 2013).

earlwstaggs said...

I'm honored, Paula, to see my story included with Bonnie's and Barb's. They're two of the best short mystery writers around. I love writing the short stuff and if -- make that when -- my novels sell in the millions, I'll continue to write short stories. Thanks for this mention and best regards to you.