Which Story Should Be Next?

by James M. Jackson

The sixth Seamus McCree novel, False Bottom, is with beta readers and soon will undergo my copyeditor’s red pen. For the first time, I have not already started another novel. I have three ideas, and I’d like your thoughts about which story I should pursue.

As followers of WWK know, I am a pantser, so when I start a novel, I know the inciting incident, but don’t really know where the story will take me. That said here are the three concepts:

Seamus McCree #7: It’s the “G” title in the series, and I already know what the title would be. (I’m not telling because my newsletter readers get that kind of news first!) Seamus’s granddaughter, Megan, is spending much of the summer at Seamus’s camp in the Upper Peninsula of Michigan. When he picks Megan up after a playdate in town, she wants to hire her grandfather to find out what happened to one of her playmates who has gone missing. Seamus eventually accepts Megan’s employ and discovers a child in desperate need, an underground economy he knew nothing about, and forces that will stop at nothing to protect their enterprise.

While the Seamus McCree novels have received very favorable reviews (the series averages 4.32 on Goodreads and 4.67 on Amazon), it isn’t exactly a best-seller.

Alternative two is to start a new series, and my idea is a spinoff from the Seamus McCree novels. Those who read Cabin Fever (Seamus McCree #3) met Niki (single name, spelled with a single ‘k’). [Spoiler alert] She’s an undercover FBI agent who would rather get the job done then kiss ass and play politics. Her background is murky, so what would happen if I gave her a billionaire father who believes his kids should make their own way in life. He’s in the middle of fending off a takeover of his business and is kidnapped.

Naturally, the FBI refuses to let her get involved because she’s family, and she goes rogue. She brings in Seamus McCree to help understand the financial aspects of the takeover when it turns out her father has given her power of attorney. Seamus is a minor character, though, since this would be the kickoff of a new thriller series staring Niki. The series titles would be something like Niki Goes (fill in the blank) – for example Niki Goes Rogue or maybe Niki’s (fill in the blank) – for example, Niki’s Billionaire Father.

The third alternative kicking around in my head is to switch from modern day suspense/thriller to a dystopian YA trilogy. I’ve been playing with this idea for some time. I know something about the world: The US has split into East and West with flyover country acting as a buffer. Split into enterprise zones, the middle of the continent supplies food and raw materials to the East and West. Interpretation of the US constitution has morphed so that only corporations have voting rights. The heroine will come from what used to be Michigan’s Upper Peninsula.

My problem with not working on this earlier continues to be that I try to be a plotter and scope out the trilogy before making any further false starts. (Several years ago, I wrote 30,000 words. It wasn’t working, and I stopped.) I am a committed pantser and will need to write the stories to learn what they are. One big difference in this case is I do know how the world changes by the end of book three, so I would be writing with that ending in mind. (Of course, by the time I am done, it might change!)

Given those three choices, which would you prefer I tackle? Vote in your comments:

[1] Seamus McCree #7 featuring granddaughter Megan and set in the U.P.

[2] Niki #1, a domestic thriller dealing with family, corporate power, and a take-no-prisoners heroine.

[3] Dystopian YA trilogy featuring a young woman in a world where the US has broken in two countries and corporations rule.

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James M. Jackson authors the Seamus McCree mystery series. Empty Promises, the fifth novel in the series—this one set in the deep woods of Michigan’s Upper Peninsula—is now available. You can sign up for his newsletter and find more information about Jim and his books at https://jamesmjackson.com.

Elizabeth J. Duncan Interview

Elizabeth Duncan’s new Shakespeare in the Catskills mystery series debuted yesterday with the release of Untimely Death, the first book of this series. Those of you who read her books know that Elizabeth writes the award-winning Penny Brannigan mystery series set in North Wales. Her seventh book in this series, Murder on the Hour, will be released in April 2016.

Since I’m a fan, I wanted to read Untimely Death. I’d categorize this series as traditional with a few cozy features, such as Rupert (a Corgi), a Catskills town, which caters to tourists, and the bungalow quarters where some of the crew lives.

Main character England-born Charlotte Fairfax designs wardrobes and costumes for the theater. The action is set at the ageing and financially unstable Jacobs Grand Hotel, which stages Shakespearian plays during the summer months. Murder’s afoot on the stage and on the grounds of the hotel.

Please welcome Elizabeth J. Duncan to WWK.                                                     E. B. Davis

Would you give our readers a jacket copy synopsis of Untimely Death?

A Catskills resort’s production of Romeo and Juliet takes a wickedly ironic turn when the leading lady is first poisoned and then stabbed. Who would extinguish the life of such a beautiful young thespian? Who wouldn’t? Seems like everyone had a motive to pull the ropes on her final curtain call.

And when suspicion falls on her youthful assistant, costume designer Charlotte Fairfax is drawn into the investigation, against the wishes of her boyfriend, the small town’s chief of police.

Charlotte Fairfax has excellent credentials as a theater wardrobe and costume designer because she worked for the Royal Shakespeare Company at Stratford-upon-Avon before coming to the U. S. Why would she cloister herself away from mainstream theater?

When she started working for the Catskills Shakespeare Theater Company she was going through an

emotional bad patch and it was the first and only job offered to her. Having grown up in an English village, she was happy to settle in an upstate New York town and she liked that she could continue working with Tudor and Jacobean costumes. However, she does do freelance work for New York productions and when Broadway calls, the big city is just a Trailways bus ride away.

Like Queen Elizabeth, Charlotte likes Corgis. Unlike many pets in cozies, Charlotte’s Rupert helps her find clues. Are Corgis trained for service like other breeds?

Corgis belong to the herding group and were originally used to herd cattle. Charlotte’s Rupert is modeled on a friend’s beloved Corgi of the same name.  

Aside from walking Rupert, Charlotte swims for exercise. Do you?

I do! I use the time going up and down the pool to think about what will happen next in the story I’m writing. And I try to fit in at least one aqua fit class a week.

Although Charlotte uses Skype to talk with her mother, in other ways she seems like a technophobe. Is she?

Not really. She uses her laptop and cell phone. However, she does prefer to sketch with pencil and drawing pad rather than on a tablet because it’s more tactile and you can pin fabric swatches to the drawing to help you envision the look, the colours are true and it’s easier to explain your concept to the director.

You impart, through Charlotte, tasty theater-insider tidbits. What research did you conduct in writing this book?

I interviewed a Canadian costume designer who has worked with many fine companies, including the Canadian Opera Company and the Shaw Festival. I’ve attended outdoor productions in Wales of Shakespearean plays performed by the Lord Chamberlain’s Men and I’m currently taking a refresher online Shakespeare course. And I really enjoyed my visit to Mood’s and the jewelry district in Manhattan and spending several days in Woodstock, New York, admiring the Catskills.

What drew you to set your book in the Catskills? Is Walkers Ridge, the town closest to the hotel, real?

When I proposed the series to the publisher, I set it in Stratford, Ontario, home of the Stratford Festival. However, the publisher asked that it be set in the Catskills. The town of Walkers Ridge is loosely based on Woodstock, New York.

Your victim is quite despicable. Do cozy readers feel better about murder victims of little character?

In a traditional mystery, the victim is generally unlikeable, so the murder somehow seems more justifiable.

Charlotte seems traditional, but she also has her quirks. Is it the artist in Charlotte that every so often compels her to act out of character?

Most of us think we know how we would act in a certain situation, but until we are tested, we don’t really know. For reasons that sometimes surprise us, in the right circumstances and in the heat of the moment, we might behave in a way that makes us later ask ourselves, “What the hell was I thinking?” Charlotte does behave somewhat impulsively on occasion, as do we all. Sometimes it works out well, and sometimes it doesn’t.

I was surprised Walkers Ridge Chief of Police and Charlotte’s boyfriend, Ray Nicholson, so readily gave up the murder investigation to the State. Doesn’t he have an ego about his work?

It’s not about his ego … it’s what he is required to do. In New York state, misdemeanor crimes may be investigated by local police but felony crimes, which include serious crimes like murder, kidnapping, money laundering, extortion and animal abuse, are always investigated by state authorities who have the facilities and training to conduct a proper investigation that will stand up in court.

The Jacobs Grand Hotel is run by Harvey Jacobs, the third generation owner. Is Harvey penny-wise and dollar stupid?

Harvey inherited a struggling business in difficult economic times and has done his best to keep it going. Every summer he thinks this will be the season when things turn around, and this year, they just might!

My favorite secondary character is Harvey’s nephew Aaron. As a twenty-something design student he assists Charlotte and director, Simon Dyer. Aaron is a real-life mix of youthful impertinence mixed with inexperience, but he possesses fresh ideas. Is he based on anyone real? Will Aaron go back to school or will he continue in the series?

Until quite recently I was a college professor, so I I’m quite familiar with people Aaron’s age. I love their energy and enthusiasm. Aaron will continue in the series, and the school will come to him as Charlotte and director Simon Dyer create a theater school.

Are Americans more gobsmacked by royalty than Brits?

I think so. In Britain, royalty is just there, although there is a deep affection for the Queen and quite a bit of interest in the Duke and Duchess of Cambridge. British royalty holds a lot of fascination for Americans.

When did you start writing fiction, Elizabeth?

I started writing fiction in 2005 with the work that became The Cold Light of Mourning, published in 2008.

Do you have any advice for unpublished writers?

When your work is as good as you can make it, enter it in writing competitions for unpublished authors.

Are you a beach or a mountain person?

Mountain, definitely. I never know what I’m supposed to do at the beach and I hate when all that sand gets in my clothes. And I look so much better in mountain gear.