Showing posts with label Broken Hearted Killers. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Broken Hearted Killers. Show all posts

Monday, February 20, 2023

FAMILY

Family by Debra H. Goldstein

Family. The Merriam Webster dictionary defines “family”as being: a group of one or more parents and their children living together as a unit; all the descendants of a common ancestor; or a group of related things. I beg to differ with the dictionary’s definition. The basis for my argument is clear if, during the past eighteen days, you read the Writers Who Kill’s group short story, Broken Hearted Killers.

 

The twists and turns, which I won’t reveal here, demonstrated the interaction that can be attributed to parents and children, but in a way that went beyond living together as a unit. The story showed how blood relationships and interpersonal relationships create different types of families. It also demonstrated the shades of grey, greed, and misunderstandings that can muddy whether the descendants of a common ancestor truly are family.

 

More importantly, Broken Hearted Killers, highlighted another type of family that the people behind Merriam Webster’s offerings never considered. It is the family of writers – a group of humans not related things – who came together behind the scenes to offer their talents, wisdom, criticism, and humor to fashion what you had the opportunity to read. Most of us have never met in person. We don’t break bread or regularly have a drink. What we normally do in terms of our writing is done in isolation. Yet, through the Writers Who Kill blog, we share thoughts and ideas with you and encourage each other. Writing the story, we put aside our differences and worked to the goal of producing a coherent piece of work.

 

It was fun. We threw in red herrings, drove our editors nuts by veering in various conflicting directions, and offered our own interpretation of what family meant in Broken Hearted Killers. We proved what has often been said about writers in general – that we are a supportive family even if we don’t meet any standard definition. Do you have “family” versions in your life that don’t meet the Merriam Webster dictionary’s definitions or is yours a model “family?”

Saturday, February 4, 2023

"Broken Hearted Killers" - Chapter Three

The following blog entry is one chapter in “Broken Hearted Killers,” a serial novella written by 16 Writers Who Kill. To read the complete story, please begin with Chapter One, published on the WWK blog on February 2, 2023.

By Shari Randall

Helen’s head swam with shock and indignation. The term “thrown under the bus” surfaced. Why would Iris say such a thing, and to Renee Peabody, the worst gossip in Oak Haven?

Moments later, there was a knock and Helen opened the door to the handsome detective.

“I’m Detective Torres, Granite Falls Police. I understand you knew Iris Vermillion. May I ask you a few questions?”

Knew. Past tense. Helen took a steadying breath. “Come in.” As he entered, Renee tailgated behind the officer. He turned and said firmly, “That will be all, Ms. Peabody,” before closing the door in her face.

Helen indicated a chair and took a seat next to Nella on the loveseat. The detective’s tone was businesslike, but his distractingly warm brown eyes radiated concern. “I’m afraid I have bad news. Iris Vermillion is dead.”

Helen was surprised by the tears that sprang to her eyes. She hadn’t considered Iris a good friend, exactly. But after they’d both moved into Oak Haven, book club had bonded them, and she felt a keen sting of loss. Nella squeezed her hand.

“When did you see Ms. Vermillion last?”

Helen gathered her thoughts. “At about 9 o’clock we walked back from book club at A Likely Story. We said good night and then she went home to the Anderson Tower, and I came here.”

“Did you see anyone waiting for Ms. Vermillion? Perhaps a car parked near the entrance?”

Helen racked her brain. Had someone been lurking in the darkness, watching for Iris? “No. No one.”

“Did anyone see you return to your condo?”

“No. I don’t think so. Not that I know of.”

“Iris told another resident if something happened to her, tell the police to look to Helen Hornsby first. Do you have any idea why she’d say that?”

Helen shook her head.

“Maybe you’re looking at that statement the wrong way,” Nella said. “Maybe Iris said to look to Helen if anything happened to her because she knew Helen was perceptive and would notice something that would help point to her killer.”

Helen twisted her hands. But what did I know? What did I see?

Detective Torres’ brows raised, and his eyes met Nella’s for a moment too long. Helen thought, well, well

The detective cleared his throat. “You think Ms. Vermillion had a premonition of danger?”

Nella glanced at Helen, who shook her head. “The last time I saw her she looked, not happy exactly, but pleased with herself.”

Detective Torres’ phone buzzed, and Helen glimpsed the message: MEDICAL EXAMINERS HERE.

“I have to go.” He handed his card to Helen and stood. “Please call me if you remember anything.” Helen and Nella followed him to the door. As Helen opened it, Renee sprang back.

The detective sighed. “Mrs. Peabody, is there anything else you’d like to share?”

“Well, er….”

“You have my card.” He walked to the elevator, his phone to his ear. Helen felt more than heard Nella’s sigh as the doors dinged closed on the handsome officer.

Renee scuttled toward her door.

“Just a second.” Helen tugged Renee’s arm. Not that she’d ordinarily want Renee in her condo, but she had to know what Renee had seen.

Renee pressed her thin lips together. They were painted red, vermillion, Helen thought, and realized that Renee had tried to emulate Iris’s look, right down to her red lipstick. But Renee lacked Iris’s presence, and the red lipstick was garish against Renee’s pale skin and creased lips. Helen also recognized in Renee’s erratic breathing a woman who’d had a shock.

“Come in, Renee,” Helen said. “I’ll make you a cup of tea,”

Helen gently escorted Renee to the table in the cozy breakfast nook off her galley kitchen as Nella brewed a mug of chamomile tea and set it before her. Renee plucked at the collar of her golf jacket.

“Renee, what happened to Iris?”

Renee wrapped her hands around the mug. “Iris and I always met for breakfast on Fridays.” Her lips quivered. “I called when she didn’t show at the Acorn Dining Room. She didn’t answer so I went to her condo. The door was ajar. I knocked and said, “Hello, Iris?” There was no answer, so I stepped inside.…”

Helen realized she was holding her breath as Renee continued.

 “I didn’t see her at first. She has that grand entryway with the chandelier and the marble table with the floral arrangement on it, right? There was a card and envelope on it. Red, like a valentine.”

“Did you see what was written on it?” Nella said.

Guilt flashed in Renee’s eyes. She took a sip of tea, then shook her head. “Of course, I didn’t read it!”

Nella and Helen shared a glance. Renee was lying.

“But then,” Renee swallowed. “I saw her in the living room, lying on her white shag rug, wearing her green silk kimono. Her head,” she whispered, “was bashed in.”

“Did she fall?”

“That’s what I thought. I ran to her.” Helen remembered that Renee was a retired nurse. “She was cold, nothing I could do. I called 911. I knew it was murder, right away.”

“How?”

Renee leaned forward. “I saw the murder weapon! Remember when she won the Citizen of the Year Award for the community garden?”

Helen exchanged a glance with Nella. Helen had pasted a smile on her face at the banquet where the award, shaped like a pine tree on a base of granite, was presented to Iris. Helen and the rest of the ten-person committee had worked for months while Iris was snowbirding in Florida, but Iris hogged all the credit.

“The heavy granite base was bloody,” Renee said. “Someone hit her with it.”

The women sat in silence for a moment, the only sound the hum of Helen’s refrigerator. Helen pictured the awards banquet—Iris wearing a revealing black dress and flirting madly with the award presenter, an older gentleman with still-broad shoulders and a military bearing. But then Iris flirted with anything in long pants.

Nella said, “They’ll get fingerprints off the award trophy.”

Renee scoffed. “Everyone knows to wear gloves. I’ve got to go.” As she stood, she jammed her hand in her jacket pocket and gasped. “I was so shocked I forgot to tell the detective….”

“What is it?” Helen said.

 “When I was leaving Iris’s condo, I stepped on this.” Renee’s trembling fingers unfolded to reveal a miniature train.


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Shari Randall: Shari Randall is the author of the Lobster Shack Mystery series from St. Martin's Press. The first book in the series, CURSES, BOILED AGAIN, won an Agatha Award for Best First Novel. As Meri Allen, she also writes the new Ice Cream Shop mystery series featuring a former CIA librarian who uses her unusual skill set to solve murders in Connecticut's Quiet Corner. Shari lives on the Connecticut shore and delights in sharing that part of the world with her readers. She is a member of Sisters in Crime and has published several short stories, the most recent of which is "A Touch of Magic" in the new Chesapeake Crimes: Magic Is Murder anthology. When she’s not cooking up a devious plot twist, Shari enjoys vintage shops, dancing, and visiting her globe-trotting children.

 

Monday, January 9, 2023

A Gift for Our Readers

Dear Readers, Do we have a surprise for you! Mark your calendars for February 1.

We’ve all played Story-Story. It’s an improv game that goes by many other titles, but the premise is similar. Players sit in a circle and each takes a turn creating a collaborative story, adding a bit to the part offered by the player ahead of them. 

 

In 1931, the Detection Club played this game and the result was “The Floating Admiral.” The tale — with the delightful classic ingredients of a vicarage, an admiral, and a village gossip — was written by Golden Age luminaries Agatha Christie, Dorothy Sayers, Victor L. Whitechurch, G. D. H. Cole, Margaret Cole, Henry Wade, John Rhode, Milward Kennedy, Ronald Knox, Freeman Willis Crofts, Edgar Jepson, Clemence Dane, and Anthony Berkeley. Each wrote a chapter, G. K. Chesterton contributed a prologue, and Berkeley had the task of bringing it all together at the end.

 


When several members of the Writers Who Kill blog gathered at Malice Domestic 32-33-34, Martha Reed and Rosalie Spielman floated the idea of writing a group story. Fourteen writer friends signed on to join Martha and Rosalie by writing one chapter each: Connie Berry, Sarah E. Burr, Shari Randall/Meri Allen, Warren Bull, Margaret S. Hamilton, Nancy Eady, Kait Carson, Marilyn Levinson/Allison Brook, Paula Gail Benson, E.B. Davis, KM Rockwood, Jim Jackson, Grace Topping, and Debra H. Goldstein. Martha and Rosalie then took the lead in organizing the project, and if you’ve ever had to organize a bunch of writers, you know what a herculean task that was. Connie kicked the project off with an intriguing first chapter, and Debra was our Berkeley, tying up the multiple nefarious strands of the story at the end. The strands were so nefarious that Connie circled back and wrote a brilliant and satisfying epilogue. As well as contributing a terrific chapter, Sarah E. Burr also designed a cover image to die for.

 

This experience was one of the most challenging writing exercises I’ve ever tried. Each author had one week to turn in their chapter. I watched eagerly as each chapter built on its predecessor. When my turn came, I had to consider the clues and events my co-writers had set in motion, integrate them into my chapter, and keep the forward momentum of the story – all in under 1,000 words. As the other chapters came in one week at a time, I was gripped by anticipation. What would happen next? I felt a kinship with all those Victorian age fans of Dickens, waiting on the docks to see if Little Nell had died. 

 


How to get the story to our readers? We took a page from Dickens and decided to serialize it. Broken Hearted Killers will run one chapter a day from February 1 to February 18 here on the Writers Who Kill blog. Think of it as our Valentine to you, our readers. 

So, what’s the story about? Here’s a teaser:

 

It’s a neighborhood book club like any other, but those innocent readers’ faces mask desperation, obsession, and secrets some will kill to keep hidden. When murder turns the page, all the clues lead to…Broken Hearted Killers.

 

See you on February 1!


Shari Randall is the author of the Lobster Shack Mystery series and, as Meri Allen, the new Ice Cream Shop mystery series. Her latest is MINT CHOCOLATE MURDER. You can follow her on Facebook and Instagram.