Last month I gave a fiction writing workshop at my library. I called it a workshop and not a class because I don't think you can teach someone to write fiction. What you can do is help a new writer develop his or her story.
Having written novels for many years, I was well aware of the numerous lessons I wanted to impart to my students. Among them: make every dialogue and scene reveal character and advance the plot; consider your pacing; include backstory only as needed. We factor in so many different elements as we write, but I didn't want to overwhelm these new writers with rules and regulations. I felt it best to dispense any "words of wisdom" as needed.
I was pleased that everyone was eager to start a project. "How do you start?" someone asked.Ah. Excellent question. I read them the opening lines of a few novels and pointed out how each author awakens the reader's interest. How jumping right into the story is the way to go. How we authors are like puppeteers as we introduce our characters, setting, time and a bit of conflict easily and simultaneously.
I had them read aloud excerpts of what they'd written so the others could critique them. I talked about the importance of forming a critique group and learning how to critique--determining what kept their interest; what took the reader or listener out of the story. And how critiquing others teaches us how to critique ourselves.
We spent time on each student's project. We analyzed story lines and discussed how to move ahead. I read them a heartfelt blog by a multi-published author I know who wrote about the excitement of writing those first few chapters then not being sure how to move ahead and not giving up. I talked about the importance of having writer friends with whom you can discuss your plot. How sometimes by simply asking for help, the perfect idea comes to mind.
I loved their enthusiasm and their willingness to continue writing. I didn't hesitate to repeat what I considered of vital importance: become part of a critique group; join a writing organization; engage your reader's emotions. I had hoped I'd set them off on their own, but was touched when they asked me to hold another workshop.
It sounds like a great class! Sometimes getting started is the hardest part.
ReplyDeleteI think it can be esp. hard for someone who's first starting out.
DeleteThank you, and other authors who are generous with their time and expertise, for sharing with the rest of us. We have such a supportive community, and I or one appreciate it.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Kathleen. I do want to help new writers. And I'm an old teacher. I think there's some truth to "once a teacher, always a teacher." Right, Susan?
DeleteGood for you! Sounds like a fun and instructive time.
ReplyDeleteMargaret, It was a totally fun experience.
DeleteI’m not surprised that they want you to come back for another workshop. Sounds like you gave them some great advice.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Shari.
DeleteI'm sure your many years of "real world" experience and your teaching abilities were very helpful to them, Marilyn. Your personality is also a plus -- I'm sure they felt very comfortable with you, which is important when being so vulnerable in sharing their work.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Korina. It took a meeting or two, but they did get comfortable sharing their work, asking questions, critiquing the others. I hope they continue to work on their projects.
DeleteI'm sure you presented an organized and enjoyable workshop. Not surprised they want to learn more from you. Also sounds like fun for you.
ReplyDeleteYour note that sometimes simply asking someone else the question and the answer will come to you resonates with me. During my working years, I'd often leave my office, go to a co-worker's, stand in the doorway, and when I had their attention, thank them for providing the answer. They all understood what had happened.
ReplyDeleteJim, You had me laughing out loud. I suppose just by asking for help, we release something inside our own minds and an answer arrives. Proof of this is that we always manage to finish writing our books.
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