Tuesday, October 21, 2025

Mystery in the Midlands: Writing Short Mystery Fiction 2025

by Paula Gail Benson


For the second year in a row, author and editor Michael Bracken joined with the Palmetto Chapter of Sisters in Crime and the Southeastern Chapter of the Mystery Writers of America to present a virtual program on writing short mystery fiction. We were delighted to have 189 registrants. Between 65 and 75 attended the sessions live on Saturday and dozens have asked for access to the recording.

The lineup of speakers and panelists was phenomenal. After resolving a few technical difficulties, we began with John M. Floyd, author of more than 500 stories that have appeared in Alfred Hitchcock’s Mystery Magazine, Ellery Queen’s Mystery Magazine, Strand Magazine, Best American Mystery Stories, Best Mystery Stories of the Year, and many other publications. He gave us a primer on plotting, saying that he began with a plot first, then populated it with interesting characters.

John recommended Ronald B. Tobias’ Twenty Master Plots and How to Build Them, which defined a story as a series of related events. For example, the king died, then the queen died was a story. However, the king died, then the queen spit on his grave became a plot, or a series of related events that introduced suspense and made the story readable and interesting.

He emphasized the importance of remaining observant because ideas might come from everywhere. When he was working for IBM, he traveled a great deal. He mentioned two instances when he encountered information he stored away for possible plots: (1) not being able to scuba dive within 24 hours before flying, and (2) losing or gaining a day when crossing the International Date Line.

Following John Floyd, Michael Bracken moderated a panel of New Voices in Short Mystery Fiction, consisting of N.M. Cedeño, whose short stories have appeared in science fiction and mystery publications; LaToya Jovena who writes about the D.C. suburbs and whose work has appeared in Ellery Queen’s Mystery Magazine and The Best American Mystery and Suspense; and Tom Milani, who since 2022 has published ten short stories, a novella, and a novel and whose work has been short-listed for a Derringer Award. N.M. spoke about being runner up for several of AHMM’s Mysterious Photo contests. She then wrote a full story which EQMM rejected but was accepted by Analog when her brother-in-law suggested she submit it there. Latoya emphasized perseverance—never giving up in spite of the obstacles. Tom mentioned how helpful his writing critique group had been, particularly for hearing when something did not seem to work for many readers.

In the last segment, I moderated a discussion with three wonderful editors: Barb Goffman, who has won the Agatha, Anthony, Derringer, Macavity, Ellery Queen Readers Award, and the Short Mystery Fiction Society’s lifetime achievement award as well as edited or co-edited 15 anthologies; Sandra Murphy, whose stores have appeared in Alfred Hitchcock’s Mystery Magazine, Ellery Queen’s Mystery Magazine, and other publications and who has edited 4 anthologies; and Josh Pachter, author, editor, and translator, who joined us from Morocco. They all emphasized the importance of following instructions but also being creative in developing a story to meet the theme. In addition, they gave viewers a lot of good information about currently pending anthologies and how to find submission calls.

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1 comment:

  1. Thanks for all the work you put into this workshop. I had the best intentions of being there in person, but I'm so glad you recorded it as I ended up with a conflict. Looking forward to listening to the sessions.

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