Having just returned from two weeks
in England, I thought I’d share three of my writerly experiences in researching
my WIP, the as-yet-untitled Book 6 in the Kate Hamilton Mystery
series.
FINDING THE PERFECT LOCATIONS
Some writers have the ability to create whole worlds out of their own imaginations. I like to see things that exist and then alter them to suit the needs of my story. My problem is remembering the details, which is why I take loads of photographs on vacation. Now that I'm home, I’ll go through my photos, mining them for locations. For my current book, I need a fourteenth-century farm. I found it at Cogges Manor Farm, tucked away in a quiet corner of Oxfordshire. First mentioned in the Domesday Book (AD 1086), the farm itself has survived for an astonishing eleven centuries. The main house was built in the fourteenth century. I want to remember the gray stone walls, the red-painted doors, and the thatched roofs. Perfect! Here are some photos:
REMINDING MYSELF OF THE WAY PEOPLE ACTUALLY SPEAK
In spite of the fact that I watch
British TV almost exclusively and read novels set in the UK, I don’t actually
live there. That means my writing is subtly influenced by American syntax and
word choices. My protagonist, Kate Hamilton, is an American antiques dealer,
but she lives full-time now in the UK, so naturally, her speech is increasingly
British rather than American. She’s beginning to call her cell phone her mobile,
for example, and she might call a cookie a biscuit. All my other
characters are native-born Brits, which is why I need to refresh my memory from
time to time by actively listening to the way people in the part of England I
write about (Suffolk) actually speak. One of my favorite examples is the past
participle of the verb get, which in the US is have gotten, as in
“Things have gotten out of hand.” People in the UK say have got
as in “Things have got out of hand.”
I love listening to people talk.
Yes, it’s eavesdropping, but for a writer, it’s pure gold. Like Americans, British
people rarely speak in complete sentences, but they do use words, phrases, and
syntax unique to that part of the world. If my dialogue is authentic, I need my
top-up.
EXPECTING THE UNEXPECTED
The most memorable parts of any
vacation are those serendipitous moments we haven’t anticipated. In my
experience, memories are made of the things that don’t go according to plan. On
our last evening in England, my husband and I stopped at a pub along the
Thames. Sitting at the table next to us was a couple with a very friendly black
lab. That got us talking. Before the night was over, we’d solved the world’s
problems. Well, maybe not, but we did find areas of agreement and disagreement.
Only later, realizing I’d seen the woman’s face on TV, did we discover we’d
been talking to two of England’s best-known actors—whose names I won’t, for the
sake of privacy, disclose This reminds me that my plot needs to have some
unexpected twists and turns as well. That’s where the fun is.
Where do you get your best plot
ideas?
Like you, I generally use real places in my stories. And like you I try to visit them and take pictures to remind myself of the little things that make the place unique or a detail than others who have been (or will be) in the area would notice, but you won't find on Google Earth.
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful trip!
ReplyDeleteDetails of places seem to pop up in my head unbidden, although I can usually trace them to my experiences. The oily, chemical smell of a thundering steel fabrication line. The scary feeling driving down the road from a relative's house that seems to be heading straight down into the rushing Monongahela River (suppose the brakes on the old pickup fail?) The jolt of the traffic light in front of the fire station suddenly flashing red as the sirens begin to scream.
I love authors who can put me in other times and places.
Sounds like a lovely trip. Last time I was there, I fell in love with the Lake District. I, too, keep my eyes and ears open, and yesterday I had a conversation with a perfect character for the book I'm working on. She's truly unique, and I will be using her quirky characteristics in my current WIP. So yes, to England or to small town America, we work to get our details right.
ReplyDeleteConnie, what a fabulous setting! So much atmosphere! That's what we try to capture for our readers - not just the geographic details, but the feel of the place, the people, and as you said, the language.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful pictures; beautiful post. I always enjoy reading about your overseas visits!
ReplyDeleteSo wonderful. I can’t wait to see how these items play out in Book 6
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