In a previous blog, I listed my favorite series and decided
to reread some of those series to pinpoint the elements that I liked and wanted
to include in my own writing. I started this exercise by rereading Julie
Mulhern’s Country Club series.
The plot is entirely character-driven. Ellison Walford
Russell, the main character (presented in first person), solves the cases
seamlessly in the course of her everyday life. There is no heart-felt
declaration of a need to get involved for the sake of justice and stick her
nose where it doesn’t belong. Ellison belongs in her close-knit country club
world. She’s one of them as her parents and grandparent were before
her. The cases presented in this series are similar to Closed-Circle mysteries,
in which a small number of people are isolated when a crime occurs and the
killer has to be one of those
present.
It is not so much the location isolation in this series, but the tightly-drawn social
circle. It’s more akin to the small-town mystery even if
located in the midst of Kansas City, MO. The police need Ellison to navigate and
translate this inner circle. That isn’t to say that she, her family, and
friends can’t be on the suspect list, but seriously, not the Walfords, whose
integrity is above suspicion.
The series is set in the 1970s when I was in college. Julie
presents an accurate portrayal of the times in terms of the generations’
attitudinal differences, changing values, and historically accurate detail. What
compels me to buy these books is the humor and complex
relationships Ellison has with her family, dog (Max), and Mr. Coffee machine. I
also appreciate Ellison’s perspective/insights. As a young woman during this
time, I failed to see the changes that were occurring around me (or like most
youth, the world revolved around me). Ellison is fifteen years older and
provides the maturity I lacked.
The humor covers slap-stick, situational, and sarcasm. The
slap-stick often involves Max, her dog. The situational when someone is trying
to put logic on emotional/chaotic scenes resulting in non sequiturs. And
sarcasm is provided by her daughter Grace to her or Ellison to her mother,
Frances. Unfortunately, those scenes are too long to present here.
Ellison’s Relationships:
·
Her contentious relationship with her mother, Frances,
usually adversarial, but at times fully harmonic. In pinch times, she emulates
her mother to get her own way, knowing how strong, overbearing, and powerful
her mother is to fight. And yet, she does not want to be like her mother.
‘“Ellison takes after Frances that way.’ Aunt Sis skewered me with a look
she’d borrowed from Mother. ‘The two of you are more alike than you’ll admit.’
Aunt Sis was wrong. So wrong. Mother was a force of nature. I was a
gentle breeze. Mother pushed and prodded and got her way. I made polite
suggestions. The wind (Aunt Sis accounted for most of the first bottle) was
talking.
‘Has Frances ever backed down?’ Aunt Sis demanded. ‘From anything?’
‘No,’ I admitted.
‘Neither have you.’” Stayin’
Alive Loc 53
“With too many martinis, there’s no telling what she’d [Frances] say. But
I’d wanted her at my back when I faced Anarchy’s family. She might be an
iron-willed, take-no-prisoners bully, but she was my bully.” Lyin’
Eyes Page 121
·
Her loving relationship with her daughter,
Grace, a teenager, who is dealing with the loss of her father, a changing
mother, and her own immaturity and growth.
“Frances Walford made a point of holding her anger close, like a mother
with a newborn baby. I frowned. Tomorrow, I’d marry the man of my dreams, and
she’d rather nurse a grudge than enjoy the weekend. Watching the haughty tilt
of her chin, I vowed to never, ever punish Grace with cold anger.” Lyin’ Eyes Page 106
·
Her honest, but nonjudgmental relationship with
her best friend, Libba, who has different, less conservative values.
Libba to Anarchy on Ellison: “Frances blames you for Ellison’s new
independence, but she’s wrong. It’s all Ellison. She finally grew a pair.” Lyin’ Eyes Page 120
·
Her exasperated relationship with her dog, Max, a
source of comic frustration and yet also a great protector.
“A deep growl had me levitating from my bed. Grrr. I wiped the sleep from
my eyes. ‘What’s wrong, Max?’….I considered my options. Max didn’t growl wolf.”
Lyin’ Eyes Page
129
·
Her love relationship with her Mr. Coffee machine—her
perfect man—fulfilling, steadfast, always on time, and who doesn’t argue.
“’Is that why you talk to Mr. Coffee?’ She [Grace] gave me a cheeky grin.
‘Among other reasons.’ Mr. Coffee was also cheerful, dependable, and
generous.
‘You realize he can’t talk back?’
‘Neither can Max, but I talk to him too.’ Mr. Coffee and Max did talk
back. That Grace didn’t hear them was not my fault.” Lyin’ Eyes Page 142
“’She
tried to grab Beau, and Max lunged for her. I thought he might rip her throat
out. Then, she ran away.’ I loved my dog.” Killing Me Softly Page 162
Ellison is in transition. She has one foot in the past due
to her upbringing and unsuccessful marriage, and one foot in the present,
taking control of her life with the realization that her future can be
something different. This transition is also echoed in the 1970s social changes
that are occurring on a national level.
·
Having been brought up to be a supportive
spouse, her art career, looked upon as a hobby, is making her famous.
“My
late husband had done things I didn’t like to think about. True, he’d been an
upstanding member of the community. True, he’d been a good provider. True, he’d
adored our daughter. But Henry’s faults as a husband outweighed the good.
He’d cheated on me with friends.
He’d cheated on me with strangers. He’d cheated on me with women who carried
handcuffs and whips. To say our marriage wasn’t in the greatest shape before I
did the unforgivable was an understatement.
My
unforgivable sin?
I earned more money than he did.” Telephone Line Loc
478
·
She wants equality in her relationships and for
herself, her daughter, and for all women.
“She stared at her hands folded in her lap. ‘Mr. Brown says I make a nice
second income.’ Her bare left hand drew my gaze.
‘It’s not a second income, is it?’
‘No,
ma’am.’” Lyin’Eyes Page
61
Anarchy, Ellison’s new significant other, has grown up in a
very similar and uncompromising way, except that his folks are the polar
opposite of Ellison’s. They are left-coast liberals who look down their noses
at the Walford’s wealth, status, and conservative views. Anarchy’s conventional
ways are his rebellion. Ellison’s unconventional ways are her rebellion, declaring
her independence and embracing her success. She empowers herself. All the
parents are aggrieved! Such lovely irony and humor. I can only hope to come
close.
In the middle of this series, Julie’s publisher decided to
quit. She is now self-publishing this series along with her new series, the
Fields’ Guide mysteries. I hope she will keep the Country Club mystery series
going. I know that many authors get bored by their first successful series and
want to write greener books, but this series is a winner. The choreography of
plot and backstory creates the best of reads.
What elements do you plant in your stories?