Things I've Learned Watching Football by Nancy L. Eady

You’ll never make the team if you don’t try out. 

Never believe your own press. 

You get four tries to make a first down

The individual playmakers get all the attention, but the game is won in the trenches. 

Every team member matters. So does every member of the support staff. 

A team that plays together brilliantly can beat a team with brilliant players. 

It takes six days of practice to play the game on the seventh. 

It takes all four quarters to win the game. 

How you play the game DOES matter. 

Much of this relates to writing, also. What do you think? 

A New Chapter for "A Bookish Moment" by Sarah E. Burr

As mystery authors, J.C. Kenney and I know the thrill of starting a new chapter, whether it’s in a cozy mystery novel or in one of our bookish adventures. This fall, we’re turning the page on a brand-new season of A Bookish Moment, and we couldn’t be more excited to share the changes, updates, and surprises we’ve lined up for our wonderful community.

Growing with Our Readers

When we launched A Bookish Moment as part of our It’s Bookish Time TV programming, our goal was simple: create a welcoming space where readers and writers could come together, celebrate storytelling, and peek behind the curtain of the publishing world. Over the seasons, we’ve had the privilege of chatting with hundreds of fantastic authors, learning about their journeys, and laughing over the quirks and delights that unite us all as book lovers.

This new season takes that spirit and builds on it. We’ve listened to our viewers, reflected on what works best, and made a few thoughtful changes to bring you even more engaging, author-centered conversations.

What’s New This Season

• A Fresh Format. We’re streamlining our A Bookish Moment episodes to make them even more dynamic and conversation-driven, giving our guests plenty of time to shine while still keeping things lively for our audience.
• Behind-the-Scenes Extras. We recently joined Substack and are discovering new ways to utilize its innovative features. Substack allows a paid subscription tier, and we’re giving it a try! While you can still subscribe for free and receive episode notifications, paid subscribers to our Substack newsletter will get access to special bonus content, including behind-the-scenes snippets about the making of the show.
• The Bookish Hour Lives On. While A Bookish Moment is now the heartbeat of our regular programming, The Bookish Hour isn’t going anywhere. We’re reserving the Hours for group chats and special events, keeping that original spirit alive for when we want to bring more voices into the conversation. In fact, we recently held our first Bookish Hour earlier this week, welcoming the authors from the Murder, They Write Facebook group. It was a fabulous, fun time, and a great place to find your next read.
• A Star-Studded Lineup. We have a stellar roster of authors joining us this season, from cozy favorites to fresh new voices making waves in the literary world. Each guest brings their own unique perspective, and we can’t wait to dive into their stories with you.

Join the Conversation

You can catch each episode of A Bookish Moment on our YouTube channel, where all past seasons are available to binge (perfect for when you’re craving a cozy chat on a rainy afternoon). For schedules, special announcements, and more ways to connect, visit www.itsbookishtime.com.

We’re grateful for the community that has grown around our shows. Every comment, every shared link, every question submitted during a live event is what makes this adventure special. This isn’t just about two authors chatting with their peers: it’s about inviting readers and writers alike into the circle.

So, grab a cup of tea, fluff your pillows, and settle in. Season Five of A Bookish Moment is here, and it’s shaping up to be our most exciting yet. We hope you’ll join us for every twist, turn, and bookish laugh along the way. 

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Do I Need An Editor? - by Judy L. Murray

I am asked this question frequently. My opinion is an emphatic yes. But it is advice newer writers often resist. Why? Sir Arthur Conon Doyle through Sherlock Holmes said, “You see, but you do not observe.” That’s a brilliant deduction.

Much of it is our human nature. You dive into a storyline you believe exhibits your special talent and originality. Without that self-confidence, a writer, new or experienced, seldom finishes the project. But I’ve learned rather quickly that my developmental editor is invaluable. I may wince as I run my eyes down the summary. At the same time I rejoice in knowing that the little niggling in the back of my mind of loopholes, missed opportunities, and enhancements I ignored until now just got validated by my editor.

Here is the advice of two very successful authors:

Lisa Scottoline is a #1 Bestselling Author, The New York Times bestselling author and Edgar award-winning author of 36 novels. She says: "Get it down, then get it good.” Lisa believes in working with an editor. “Acknowledge that editing is a crucial process, not an attack on your work…Be open to feedback.” Lisa says willingness to receive critique is a key part of the process. “Trust your experts.” Editors have specific skills that enhance your writing. Find someone you trust and work through the editing process together.

Hank Phillippi Ryan, USA Today bestselling author of 16 psychological thrillers, a five-time Agatha and Anthony Award winner, and the recipient of the Mary Higgins Clark Award, is also an Emmy-winning investigative reporter. She tells her story of enduring editorial feedback when working on her first novel. Editor Ann Leslie Tuttle at Harlequin initially found the manuscript "too light" but later called Ryan’s agent to express her interest in the memorable plot. One of Ryan’s initial problems was her first draft manuscript. Printed out, it was 723 pages long—a five- or six-inch stack of paper. Ryan was asked to rewrite the entire novel with a more serious tone, which she did in about a month. “I edited relentlessly. Took out everything that was repetitive, unoriginal, overwritten. …I wouldn’t be in the place I am today had Ann Leslie not seen a hidden talent that she encouraged and nurtured so that I could write the best book possible.”

Still not convinced you need a professional’s, not a best friend’s, advice before self-publishing or submitting? Consider these points: • An editor identifies gaps in the narrative • Refines the overall structure • Sharpens the central message • Adds clarity and polish; Protects the writer’s unique voice • Pinpoints a writer’s recurring stylistic weaknesses from passive voice to overused words

We may hire an editor for the developmental edit stage before we submit to a literary agent or publisher. We may hire an editor before we choose the self-publishing option. Regardless, make hiring a professional editor part of your commitment to produce the best you can. Later, you’ll sit back, hold that final manuscript in your hands and be proud. Very, very proud.

Writers, do you have a for instance in using an editor you would like to mention?

Judy

Judy L. Murray, author of the award winning Chesapeake Bay Mystery Series Illustration-Sidney Paiget public archives

What I Do When I Get Stuck by Marilyn Levinson

These days I'm writing more and more as a pantser. It's not something I decided to do, but how my writing method has evolved. I hold to the premise that, as writers, we train our brains to help us come up with creative solutions. Despite this, my brain often needs a bit of help. Here are a few of the "tricks" that work for me.

To begin with, it's always good to sit down to write when you know where you're heading. Even if it's only the next step your character's about to take, if it furthers the plot, it may also lead to the next plot point in your WIP, perhaps one you never considered before. With this in mind, it might be a good idea to stop writing for the day when you know what your characters will be doing next.

When I don't know where I'm going next plot-wise, I often reread the last few pages of my manuscript. This not only brings me directly into the story stream and can act as an impetus for me to continue writing--kinda like when a little kid gets a push on a swing, and then she can start swinging on her own. Rereading the last few pages I've written can help me see if I've headed off on a tangent that's taken me away from the heart of my story. If I can't find where I began to wander off the path of my main plot, now is a good time to look at my outline. My outline will remind me what needs to be covered in my WIP or changed.

What if I'm really stymied and I don't know how to move on? Then it's time to step back and stop focusing on my plot problem. Ideas often come to me in the shower, while walking, and just before I'm going to sleep.

And there's nothing shameful about asking for help. I'm part of a group of mystery writers who help each other out--with title suggestions, plot problems, and tips about pet care. Sometimes, a friend's suggestion will fit right in with my plotline. Other times the group's suggestions will trigger one of my own. Once in a while, I've no sooner written out my problem in an email and the answer comes to me before I can hit "send." Simply asking for help nudges my mind and provides me with the solution.

What do you do when you get stuck?

An Interview with James M. Jackson by E. B. Davis

 

Two years undercover. One phone call. Zero margin for error.

FBI Agent Ashley Prescott has spent two years undercover as Niki Foster, earning the trust of Patriots for Freedom—an extremist militia. As the Bureau’s only window into the group—and their Chinese linguist and arms go-between—she’s the only one who can stop an imminent weapons sale and their plot to tear America apart with targeted assassinations.

Then her estranged billionaire father vanishes after leaking classified intel—details that threaten to expose her and could only have come from inside the FBI.

HQ plans to shut down her op, claiming she blew her cover. Ashley knows what that means: the Bureau will nab a few small fry and proclaim victory, while the militia leaders disappear, the arms shipment remains a threat, and the traitor wrecks other lives.

Racing between Minnesota to track down her father and D.C. to maintain her cover, she has ten days to stop the plot and expose the FBI leaker. With ex-SEALs closing in and her own agency against her, going rogue is her only shot at saving the country—and her own survival.

When the system turns against you, justice becomes a one-woman war.

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If you’ve read James M. Jackson’s Seamus McCree mystery series, you know that he doesn’t write simplistic, sentimental books. Niki Undercover, the first book in his new Niki thriller series, exemplifies his complex plots, fast pace, and deep characterization. Set over the course of two weeks, I didn’t always know where the plot would lead. But I always knew each character because they were distinctly drawn.

 

Most people have complex family situations, but I doubt anyone has the family issues that FBI Special Agent Ashley Prescott has—and those issues interfere with her job. Being undercover, that interference could mean her death. But then, someone doesn’t care all that much about her life. She calls her father Robert because she never considered him a dad. One phone call and Ashley’s life is turned upside down, which means she might not be undercover anymore.

 

Niki Undercover is available on Kindle Unlimited.

 

Please welcome WWK’er James M. Jackson!   E. B. Davis 

 

Niki was a supporting character in the Seamus McCree series. How long have you known that you wanted Niki to become the primary character in another series?

 

Niki appeared in Cabin Fever (Seamus McCree #3) when she worked her first undercover assignment. That was 2010. She had a cameo appearance in the novella “Low Tide at Tybee,” and then appeared with Seamus in the short story “Power of Attorney,” which takes place in 2019. (All my stories occur in “real time.”)

 

That’s when Niki began advocating for her own stories. I started writing Niki Undercover, but in between drafts, I completed Granite Oath (Seamus McCree #7) and Hijacked Legacy (Seamus McCree #8). She appears in both stories, which take place after the events in Niki Undercover.

 

“I don’t pretend to be Niki. I become Niki.” (Loc. 127) Although Niki is donning a new persona, she still is an FBI agent—just not herself. Has Ashley taken method acting classes?

 

Not formally, but she’s had acting coaches. FBI training for undercover operators includes lots of role-playing. Niki learned that the best undercover agents don’t role-play; they become the part. It’s one difference that makes her so successful (and keeps her alive).

 

What is a burr haircut? Is it like a buzz cut? Why does Ashley style her hair like that?

 

A burr haircut is a type of military-inspired haircut in which the hair is trimmed evenly all around to less
than an eighth of an inch. Ashley likes it for three reasons (1) it’s super easy to maintain, (2) it gives her a tough-guy vibe that helps her undercover assignment infiltrating militias, and (3) she can wear any wig over it to fit whatever role she is playing.

 

I assume an Accuracy International Arctic Warfare Magnum is some super sniper rifle. Are wind speed and direction really factors in marksmanship?

 

With a sniper rifle that has confirmed kills from over a mile distant, gravity and wind speed have a major effect on where the bullet strikes. Over a quarter mile (easy pickings for a sniper) the bullet drops about four feet. A 15mph perpendicular wind could push the bullet almost a foot. While not as big as gravity, not getting your adjustments correct means a miss, not a hit.

 

What contention does Ashley have with her colleague Special Agent Rick (spelled-with-a-silent-P)? He has family connections, doesn’t he? How did Rick know about Seamus? It seems that even though Ashley doesn’t like Rick, she does trust him. Why?

 

Ashley thinks Rick represents much of what she does not like about the FBI. His father was an FBI big-wig; and she thinks he is a misogynist, always making crude jokes. Rick used his connections to snoop in Niki’s personnel file, where he read the information about her first undercover assignment, when she ran into Seamus. Despite that, Rick is there when she needs him. Willing to admit she might have been wrong, she learns to trust him.

 

In an ambush, Malachi recognizes exSEALS, like himself, trying to kill Ashley. What is a “bone-frog” tattoo?

 

It’s a tattoo of a frog’s X-ray showing only the bones. I tried to find an image I could paste here without violating copyright and couldn’t find one. An internet search will get you lots of pictures.

Some of Malachi’s traits are laughable. After killing a man, Malachi refuses to let Ashley drive the rental car because she isn’t on the rental contract. And Robert made him the corporate conscience. Is he a contradiction or what?

 

Malachi was raised in The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints and has a strong moral core. Robert made him the corporate conscience because he refuses to lie. Ashley soon learns that’s not the same as always telling the truth. Malachi would consider the killing regrettable, but necessary. Cheating on a contract is lying. He does not find those to be contradictions.

 

Ashley is thrust into first professional testing, then a life-threatening ambush—the source of which she is unsure of—and then a complex family situation, which in turn becomes a corporate problem when Robert goes missing. How does Ashley react to becoming CEO of her father’s company, all the while being an FBI undercover agent?

 

Ever since she was a kid and watched the Twin Towers fall, she’s thought her mission in life was to protect her country. That’s why she fought off all Robert’s attempts to bring her into the family business and chose instead to join the FBI. To her, all this other stuff distracts from her life’s work. She’s angry to find herself in such a position and overwhelmed by the responsibilities, and wants to wring Robert’s neck for putting her in a position where she doesn’t feel in control.

 

I loved the little old busybody lady next door to Robert’s house. Does every neighborhood have one?

 

I hope so. They’re the heart and soul of neighborhood-watch committees—especially when they are a committee of only one.

Why did Robert call Ashley Socrates?

 

Robert (like George W. Bush) had nicknames for everyone. He called Ashley “Little Spitfire” because as a kid she was a bundle of unfocused energy. “Socrates” is what he called Tabitha because she is always asking intelligent questions.

 

Ashley becomes aware that there are big problems at Pendergast Holdings, such as bribing federal officials, environmentally unsafe products, and embezzlement. Is this why Ashley brings Seamus into Pendergast Holdings?

 

For years, Seamus led the financial crimes division of Criminal Investigations Group and is an expert forensic accountant. Plus, she has trust issues, and he’s one of the few people in the world she does fully trust.

 

What is a “dark terminal?” What is a TOR?

 

A dark terminal is a device that connects to the dark web—a portion of the internet that standard browser searches can’t find because they require passwords. Often those devices use software like TOR, “The Onion Router,” which is a network designed to provide users with anonymity and privacy while browsing the internet. The U.S. Navy developed it to encrypt messages and split them into pieces that each travel a different route before coming together at the end point. Bad actors often use it to access the dark net.

 

Did Seamus really use the word “sprong?”

 

Yup. The sentence, which refers to Niki is, “What I hear is a coiled spring wound so tight it’ll soon sprong.”

 

How does Ashley function without sleep, especially when she also has a few drinks, such as a Manhattan? In light of all of that, why does she have a no-caffeine resolution? Seems like she needs a lot of caffeine to me.

 

Ashley is younger than you and me, so she can get away with stuff we no longer can. Her aversion to caffeine has nothing to do with health or diet. Caffeine is a stimulant, and when in sniper mode, she cannot have any stimulants in her system. Alcohol in moderation doesn’t affect her shooting nerves.

 

Ashley doesn’t follow rules, which gets her into trouble with the FBI and Pendergast Holdings. Is this also her greatest asset?

 

Ashley’s blood boils whenever she hears “because that’s the way we’ve always done it” or “because those are the rules.” Ignoring what she considers stupid rules frequently gets her into organizational trouble. Yet her success at ignoring rules is a key factor in what has made her so successful as an undercover agent.

 

CFO Gabriella says that Ashley is a “change agent.” What’s that, and why is it important?

 

In business, change agents drive organizational change, which Pendergast Holdings needs in order to transition from being a family-run corporation. Ashley’s bulldozer approach to those who want to “do what we’ve always done” accelerates the pace of necessary change.

 

So, is Ashley a lone wolf or a team player?

 

At heart, she wants to be a team player. And she’s been a successful one, having helped win college softball championships. But outside that sports setting, she has not learned to trust others. She knows that’s a personal failing, but until she learns to overcome it under stress, she goes it alone.

 

What’s next for Ashley or will she also continue to be Niki? Will Seamus be a continuing character? Will Niki be a loose end for the Patriots for Freedom?

 

In Niki Unleashed (Niki Undercover Thriller #2), Ashley remains enmeshed in the family corporation while, as Niki, she must infiltrate an ecoterrorist organization that targets corporate executives—one of which could be Ashley.

East, West, Home’s . . . Where the Mystery Is

by Paula Gail Benson

On Saturday, September 13, 2025, the Capitol Crimes Chapter of Sisters in Crime in conjunction with the Palmetto Chapter of Sisters in Crime and the Southeastern Mystery Writers of America held its first bi-coastal Crime-A-Thon. What is that, you may ask? It’s a gathering of authors, six from each coast, grouped in panels to discuss what makes the settings and characters in their novels unique.

Baron R. Birtcher

Many thanks to Karen Phillips, President of Capitol Crimes, and its board for providing the registration and Zoom forum for this meeting. Special thanks to Richard Meredith and Chris Dreith for their organization and help in keeping track of audience questions. Another grateful shout out to Penny Manson, who moderated the setting panel of West Coast authors Baron R. Birtcher, Robin Burcell, Audrey Lee and East Coast authors Yasmin Angoe, Linda Lovely, and Lynn Chandler Willis.

I had the privilege of moderating the character panel with West Coasters Bruce Borges, Vinnie Hansen, and R. Franklin James and East Coasters Carla Damron, Sally Handley, and Dorothy McFalls. (I also must admit that I was delighted the participants and audience sang “Happy Birthday” to me. I’ll always remember being serenaded coast to coast!)

Bruce Borgos

Penny and I enjoyed taking a “Family Feud” approach with our panelists. We had terrific participation and an engaged audience, and we hope to repeat the coastal face-off again next year.

Some terrific authors were involved. If you haven’t been introduced to their work yet, I urge you to check them out. Here’s a little about each one.

WEST COAST PANELISTS

Baron R. Birtcher divides his time between Hawaii and the Pacific Northwest. He is the author of the hardboiled Mike Travis series (Roadhouse Blues, Ruby Tuesday, Angels Fall, and Hard Latitudes), the Ty Dawson series (South California Purples, Fistful Of Rain, and Reckoning), as well as a stand-alone, Rain Dogs. www.facebook.com/BaronRBirtcher/

Robin Burcell

Bruce Borgos lives in Nevada, writes the Sheriff Porter Beck series, and also has written two stand-alone suspense novels. When in college, he took a course from the screenwriter of The China Syndrome, who complimented his storytelling ability by saying, “You can make a living at this.” Author Bruce Borgos

Robin Burcell, from San Francisco, California, is an FBI-trained forensic artist who has worked in law enforcement for nearly three decades as a police officer, detective and hostage negotiator. She has written thrillers, a mystery series featuring SFPD Homicide Inspector Kate Gillespie, and has co-authored books with Clive Cussler. www.robinburcell.com/

Vinnie Hansen

Vinnie Hansen lives in Santa Cruz, California, and writes the Carol Sabala, baker/sleuth mysteries. In addition, she has written two suspense novels published by Level Best Books and quite a few short stories (in four Guppy anthologies). Her second suspense novel, Crime Writer, has just been released. Vinnie Hansen – Author of ONE GUN and the Carol Sabala mystery series

R. Franklin James (also known as Rae) grew up in San Francisco and lives in Northern California. She writes three series about (1) Johanna Hudson, a genealogist; (2) Hollis Morgan, a white collar criminal who persevered to become a probate attorney; and (3) Remy Loh Bishop, who has been fired as a forensic technician for falsifying results. Author Rae James – Award-winning author of the Hollis Morgan and Remy Loh Bishop Mystery Series

R. Franklin James

Audrey Lee lives in the San Francisco Bay Area and received two degrees (including her master’s in education) from UC Berkeley. Her debut novel, The Mechanics of Memory, was nominated for the Edgar, the Anthony, the Silver Falchion, and the Lefty Award. Never to be Told will be released in May 2026. Author Audrey Lee

Audrey Lee

EAST COAST PANELISTS

Yasmin Angoe

Yasmin Angoe lives in Columbia, S.C. She grew up in Northern Virginia and is a first-generation Ghanaian American. She received the 2020 Eleanor Taylor Bland Award for Emerging Writers of Color from Sisters in Crime. Her Nena Knight series has been optioned for a TV/Film adaptation. Home - Yasmin Angoe, Author

Carla Damron lives in Columbia, S.C., writes the Caleb Knowles and Georgia Thayer series about social workers who become involved in criminal investigations, and also has written The Stone Necklace, women’s fiction that features interconnected stories (one of the last books published for the Pat Conroy imprint of the University of South Carolina Press). Carla Damron

Carla Damron

Sally Handley lives in Mauldin, S.C., and writes the Holly and Ivy series about sisters who garden and solve mysteries. She also has written a stand-alone novel, Stop the Threat, about school security. Home - sallyhandley.com

Linda Lovely lives by a lake in Upstate South Carolina. She has written the HOA mysteries, the Brie Hooker humorous mysteries, the Marley Clark traditional mysteries, a romantic suspense series called “Smart Women, Dumb Luck,” and a 1938 historical mystery. Author Linda Lovely | mystery and suspense author

Sally Handley

Dorothy McFalls (who also writes as Dorothy St. James) lives in Mount Pleasant, South Carolina, has written romance, mystery, fantasy, and romantasy, and has three mystery series featuring (1) a White House gardener, (2) the proprietor of a Southern Chocolate Shop, and (3) a librarian operating a secret book room of real books. Cozy Mystery Books | Cozy Mystery Author Dorothy St. James

Lynn Chandler Willis lives in a little cottage on a minifarm in the heart of North Carolina. She has written true crime as well as the Ava Logan mysteries and a Death Doula novel. In 2013, she was the first woman in a decade to win the St. Martin’s Press/Private Eye Writers of America Best First P.I. Novel competition. https://lynnchandlerwillis.com/

Linda Lovely

All these fabulous authors made the event a great success. Many thanks to you all!

The Capitol Crimes Chapter has now posted the video on YouTube. If you would like to watch, here’s the link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M4UCnoQara8&feature=youtu.be

What do you think? Which coast produces the best mystery protagonists and villains?

Dorothy McFalls/Dorothy St. James

Lynn Chandler Willis

Recovering Lawyers Who Are Now Writers by Debra H. Goldstein

 Recovering Lawyers Who Are Now Writers by Debra H. Goldstein

Readers are quite familiar with stories of writers who were addicted to different substances that were reflected in their writing. These include Robert Louis Stevenson (cocaine- Dr. Jerkyl and Mr. Hyde), Ken Kesey (LSD – One Flew Over the Cuckoo’s Nest), and Tennessee Williams (alcohol – e.g. Cat on a Hot Tin Roof). Many have written about their journeys to sobriety/recovery. What hasn’t been mentioned is how many authors, including myself, are recovering law students, J.D. recipients, and sometimes still practicing attorneys.

After perusing several blogs and articles for their legal beginnings, some who now write literary or crime fiction include:

Elizabeth Strout – Syracuse University College of Law

Mary Jin Lee – Georgetown 

Ben Fountain – Duke Law School 

Charles Yu – Columbia Law School 

Mohsin Hamid – Harvard Law School 

Margaret Wilkerson Sexton – U.C. Berkeley School of Law 

Adam Haslett – Yale Law School 

Jane Pek – New York University Law School 

Scott Turow – Harvard Law School

Meg Gardiner – Stanford Law School

Wallace Stevens – New York Law School

Richard North Patterson – Case Western Reserve University School of Law

John Grisham – University of Mississippi School of Law

Lisa Scottoline – University of Pennsylvania Law School 

Robert Rotstein – UCLA School of Law

Robert Bailey – University of Alabama Law School

Jasmine Guillory – Stanford Law School

Pam Jenoff – University of Pennsylvania Law School

Allison Leotta – Harvard Law School

Marjorie M. Liu – University of Wisconsin

Theodora Goss – Harvard Law School

Brad Meltzer – Columbia Law School

Marcia Clark – Southwestern University School of Law

Leslie Karst – Stanford Law School

and, of course:

Erle Stanley Gardner who started law school in Indiana, was suspended, and later went to California, where he studied law on his own and passed the California bar.

Can you add anyone, including yourself, to my list?

WRITING AND READING IN SEASON

by Korina Moss

I took this photo of an early Oct snow 

We were having a heat wave one week in August when I called my friend, who was watching ice skating on TV. She watches it every summer because it keeps her cool. She also reads books that take place in winter. I think it’s brilliant, but I just can’t do it. 

I’m a seasonal reader and TV watcher. In the dead of winter, give me Stephen King’s Storm of the Century. I know lots of friends who do Christmas in July (thanks, Hallmark TV) but my Christmas cozies stay stacked on my bedside table until Thanksgiving. I’m even a seasonal puzzler – my jigsaw puzzles reflect the season. 

My latest autumn jigsaw puzzle

I love summer, but autumn is when the cozy season begins. I was in a TJ Maxx mid-August and went down an aisle that smelled of cinnamon and spice and was instantly pulled into autumn. I thought about the autumn-only foods to come like apple crisps, cider donuts, and everything pumpkin spice. (Okay, I’m not a pumpkin spice fan, but I love others’ enthusiasm for it.) Living in New England, it’s a time to really appreciate Mother Nature. Not only is the weather great, but once the leaves turn, I literally marvel at the brilliant foliage every time I leave my house. 

My neighborhood last fall

I reminisced about everything I love about autumn to write two of my cozy mysteries set in the fall. Cheese Shop Mystery #5, Fondue or Die, takes place at the Dairy Days Festival, which was inspired by my favorite September fair. Cheese Shop Mystery #2, Gone For Gouda, takes place in October. I threw in all the autumnal vibes, including beer cheese soup and a scarecrow contest. Both books include autumn recipes like a cheesy apple pumpkin fondue and Bavarian Beer Cheese dip. 

It's fun to immerse myself in the present season along with my favorite fictional characters. It makes me appreciate each season even more as it comes around. Whether it’s a harvest fair, a Christmas cookie swap, or fireworks on the beach, I get to live out the best parts of the season on screen, through a puzzle, or between the pages of my favorite cozy mystery. 

Readers: Are you a seasonal reader? 

KORINA MOSS is the author of the Cheese Shop Mystery series set in the Sonoma Valley, which includes the winner of the Agatha Award for Best First Novel, Cheddar Off Dead, and two novels short-listed for Best Contemporary Novel. Listed as one of USA Today’s “Best Cozy Mystery Series,” her books have also been featured in PARADE Magazine, Woman’s World, and Writer’s Digest. Korina is also a freelance developmental editor specializing in cozy and traditional mysteries. To learn more or subscribe to her free monthly newsletter, visit her website korinamossauthor.com.

DEFEATING THE DRAGON: How I Overcame My Dread of the Verbal Pitch

By Lisa Malice

Like most debut authors, I am most comfortable with the written word, so, when I’m called upon to talk about my book in a short, succinct manner, I often get flustered.  

I returned from Bouchercon Sunday, buoyed by the knowledge that I had conquered this fear of the verbal pitch. How? By facing the dragon head-on and slaying it during the conference’s Author Speed Dating party.

This two-hour set-your-alarm-clock-it-is-so-early event (doors opened at 7:15 am) really did zip by as pairs of authors hop from table to table (18 of them!) offering 144 readers their best two-minute sales spiel for their book.

The night before the event, however, I still hadn’t figured out my approach—and invariably, I was nervous of needing to be not just short and succinct, but most importantly, not boring. When I asked for advice on what to say, a friend (that’s you, Martha Reed) said to mention big name authors whose names and books would resonate with readers. That suggestion hit the nail on the head, as one industry review did compare Lest She Forget to the books of two internationally bestselling authors. The challenge was to write up a pitch that included this and other key elements, including the book’s storyline, in an engaging manner.

In a moment of inspiration, I saw myself delivering a sales pitch, putting forth reasons my book was a must-read. It was fun exercise to write and practice—I felt like one of those celebrity spokeswomen hawking some wonderful new beauty product in a TV ad. 

Try to visualize the following script as such and the fun I had delivering it.

“Hello,” I said, after the starting bell rang. “Are you looking for a suspenseful mystery/thriller, something filled with twists and turns that will keep you turning pages into the wee hours of the night? “If so,” I continued, holding up my book for all to see. “Then Lest She Forget is the book for you.”

“Hi, I’m Dr. Lisa Malice. My debut psychological thriller, Lest She Forget, was released by CamCat Publishing in December of 2023 to rave reviews similar to the one you just heard and a month-long stay on Amazon’s bestseller list for new thrillers. Here’s the gist of the story.”

My back cover story teaser is the best two-paragraph synopsis of my tale, so I simply flipped over the book and read. “After surviving a car crash, Kay Smith wakes from a coma with amnesia, a battered face, and no one to vouch for her identity. Her psychiatrist is convinced that her memory loss is connected to the horrific nightmares and flashbacks haunting her. As she digs for clues to her past, Kay uncovers a shady character following her every inquiry. Who is he? What does he want from her?

“As her probe deepens, Kay realizes that everyone around her has deadly secrets to hide—even her. Emerging memories, guilty suspicions, and headlines-screaming murders push Kay to come out of the shadows and choose: Will she perpetuate a horrendous lie or risk her life to uncover the truth?”

“Intrigued? Need more convincing?” I pointed to one of the blurbs on the front of my four-page marketing brochure. “The Library Journal’s starred review said readers would be hooked by Lest She Forget from the very beginning, especially if they were fans of Paula Hawkins' Girl on the Train and Alex Michaelides' The Silent Patient.

“Wait there’s more—Lest She Forget won the 2023 Benjamin Franklin Gold Medal for Best New Voice in Fiction from the Independent Book Publishers Association.”

“But I am convinced that if you read my first chapter,” I said, opening up my brochure to reveal two pages of text, “that you will be hooked.”

“The Whopper candies you have in hand,” I said, referring to my version of swag, passed out by my speed dating partner, Sharon, “are a simple reminder of my story, that other people may tell us lies, but often the biggest whoppers are those we tell ourselves.”

I finished up, noting that Lest She Forget was on sale in the book room at a great discount and that Amazon had the best prices for the eBook, audiobook, and print.

How I pitched was important to me, too. As I spoke, I leaned forward, made eye contact, and moderated my voice to the words being spoken for specific effects (e.g., a low, slow voice to portray mystery, a more fast-paced, higher pitched voice to portray the excitement of blurbs and awards). It didn’t take long for me to get the pitch down. Somewhere around the fourth or fifth recitation, I could deliver my spiel without even glancing at my script.

My approach to pitching Lest She Forget worked on at least one reader.  When it was my partner’s turn to pitch, I walked around the table passing out her bookmarks and spotted a big word on one woman’s notepad next to my title— “BUY.”  

Author Speed Dating was a great learning experience for me. Pitching my story, as I noted earlier, was always hard for me. I would sputter and stutter and not come across well. By the end of this two-hour event, I had it down pat. Moreover, I felt like I had connected with readers, engaged them in listening and learning about my book and what it offered them as readers.

This newfound ability to verbally sell my book came in handy afterwards in various situations, such as standing in line with readers as we waited for the doors to open to the evening events, or hanging out in the hospitality room to meet my target audience--avid readers, book club members, crime fiction bloggers and podcasters.

But the biggest benefit came Saturday morning, when my newfound confidence allowed me to jump at the chance to record a podcast with Terry Shepherd, a member of the Outliers University faculty and the host of multiple podcasts targeted to fans of crime fiction—an amazing opportunity to reach a wide audience. 

Terry and I had a fun, engaging chat about me, my writing journey, the genesis of my story, then he asked me for a quick summary of Lest She Forget. My back cover teaser rolled off my tongue beautifully. I celebrated with a big smile inside and out. Terry smiled back and told me I did great. D.P. Lyle thought so, too. This co-founder of Outliers University invited me to join him for an upcoming episode of the group’s podcast, Get To Know: Interviews with the Authors You Love.

Although I came home with a stack of unsold books, I do believe I pitched myself proud, selling both me and my book. Attendees can carry only so many books home in their luggage, and usually that space is reserved for signed copies of NY Times bestselling authors appearing at Bouchercon. The proof of my assertion is the Amazon rankings for Lest She Forget’s eBooks and paperbacks, which jumped almost two thousand points each over the conference weekend into the low 1000’s--not too far off from the rankings I had early on after the launch of Lest She Forget.

Let’s hear from the gallery. Authors, as a debut author, what difficulties or fears did you have to conquer to fully sell your book to readers? Readers, what are you looking to hear from authors when they are pitching their book to you?

 

Old Habits are Hard to Break: Avoiding Too Much Backstory

By Heather Weidner

I started my professional career as a technical writer for software and processes and moved on to software testing. Everything I did had to be explained in precise step-by-step detail so that it could be replicated like a recipe. That was a habit I had to break when I started writing fiction. My early drafts had too much description, especially about mundane or routine things.

Readers need to know about your characters, but they do not have to experience every moment or hear about decades of history.

Here’s what I’ve learned about backstory through the years.

• Sprinkle it in your story. Reveal bits about your characters through dialog and what your protagonist experiences instead of from giant, expository paragraphs that interrupt the story’s flow.

• Avoid sounding like a travel brochure or a marketing campaign when you’re describing something, especially a setting. You can describe something unique to the scenery or important to the story, but make sure it fits with the flow of paragraph.

• When you’re talking about characters or setting, don’t stop the action or the momentum of the story to provide details or background. Just about everyone has flown on a plane or gone to the airport. Start the action where the story is and skip the parts that are routine.

• Avoid describing something in minute detail unless it’s important to the story later.

• I do a lot of research ahead of my writing, and I have to fight the urge to add every little fun fact. Research is important, and you learn so many neat things. Don’t waste what you found. Figure out a way to use it in a newsletter article or a blog post. Readers like to know about behind the scenes things or how you research your work. Just don’t bog your story down with stuff that doesn’t really matter.

• I have to know my main characters before I write. I always create a “biography” for them. I keep it in my character list, so I can refer to it later when I need it. It has things like eye/hair color, birthdate, graduation year, friends, pets, and favorites. There is way more information in there than ever makes it to the book. This helps if you write a series that has recurring characters. It also helps me get the ages right, especially if it is a series that spans many years. (My first novel took me five years to write and another two to get published. When I wrote it, the private eye was a Gen Xer who was in her early thirties. Time passed, and I had her a bit younger than she actually would have been when the book finally came out.)

• One quick test for too much detail or history is to look for sections in your book where you would skim or skip over. If you’re bored, chances are your reader will be too.

What other ideas would you add to my list?

Through the years, Heather Weidner has been a cop’s kid, technical writer, editor, college professor, software tester, and IT manager. She writes the Pearly Girls Mysteries, the Delanie Fitzgerald Mysteries, The Jules Keene Glamping Mysteries, and The Mermaid Bay Christmas Shoppe Mysteries. She blogs regularly with the Writers Who Kill.

Originally from Virginia Beach, Heather has been a mystery fan since Scooby-Doo and Nancy Drew. She lives in Central Virginia with her husband and two crazy dogs.

Martin Walker's An Enemy in the Village

 

 

By Margaret S. Hamilton

 

An Enemy in the Village is Martin Walker’s eighteenth Bruno, Chief of Police mystery, set in the Dordogne region of southwest France. In his previous books, Walker uses the history and geography of the area as the basis of his plots, particularly the prehistoric caves, archeological digs, and Resistance opposition to the German Army occupation in 1944. Walker also highlights environmental concerns and French agriculture, particularly the local vineyards and truffle industry.

 

In Walker’s latest book, Bruno is faced with opposition closer to home. Green activists organize a negative response to his local radio call-in show. A local businesswoman commits what appears to be suicide, though Bruno suspects otherwise. Bruno, who is a municipal policeman taking orders from the mayor of his small town, is ordered to investigate a rogue Gendarme officer who abuses women.

 

Bruno has tremendous respect and admiration for his women colleagues, all intelligent and hard-working. He is the only man at a four-star Michelin dinner with the local magistrate, a lawyer, doctor, and two successful business owners. The sumptuous food is lavishly described, course by course, during which Bruno gleans enough information from the private detective at the table to further investigate the dead woman’s demise.

 

Bruno’s basset hound, Balzac, is his truffle-hunting dog and constant companion. By chance or design, Bruno’s new lover has an enchanting female basset, George Sand. Martin Walker dedicates the book to his own basset, Violette.

 

This book represents a change for Walker. Bruno finds a new love and considers his other career options. Future children are very much on his mind, with visions of little Brunos learning how to hunt truffles and collect eggs from the chicken coop.

 

Readers and writers, have you experienced exemplary regional cuisine? Do you enjoy reading about excellent food?

 

Margaret’s short story, “Voices in the Caves,” is set in the Dordogne region of southwest France.  Gone Fishin’: Crime Takes a Holiday.

 

Home - The Official Website of Margaret S. Hamilton

 

 

Killer Questions - Regrets in Writing

 

Killer Questions – Regrets in Writing

Writers often have a desire to rewrite passages or pages until the moment of publication. Today, the Writers Who Kill discuss if there is anything they’ve ever put in a book or a short story that they’ve later regretted. 

Connie Berry - I regret that neither I nor any of my editors on A Dream of Death realized that Kate couldn't have used her cell phone to snap photos because she'd already turned it over to the police. How do those things happen???

Grace Topping - After I gave the draft of my first mystery to people to review and provide me feedback, one of them laughed and asked, "Where's the sex?" She regretted that I didn't include any, but I never did. 

Paula G. Benson - I’ve just deleted some dialogue I thought was snappy from a short story. My beta readers said it made the protagonist very unlikeable. The beta readers were right, but I regret losing the repartee.

James M. Jackson - Nope. Not that I couldn't have done many things better, but I'd rather spend time creating a future than regretting a past.

Sarah Burr - There was a time I regretted setting the stage to kill off a character in my Court of Mystery series. It bothered me so much that I had to scramble to find a way for them to survive—which I did! I'm quite proud of the creative problem-solving and mental gymnastics it took to keep them alive.

Annette Dashofy - I can’t pinpoint one thing, but I would love to have a chance to rewrite my earlier books. Somehow, I suspect that’s something a lot of us would like to do.

Kait Carson - Yes, but only in retrospect. I was fortunate to be able to revise the scene when the rights to Death by Sunken Treasure reverted before I re-released it.

Debra H. Goldstein – Of course, but I’m not telling!

Lori Roberts Herbst - Nothing I can think of in terms of content. I’ve had a few mistakes make it into publication, but they’ve all been reparable. The most embarrassing was pointed out to me by a reader in The Netherlands, who noticed that I called a character by the wrong name.

Korina Moss - I don’t think so, but if I went back and read them, I’m sure I’d have changes to make.

Nancy Eady - I wrote a short story once that reflected a little too obviously some struggles I had with a family member.  I never have tried to publish that story or show it to many people because of it. 

Mary Dutta - I’ve had to cut some great lines. I also keep an ex-husband in a drawer who will make it back into a story someday.

Molly MacRae - Not that I can think of. Maybe I have, though, and had such consuming regret that I blanked it from my memory. I wonder what it could have been?

Shari Randall - My editor asked for changes to my first Meri Allen book, The Rocky Road to Ruin, changes to a story line that she felt was too dark for a cozy. I complied, but upon reflection, I wish I'd kept it. The silver lining is that I can use that storyline in another book.

Margaret S. Hamilton - Sexual assault against women. I prefer letting the reader imagine the worst rather than putting every sordid detail on the page. No regrets.

Martha Reed - Yes. I missed including a brilliant story sub-arc in “No Rest for the Wicked,” my third Nantucket Mystery. It occurred to me after publication, dammit. The book is getting five star reviews, so readers don’t seem to notice it’s MIA, but I know the story would be better if I included it. There’s a niggling suggestion in the back of my brain that I should go back and revise it, but I’m always busily engaged in drafting my new next book. I’m not sure if I ever will.

Heather Weidner - None of my female characters and their boyfriends ever married. I guess, it's not to late to have a wedding. 

K.M. Rockwood - Not really. I haven’t mentioned some of my darker stories to sensitive relatives who might be offended.