By Skye Alexander
From the very beginnings of our books, mystery writers start setting the scenarios for our stories and planting clues. Mysteries are games we play with our readers. Your job is to try to figure out whodunnit before the reveal. Our job is to trick you, so you don’t guess correctly until the story’s climax. But although the objective is the same, we authors go about it in different ways.Plotters
and Pantsers
Unless you’re a writer, you may not be
familiar with the terms “plotter” and “pantser.” Plotters are writers who carefully plan out their stories from the
get-go, outline the events that take place, and organize the plot’s details so
everything comes together neatly at the finale. Pantsers, on the other hand, fly by the seat of their pants. They dive
into their tales without knowing where, when, or how their stories will unfold––and
that’s part of the fun. For pantsers, writing a book is an act of faith, and they
truly believe it will somehow work out in the end.
When I wrote my first mystery novel, I
chose the plotter route. I meticulously outlined every step of the journey
before I started writing the book, jotting down a paragraph about each scene in
each chapter from beginning to end. This worked out well until an afternoon when
I was driving down the highway and one of my characters slid into the passenger
seat beside me and said, “We (meaning the characters in my book) have gotten
together and decided you need to know whodunnit. I’m here to tell you it was
me.” That revelation required me to go back and rewrite the first half of the
book. It also changed me into a pantser.
Whose
Book Is This Anyway?
Writers and characters work together
to produce books. We’re co-creators with a joint goal. Like many of my writer
friends, I rely heavily on my characters to tell the story. Sometimes I refer
to myself as the “designated typist” who simply listens to them spin out their sagas
while I tap the keys as fast as I can. Often it feels like I’m a surrogate
mother who’s been chosen to birth the child of the Muse, without knowing what I’m
getting myself into. I suspect my colleagues can relate.
Characters have a way of taking over
the whodunnit game, surprising us by dropping unexpected information,
backstory, and plot twists in our laps. A bit player may push her way into a
leading role. A nice guy may reveal he’s a villain in the story’s final lap. I
believe characters also send us tips that can help us develop our stories. An
overheard snippet of conversation in a restaurant, a picture that pops up during
an internet search, or a “found” object might be a hint from a character. Once
I discovered a golf tee on the floor of my car. I hadn’t played golf since
college and no golfers had ridden in my car in years. However, the tee turned
out to be an important clue in one of my books.
The
End Game
Do authors know how our books will
turn out when we begin writing? Sometime yes, sometimes no. Agatha Christie
supposedly carefully planned her stories’ plots before penning her novels, so
she could design clever puzzles for her readers to enjoy. Stephen King, on the
other hand, believes, “Outlines
are the last resource of bad fiction writers who wish to God they were writing
masters’ theses.”
Plotters probably don’t waste as much
as time as pantsers do writing, editing, deleting, debating with themselves, and
rewriting. For me, however, handing over some control and responsibility to my
characters takes me down side streets I might not have explored on my own. It
also gives me a measure of freedom and a sense of camaraderie. I’m not in this
alone, and I trust them to see me through to the finish line.
Sometimes authors think we know where
a tale will go and where it will end––but then “the plot thickens” as the
saying goes and the path we were following leads somewhere else. That’s what
happened to me in When the Blues Come
Calling, the fifth novel in my Lizzie Crane Jazz Age mystery series,
scheduled for publication in October 2025. The suspects kept changing, and I
didn’t know whodunnit until the next to the last chapter of the book. I hope
readers won’t either.
For me, writing a novel is an exciting
adventure, an escape from the problems of the everyday world, and a search for
meaning all rolled into one. Having my characters and my readers along for the
ride makes the journey a joy.
Bio
Skye Alexander is the author of more
than 50 fiction and nonfiction books. Her stories have appeared in anthologies
internationally and her work has been translated into fifteen languages. In
2003, she cofounded Level Best Books with fellow crime writers Kate Flora and
Susan Oleksiw. Her Lizzie Crane Jazz Age mystery series includes five
traditional historical novels set in the 1920s: Never Try to Catch a Falling
Knife, What the Walls Know, The
Goddess of Shipwrecked Sailors, Running in the Shadows, and When the Blues Come Calling. Visit her
at https://skyealexander.com
I am a pantser. Otherwise, I wouldn't have had to rewrite half of my first Sarah Blair mystery because I was trying to pigeon hole a character into being the killer. I was wrong. The rewrite spoke for itself when One Taste Too Many was picked as a Woman's World book of the week.
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading and commenting, Debra. I can relate!
DeletePantser as well -- tried desperately to become a plotter to cut down on "wasted" time and wasted more time realizing that was not the way my brain works.
ReplyDeleteMine either, Jim. Thanks for reading and commenting.
DeleteHaving worked as a technical writer during my career, I learned to be very structured in my writing. I needed to have the full picture before I started writing. So it’s no wonder I am a plotter—at least for the main story. I can pants my subplots.
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading and commenting, Grace. Sounds like you've managed to combine both styles successfully.
DeleteSemi-pantser here. I usually write the beginning and the end and let the characters take me there.
ReplyDeleteGreat picture--sounds like the books are as intriguing as the author.
Thanks for the compliments, KM. I appreciate you taking time to read my post and comment.
ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting with us, Skye.
ReplyDeleteI'm a pantser. Like Jim, I tried to be a plotter. Didn't work for me. I do love it when my characters take over and all that's left for me to do is take dictation. They're clever that way.
I'm a reformed pantser, determining tent poles for the one-quarter, half, and three-quarter points of the plot, nailing the opening scene, and then letting the main characters take over.
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