Thursday, March 27, 2025

You Did What?? Using the Unexpected in Crime Fiction by Connie Berry


 


Authors of crime fiction face a number of challenges when our sleuths are not police professionals. Witnesses aren’t required to speak to them or to cooperate in any way. They can’t arrest anyone or threaten the bad guys with fines or jail time. There’s no badge to give them authority or organized back-up to call on when the situation spins out of control.

So what techniques can our characters use to deal with a bad guy who’s hostile and potentially dangerous? I faced this problem in my current WIP, A Grave Deception, the sixth Kate Hamilton Mystery (December 9, 2025). What psychological techniques could Kate use to deal with a belligerent and lethal adversary?

If you Google the problem (as I did), you’ll be told the secret is to build rapport. Fine if you have all the time in the world. But what if your sleuth must act immediately? That was my dilemma.

Fortunately, I remembered something I heard at a writers’ conference years ago. A panelist mentioned a story he’d heard on National Public Radio [Invisibilia, July 21,  2016] about coping with an unexpected attack. Here's what I remember of the story:

    One warm summer night, a group of friends was having a backyard picnic when a man burst in, wielding a gun and shouting, "Give me your money or I'll start shooting." Naturally everyone froze, and the worst part was no one actually had any money at the time. The night was sure to end in disaster until one of the women spoke up: "You look like you're having a bad day,” she said. “Would you like to join us? Sit down. Have a glass of wine." 
    Like flipping a switch, the look on the man's face changed. He put his gun in his pocket, sat down, and accepted a glass of wine. "This is good wine," he said, and then, "I think I've come to the wrong place." Later he asked, "Can I get a hug?" Several people hugged him. Then he apologized and walked out, carrying the glass of wine, which they found, placed carefully on the sidewalk.

The psychological technique used by this brave woman is called “non-complementary behavior.” The explanation is simple.

Complementary behavior means people tend to mirror each other. If someone treats you warmly, you are warm back. If they display hostility, you respond with hostility.

Non-complementary behavior means reacting in an unexpected way—breaking the pattern. Conflict is inevitable, but how we respond is powerful. Flipping the switch.

I’d used this technique before, I realized, in the second Kate Hamilton mystery, A Legacy of Murder, when one of the characters—Lady Barbara Finchley-fforde—responds to a crisis with non-complementary behavior. Her unexpected response is the pivot point that leads to the resolution of the crisis. I didn't have a name for it at the time. Now I do, and this time Kate used the technique.

Game-changer. 

Have you experienced—or demonstrated—non-complementarity? What was the result? How might you

use the concept in your WIP?

10 comments:

  1. What a perfect tool for our sleuths to use! Thanks for sharing, Connie! I may just use it later in my current WIP.

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  2. Debra H. GoldsteinMarch 27, 2025 at 8:30 AM

    Love the concept. I have used it once in a short story but not in a novel.

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  3. A great de-escalation technique. When I taught in a school for troubled teenagers, we would meet rage and threats with a calm, "Oh, my. Let's sit down with a snack and see what we can do about that. Would you rather go into the counselor's office or the time-out room?"
    Backed up, of course, by an alert crisis intervention team.

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  4. I love this because I'm using it in the middle grade book I'm writing—though I never knew the term before.

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  5. Lori Roberts HerbstMarch 27, 2025 at 11:33 AM

    Great suggestions! De-escalation is a fabulous psychological technique.

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  6. Great topic, Connie. I used non-complementary behavior to defuse some pretty fraught situations at the library. I've sometimes gotten it to work with two-year-olds having tantrums (results NOT guaranteed with those rascals).

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  7. Fascinating concept, and one I’ll be hijacking. Thanks, Connie!

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