Friday, March 14, 2025


Easter Eggs, Glimmers, and Surprises in Your Writing 
By Heather Weidner

Part of my day gig responsibilities include managing a software testing team. When I’m knee-deep in a testing project, it always brings a smile to my face when a developer slips an Easter Egg or a surprise message or screen in an application. In the early years, some of the developers would sneak one or two in to see if the testers would notice. 

I try to incorporate these glimmers of whimsey in my writing from time to time. I love pop culture and historical allusions, so many times, I’ll include an amusing reference when I name a restaurant or a minor character. I have a team of paranormal explorers who visit Fern Valley in the Blue Ridge Mountains in the Jules Keene Glamping Mysteries. Several of the ghostly adventurers’ names pay homage to the regulars on “Cheers.” In the same series, my amateur sleuth, Jules Keene is named after Demi Moore’s character in St. Elmo’s Fire and the penname of the Nancy Drew authors. Her boyfriend, Jake Evans, is named after the Michael Schoeffling character Jake in Sixteen Candles. Jules restores vintage trailers, and Jake builds tiny houses that Jules decorates with upscale amenities for her guests. The trailers all have pop culture references that include ones to Elvis, Lucy and Desi, Area 51, Robin Hood, and James Dean. All of the tiny houses have designs based on the works of J. K. Rowling, Beatrix Potter, A. A. Milne, and L. Frank Baum. 

Margaret, the English bulldog in the Delanie Fitzgerald Mysteries, is named for Margaret Thatcher. I also have an Elvis the Chihuahua in the Pearly Girls Mysteries and a Bernedoodle named Fonzie in my current work in progress. 

You’ll find state troopers and police officers in the Delanie Fitzgerald series named for characters in Bill and Ted’s Excellent Adventures and for members of Van Halen, Wham!, and Duran Duran. In the third book in this series, Glitter, Glam, and Contraband, Delanie goes undercover as a waitress at a club featuring a drag show to find out who is stealing from the talent. I had fun with the punny stage names like Amber Alert, Ana Conda, Ginger Snap, Nova Cain, and Paige Turner. 

Unexpected surprises are a fun addition to stories, and I love it when I encounter one when I’m reading.

Do you incorporate any little surprises in your writing? And do you have any that no one has noticed yet?



5 comments:

  1. I generally read right through those kind of insider jokes unless I get hit over the head with them. "Trib, how'd you get that name?" "My mother was a Trekkie fan and loved Trouble with Tribbles. What can I say?"

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  2. Nuggets are fun, if they don't impede the flow of the story.

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  3. My writing isn't sophisticated enough for me to even think about these, much less figure out how to include them. And if they are in something I read, I'm afraid I'm usually too dense to pick them up. However, they are great for those who can appreciate them. And if they don't impede the story and leave me scratching my head, I think they're a fun addition.

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  4. I love slipping those kinds of tidbits into my books, mostly to entertain myself! If someone else notices, that's a bonus.

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  5. What fun! I need to take a page from your book on this.

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