by Paula Gail Benson
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| Mary Higgins Clark |
Balancing a full-time job
with writing is difficult. As a widow raising five young children, Mary Higgins Clark would get up at five o’clock in the morning to write for an hour and a
half before feeding her children, seeing them off to school, and commuting to
her own work. William Kent Krueger rose at 5:30 am to drink coffee and write longhand at the St. Clair
Broiler before heading to his job at the University of Minnesota. The St. Clair
Broiler hosted book launches for him until it closed in 2017.
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| William Kent Krueger |
Does a set time and/or set
place encourage writing? Do particular instruments (pen and notebook, iPad or
laptop) inspire the word flow?
How about travel or motion? Scott Turow
began writing his novel Presumed Innocent in a spiral notebook as he
rode a commuter train into Chicago. Twist Phelan
writes her mystery novels and short stories while traveling the globe and
sending out blog posts about her journeys.
James Scott Bell is a prolific author of fiction and nonfiction. I attended his
presentation based on his book Write Your Novel from the Middle (given
by Sisters in Crime at the Raleigh, North Carolina Bouchercon). I found his
ideas, based on movie structure, to be thought provoking and compelling. Recently,
he released a book called Power Up Your Fiction: 125 Tips and Techniques for
Next Level Writing (Compendium Press April 23, 2023).
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| Scott Turow |
I ordered a copy and found it
interesting that Bell began with tips for plotting rather than character. His
first two chapters were called “Plotting for Pantsers” and “Pantsing for
Plotters.” He suggested that all novels/stories begin with a “disturbance.” It
didn’t have to be a big incident. It might be as simple as a phone call. He gave
the examples of Dorothy Gale hurrying back to the farm, feeling as if she was
being chased, and Scarlett O’Hara talking on the porch to the Tarleton twins
and learning that Ashley Wilkes was going to marry Melanie Hamilton.
As soon as you discovered
“the disturbance,” Bell said to determine a “rip-roaring ending.” By knowing
the end, you would have something to work toward. You might revise that last
scene as you developed your plot, but with a beginning and an end in mind, you
had the bookends of a plot.
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| Twist Phelan |
The next step was to consider
the “mirror moment.” This scene occurred near the middle of the story where the
protagonist must make a crucial decision. Either, “is this who I am or do I
want to change” or “I’m likely to perish and how will I face it”? |
| James Scott Bell |
Once you determine those
three “signposts,” Bell recommended that you brainstorm 20 to 25 “killer
scenes,” noting them on index cards. You arrange the cards to learn how the
scenes work best, selecting around 10 to provide you with organization for a
three-act structure.
I have to admit that Bell’s
tips along with his breezy, encouraging style provide some great methods for energizing
a writing practice. I’ve mentioned four of his tips. His book contains one
hundred twenty-one more.
What
do you use when you’ve hit a bump in the writing road?