Showing posts with label Best Short Story. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Best Short Story. Show all posts

Wednesday, April 23, 2025

AN INTERVIEW WITH THE AGATHA-NOMINATED SHORT STORY AUTHORS

by Paula Gail Benson

On Wednesday, April 9, we had a virtual visit with the Agatha-nominated authors nominated for Best Contemporary Novel, and on Tuesday, April 15, we met the Agatha-nominated authors for Best Debut Novel. Today, we are pleased to welcome the authors whose short stories have been nominated for an Agatha. Here is the list of the nominated stories (a link to each story is available in the Malice Domestic site):

Best Short Story

"A MATTER OF TRUST" by Barb Goffman, Three Strikes--You're Dead

"REYNISFJARA" by Kristopher Zgorski, Mystery Most International

"SATAN’S SPIT" by Gabriel Valjan, Tales of Music, Murder and Mayhem: Bouchercon 2024

"SINS OF THE FATHER" by Kerry Hammond, Mystery Most International

"THE POSTMAN ALWAYS FLIRTS TWICE" by Barb Goffman, Agatha and Derringer Get Cozy

Each of the short story authors was kind enough to answer the following question:

WHAT MAKES MYSTERY SHORT STORIES SO APPEALING TO WRITE AND APPEALING TO READ?

Many thanks to them for some fascinating insights into their craft!

Barb Goffman

BARB GOFFMAN: I love being able to tell—and to read—in a short time a complete story, with a developed plot, a satisfying ending, maybe some humor, and a character arc too. People are busy. It makes sense to give readers a full experience without demanding too much of their time. I also don't have a ton of time to write, so being able to start and finish writing a story when I have a week between
 work projects is perfect for me.

KERRY HAMMOND: Short stories are a wonderful way to get lost in a great mystery but not invest in a 300+ page book. It's a puzzle that can be wrapped up in one sitting. Writing them is terrific because writers often get thousands of great ideas floating through their heads, not all of them full length novel material.

Gabriel Valjan

GABRIEL VALJAN: I find myself more involved as a reader when I take in a mystery, as opposed to reading literary or genre fiction. There is a crime to solve and I’m the invisible Watson to the story’s Sherlock. With other genre fiction, I find myself passive, going along for the ride. Most crime fiction feels very real and close to life. Mysteries also tend to have voice and structure, so the reader and writer enter a contract. There will be twists and turns, clues and red herrings, a payoff. This contract makes me feel ‘special’ as if I had a stake in the story myself, and I have a right to be satisfied or displeased.

KRISTOPHER ZGORSKI: I think that short stories are having a bit of a resurgence, but that could just be my perception since I’ve been focusing on writing them for a few years now. With my BA in English, I certainly read my fair share of them—genre and otherwise—during my years of study, before dropping off from that habit until recently.

I think for writers, the short story offers an opportunity to experiment. One isn’t locked into a style or subject for extended periods. This means that if something doesn’t end up working, which we all know happens fairly regularly, a whole year or more hasn’t been wasted. The short story is also designed to narrow the narrative to a pinpoint focus, which is a skill unto itself. Some prefer to stay in that mode, while others want to write longer works, but even then, the lessons about focus come in handy. In many ways, I also think that the element of surprise is, I don’t want to say easier, but more readily attainable, in short fiction because really anything is on the table. One is unlikely to kill off the main character in a novel—especially a series—whereas with short fiction, this is less of a taboo.

As for readers, I think as the World becomes more and more chaotic, the struggle to carve out reading time becomes increasingly difficult. So, the short story provides a little nugget of goodness that can be enjoyed in a finite amount of time. The lack of long-term commitment also gives readers permission to read more widely, maybe in genres they wouldn’t normally try. There is just something totally freeing about knowing you can begin and end something in one sitting.

Bios:

BARB GOFFMAN is the 2024 recipient of the Golden Derringer Award for lifetime achievement, given by the Short Mystery Fiction Society. She has won the Agatha Award three times, the Macavity twice, and the Anthony and the EQMM Readers Award once each. She’s been a finalist for major crime-writing honors forty-six times, including twenty Agatha nominations (a Malice Domestic record). Her stories have appeared in Alfred Hitchcock’s Mystery Magazine, Ellery Queen’s Mystery MagazineBlack Cat WeeklyBlack Cat Mystery Magazine, and many anthologies. She works as a freelance editor, often focusing on cozy and traditional mysteries. www.barbgoffman.com

Kerry Hammond

KERRY HAMMOND is a fully recovered attorney living in Denver, Colorado. Several of her short stories have been published in mystery anthologies and her latest, “Sins of the Father,” was nominated for an Agatha Award. One of her stories was featured in The Mysterious Bookshop Presents the Best Mystery Stories of 2023. She also enjoys creating downloadable Murder Mystery party games for BlameTheButler.com.
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GABRIEL VALJAN is the author of The Company Files, and the Shane Cleary Mysteries with Level Best Books. Gabriel has been listed for the Fish Prize, shortlisted for the Bridport Prize, and received an Honorable Mention for the Nero Wolfe Black Orchid Novella Contest. He has been nominated for the Agatha, Anthony, Derringer, Shamus, and Silver Falchion Awards. He received the 2021 Macavity Award for Best Short Story and the 2024 Shamus Award for Best Paperback PI Novel. Gabriel is a member of the Historical Novel Society, ITW, MWA, and Sisters in Crime. He lives in Boston and answers to tuxedo cat named Munchkin. Home - Gabriel Valjan

Kristopher Zgorski

KRISTOPHER ZGORSKI is the founder and sole reviewer at the crime fiction book blog, BOLO Books. In 2018, he was awarded the MWA Raven Award for his work on the blog. Appearing in 2023, Kristopher’s first published short story—“Ticket to Ride”—(a collaborative work with follow blogger Dru Ann Love) won the Agatha, Anthony, and Macavity Awards. His second short story—“Reynisfjara”—is currently nominated in the Agatha Award Best Short Story category and his latest story—“Losing My Mind”—appears in Every Day a Little Death: Crime Fiction Inspired by the songs of Stephen Sondheim.
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Tuesday, April 18, 2023

Celebrating the Agatha Nominees for Best Short Story and Best First Novel, Part Two

 by Paula Gail Benson

Yesterday, on The Stiletto Gang, I began this celebration of the Agatha nominees for best short story and best first novel. Hearing from these delightful writers is like having the opportunity for a mini-craft workshop plus some wonderful insight into the many facets of authors’ lives. Each year, as I interview these nominees, I find my to-be-read list lengthening and my real appreciation of the mystery/suspense genre increasing.

If you have not yet discovered these talented folks, you are in for a treat. Thank you to all the nominees for their time and thoughtful answers.

Best Short Story

Beauty and the Beyotch,” Barb Goffman (Sherlock Holmes Mystery Magazine, Feb. 2022)
“There Comes a Time,” Cynthia Kuhn, Malice Domestic Murder Most Diabolical (Wildside Press)
Fly Me to the Morgue,” Lisa Q Mathews, Malice Domestic Mystery Most Diabolical (Wildside Press)
The Minnesota Twins Meet Bigfoot,” Richie Narvaez, Land of 10,000 Thrills, Bouchercon Anthology (Down & Out Books)
The Invisible Band,” Art Taylor, Edgar & Shamus Go Golden (Down & Out Books)

How long (word count) are the short stories you write? Are you consistent or do you vary the length?

Barb Goffman

Barb Goffman:

They vary. I’ve had flash stories published (less than 1,000 words) and I’ve had novelettes published (the longest more than 14,000 words). In recent years, my stories often fall in the range of 6,000 – 6,500 words long, especially if the place I’m submitting to hasn’t specified a maximum word count or a sweet spot.

 

Cynthia Kuhn:

It varies, ranging from a couple hundred words for flash fiction to a couple thousand for longer stories.

Lisa Q. Mathews

Lisa Q. Mathews:

A very easy question for me to answer, since “Fly Me to the Morgue” is my first published short story. So far my collected works clock in at 3,125 words, with zero deviation in length.

 

Richie Narvaez:

Early on I learned to write to the market, so many of my early stories are 4,075 to 4,099, to meet the then-typical word count of 5K. Over time I’ve become looser, writing both much shorter and much longer, as the story dictates. I’ve gotten to the point where once I conceive the general story, I know approximately how long it will be, and I can say, “Well, that might be short enough for Shotgun Honey,” or “Hmm, I have to find a place that still takes novellas.” 

Art Taylor

Art Taylor:

I was just talking recently about length and word count at a presentation for the Grand Canyon Writers chapter of Sisters in Crime—the range within that term “short story,” from flash fiction to novella and the differences in approach depending on length: number of characters, complexity of the plot, breadth of the storytelling canvas. One thing I emphasized there—important to me—is the need to let a story be the length it needs to be. That’s sometimes hard to reconcile with a call for submissions that has strict minimum and maximum word counts—I recognize that, and I’ve actually missed submitting stories because I couldn’t wrangle my draft into the right range, whether too short (why bloat it unnecessarily?) or too long (and yet trimmed down to the necessities in my mind). I’ve written everything from flash fiction to 20,000-word novellas, depending on the kind of story I’m trying to tell—and often I only discover that by writing it and seeing where it goes.

 

What are the advantages and disadvantages of submitting to a themed anthology?

Barb Goffman:

Anthologies often have tighter word requirements than magazines do. Ellery Queen’s Mystery Magazine, for instance, will take flash stories and much longer stories. In contrast, anthologies often will limit submissions to 5,000 words or ask for submissions to be between a certain minimum and maximum word count. If you don’t mind writing to a word count, then that’s not a disadvantage, but if you prefer to write what you want to write without worrying about length, then you might find it harder to place your story in an anthology.

Unlike some magazines, anthology calls always have a deadline, sometimes with quick turnaround times. If you aren’t good at writing quickly or don’t like the pressure of deadlines, then that’s a disadvantage. But if you need the pressure of a deadline or are invigorated by one, then it can be an advantage.

Anthologies can be useful because their themes can spark ideas. My story currently up for the Agatha, “Beauty and the Beyotch,” was inspired by an anthology call asking for stories involving the theater. I ended up not submitting the story to the anthology because I liked it enough when I finished it to send it to the major magazines instead. There, it might be seen by more readers and I stood the chance of higher payment, but the theme in that anthology’s call for stories was useful nonetheless.

Cynthia Kuhn

Cynthia Kuhn:

As a reader, I love to see the different “takes” on a particular topic! As a writer, I appreciate a compelling theme, especially when a story concept begins to take shape, however hazily, in response. That wisp of a potential idea to follow is always thrilling.

 

Lisa Q. Mathews:

Themed anthologies provide authors with welcome inspiration. They also offer even greater incentive to create fresh, unique stories. We contributors to Mystery Most Diabolical may have been gifted a little extra leeway, though, since the act of murder itself is, well . . . diabolical. In “Fly Me to the Morgue,” the devil is also in the details: the Purgatory, NH setting; a motley cast of sinners and saints; Pearly Gates jokes from hell; and Shrimp Fra Diavalo on the menu at Joey Romano’s Sinatra-inspired restaurant and entertainment lounge.

Richie Narvaez

Richie Narvaez:

Being given a theme can be the spark needed to finish a story. I have hundreds of ideas for characters and conflicts in my head, but sometimes the story won’t come because it hasn’t answered important questions for me: Why bother writing this? Where is the fun in this for me? When the call for Land of 10,000 Thrills came along, the idea of writing about Minnesota immediately set me to googling the Gopher State. And so this vague idea I’d carried around about a private eye and a cosplay convention caught fire when I added ingredients I found out about the theme. It gave the characters voices, gave me a setting.

A disadvantage is when the call inspires a story right away, but I know it will take 6K words and the call has a strict 4K word count. Rats!

Art Taylor:

A call for submissions to a themed anthology often helps to get the imagination going in fresh directions. For the Chesapeake Crimes anthology series, for example, I’ve written stories about the weather, about holidays, and about jobs gone wrong. It’s great to have that first nudge and see where the momentum takes you. And this is exciting from a reader’s perspective, too—seeing how widely divergent stories can be while sticking too, building from the same theme. While I wouldn’t always want to have to write to a theme, and I sometimes find myself not inspired by a particular theme, I do enjoy the possibilities and the process when a theme hits just right.


Best First Novel

The Finalist, Joan Long (Level Best Books)

Cheddar Off Dead, Korina Moss (St. Martin’s)

Death in the Aegean, M. A. Monnin (Level Best Books)

The Bangalore Detectives Club, Harini Nagendra (Constable)

Devil’s Chew Toy, Rob Osler (Crooked Lane Books)

The Gallery of Beauties, Nina Wachsman (Level Best Books)


How did you determine who your protagonist would be? Will this be part of a series?

Joan Long
Joan Long:

The Finalist is a standalone, locked-room-style mystery. I chose thirty-eight-year-old Risa Marr as my protagonist because, like so many women, she is a single mom with financial concerns. When she becomes a finalist in a competition that will award a million-dollar prize, she hopes her money woes will soon be behind her. But suddenly, she is accused of murder, and money no longer matters. She must outwit a killer or risk never seeing her young child again.

Korina Moss:

I knew I wanted to make my protagonist a woman in her thirties, who had decided to take a chance in a new place and make her dream of opening a cheese shop come true. As I created more of her backstory, it made sense that she would have a dairy background (she grew up on her family’s dairy farm), and thus be a hard worker. As a business owner and eventually an amateur sleuth, she needed to be someone with a lot of determination. With these qualities, of course she’d want to strike out on her own, so I chose France as the place where her passion for cheese began, which led to her French-inspired cheese shop. Willa’s name changed three times as I continued to flesh her out, because I wanted a name that evoked her personality. Learning how she reacted to my other characters who would become her friends, employees, shop neighbors, and possible love interests allowed me to get to know her even more.

 

Cheddar Off Dead is the first book in my Cheese Shop Mystery series. The next two books are also out now—Gone For Gouda and Curds of Prey—and another, Case of the Bleus, is available for preorder. My latest publishing contract includes Books 5 and 6, with possibly more to come.

 

M.A. Monnin

M.A. Monnin:

I knew I wanted Stefanie to be smart, comfortable around people with money, and have a connection but not work directly in archaeology, so I made her a private banker on the verge of making vice president at her bank who once interned at an archaeological dig on Crete. It is a part of a series. Death in the Aegean is the first in the Stefanie Adams, Intrepid Traveler Mysteries, and the second, Death on the Grand Canal, comes out in May.

 

Harini Nagendra:

I wasn’t even planning to write mysteries until the main protagonist in The Bangalore Detectives Club parachuted into my head one day in 2007! I was looking through a fascinating pile of archival material on historical Bangalore–for my day job, as an ecologist studying the history of Indian cities–when intrepid 19-year-old Kaveri Murthy appeared in my mind, demanding that I write a book about her–and her supportive husband and able side-kick, Ramu. The second book in the series, Murder Under a Red Moon, was just published in March 2023, and I am in the middle of writing Book 3. I hope there will be many more!

 

Rob Osler

Rob Osler:

Hayden McCall—five foot four (rounding up) and one hundred thirty pounds (again rounding up) is the hero in Devil’s Chew Toy. He is a mild-mannered, twenty-five year old middle school teacher and gay dating blogger. He is at once like me and nothing at all like me. The next book in the series, Cirque Du Slay, comes out March 9, 2024.

 

Nina Wachsman:

My original protoganist was going to be a famous rabbi, orator, scholar and playwright of the Venetian Ghetto, who was also a compulsive gambler. However, after reading his autobiography, and learning about his children, I picked his daughter, as someone I could relate to, since I too, am a rabbi’s daughter, and know the blessings and limitations of that status. He still is in my book, gambling addiction and all, but his children, including one son who goes to sea and becomes a pirate, will be characters in the next two books in the series, called Venetian Beauties. The pirate son becomes a main character in Book 2, The Courtesan’s Secret.

 

What role does setting play in your novel?

Joan Long:

Setting is tremendously important in my novel. The Finalist is set on a remote tropical island where there is no communication with the outside world and no way to leave. When a finalist is found dead, there is no one to call for help. Can my characters outwit a killer? Will any of them leave the island alive?

Korina Moss

Korina Moss:

The setting was one of the first choices I made about my series. When I discovered the California cheese trail with more than two dozen Sonoma County farms and creameries included, I knew I wanted Willa’s cheese shop, Curds & Whey, to make its home there. My fictional small town of Yarrow Glen has a dairy background, making it the underdog to the surrounding, more upscale vineyard towns in the Sonoma Valley. In this way, the town mirrors Willa’s underdog qualities, as well as those of her fellow shop owners. It also makes for a tightknit community. As the series progresses, we see Willa and her crew—Mrs. Schultz and Archie—all begin to blossom, much like the town itself. Every time a reader picks up the next book in my series, I want them to immediately feel right at home again, like they’re back with old friends in a cozy place they want to hang out in . . .  even if there’s a murder to solve!

M.A. Monnin:

The settings on Santorini and Crete are everything in Death in the Aegean. The story revolves around a gold Minoan snake goddess statue that is recently discovered at Akrotiri, on Santorini, and the tourists who go there to see it. I love to travel, and I think that really comes across in my books.

Harini Nagendra

Harini Nagendra:

1920s Bangalore, the setting for my books, is a time period I lovealong with the promise that it briefly brought, of a world full of possibility. As an ecologist, the natural life of the city plays a strong role in my books, which have a lot of details about the lakes, parks, and wooded bungalows of the colonial city. I also love the food of the times, and my books include recipes for traditional south Indian foodso the indoor settings of women, in their kitchens and homes, also form an integral part of my books.

Rob Osler:

The contemporary series takes place in Seattle. The story’s amateur sleuths race from neighborhood to neighborhood, even across Elliott Bay in a speed boat to a mysterious island estate. Not only does the geography of the city play a role, but so does the wet, drippy weather.

Nina Wachsman

Nina Wachsman:

As the setting for mystery, Venice of the 17th century is perfect, since it was then known as the capital of poison. But Venice was also famous for its beautiful women. I combined both those elements for my novel, when an artist’s commission to paint the portraits of the most beautiful women of the city leads to their murderby poison.

 

BIOS:

 

Barb Goffman has been a finalist for major short-story crime awards 38 times and has won the Agatha, Macavity, Silver Falchion, and Ellery Queen’s Mystery Magazine Readers Award. She’s an editor of Black Cat Weekly and a freelance editor, often working on cozy and traditional mysteries. In addition to her current Agatha nomination, she’s a current finalist for the Thriller Award for her short story “The Gift” from the Bouchercon anthology Land of 10,000 Thrills. Look for her story “Real Courage” in Black Cat Mystery Magazine later this year. www.barbgoffman.com.

 

Cynthia Kuhn writes the Lila Maclean Academic Mysteries and Starlit Bookshop Mysteries. Her work has also appeared in Mystery Most Diabolical, Mystery Most Edible, McSweeney’s Quarterly Concern, Copper Nickel, Prick of the Spindle, Mama PhD, and other publications. She lives in Colorado with her family, where she is professor of English at Metropolitan State University of Denver. cynthiakuhn.net.

 

Joan Long:

Joan Long is a third-generation Floridian who writes mysteries and suspense. Her debut novel, The Finalist, is an Agatha Award nominee for Best First Mystery. Joan earned a bachelor’s degree in English/Creative Writing from Florida State University and a master’s degree in Journalism and Communications from the University of Florida. Her short story “The Extra Ingredient” is in the Anthony Award-winning anthology Malice Domestic 14: Mystery Most Edible. https://joanlongbooks.com

 

Lisa Q. Mathews

Lisa Q. Mathews used to make Nancy Drew’s life miserable. Then she set her beady sights on Lizzie McGuire and Mary-Kate and Ashley—all part of early jobs as a kids’ book editor and writer-for-hire. Now Lisa is the author of an odd-couple sleuth series for adults, The Ladies Smythe & Westin, and runs an independent editing service. A co-founding member of the Chicks on the Case blog, Lisa lives in New England. https://www.lisaqmathews.com/

 

M. A. Monnin’s debut mystery Death in the Aegean has been nominated for an Agatha Best First Novel Award. Her second in the Intrepid Traveler series, Death on the Grand Canal, launches May 18th. Mary also writes short crime fiction, with her latest short story in the SinC Guppy anthology Hook, Line & Sinker. Find her on Facebook, Twitter and Instagram. www.mamonnin.com.

 

Korina Moss is the author of the Cheese Shop Mystery series (St. Martin’s Press) set in the Sonoma Valley, including the Agatha Award nominated first book, Cheddar Off Dead. Her books have been featured in PARADE Magazine, Women’s World, AARP, and Fresh Fiction. Her latest book, Curds of Prey, released on 3/28. https://korinamossauthor.com.

 

Harini Nagendra is a professor of ecology at Azim Premji University and a well-known public speaker and writer on issues of nature and sustainability. The Bangalore Detectives Club is her first crime fiction novel. The sequel, Murder Under a Red Moon, will be published in 2023. https://harininagendra.com/


Richie Narvaez is the award-winning author of Roachkiller and Other Stories, Hipster Death Rattle, Holly Hernandez and the Death of Disco, and Noiryorican. https://www.richienarvaez.com/


Rob Osler’s debut novel Devil’s Chew Toy was a Lefty Nominee for Best Debut Mystery and Agatha Award Nominee for Best First Novel and named a 2022 Year’s Best by Crime Reads, BOLO Books, PopSugar, and Book Riot. His first publication, “Analogue,” (Ellery Queen Mystery Magazine), won the 2022 Mystery Writers of America Robert L Fish Award for best short story by a debut author. Forthcoming projects include “Miss Direction” (EQMM), Cirque du Slay (sequel to Devil’s Chew Toy), and a new historical series featuring an LGBTQ+ detective. Rob’s a member of MWA and Sisters in Crime. On good days, he writes, plays tennis, and eats pie in California, where he lives with his partner and Andy Action Cat. https://robosler.com


Art Taylor is the author of two collections—The Adventure of the Castle Thief and Other Expeditions and Indiscretions and The Boy Detective & The Summer of ‘74 and Other Tales of Suspense—and On the Road with Del & Louise: A Novel in Stories, winner of the Agatha Award for Best First Novel. His short fiction has won three additional Agatha Awards as well as the Edgar, Anthony, Derringer, and Macavity Awards. He is an associate professor of English at George Mason University. www.arttaylorwriter.com.

 

Nina Wachsman majored in book illustration at the Parsons School of Design and studied under Maurice Sendak. She is currently the CEO of a digital marketing agency in New York City. She attends the Venice Art Biennale every two years and is a descendant of a chief rabbi of the Ghetto, a contemporary of her characters. She is a member of Sisters in Crime, Mystery Writers of America, and the Historical Novel Society, and has published stories in mystery and horror magazines and anthologies. The Gallery of Beauties is her debut novel, and its sequel, part of the Venice Beauties series. The Courtesan’s Secret will be released in Summer, 2023 by Level Best Books. https://ninawachsman.com

Tuesday, April 27, 2021

Finding the Secret Hiding in Each Tale by Martha Reed

Human brains are hard-wired to consider unseen possibilities. What was that sound? Was something moving in the shadows beyond the firelight? It’s probably how we survived as a species. Couple that with our ability to use our imaginations to create possible solutions and you have the definition of a mystery reader.

Suspense and mystery stories are like a puzzle, containing secrets hidden within secrets. Authors are sleight-of-hand magicians, serving up surprising revelations until the final and amazing reveal. But if there are only seven basic plotlines and story archetypes, how do authors build stories that still delight and surprise astute mystery readers?

I start building stories by thinking of them as word architecture. Once I’ve laid out the pieces of the story (e.g., characters, short- and long-term goals, plot points, and twists) I begin weaving in the simple initial clues and foreshadowing so that a reader will feel satisfied by its ending.

According to the brilliant short story writer, Art Taylor: “But an ending … you’re balancing various strands of a story by that point, working against a reader’s predictions and expectations, trying to make sure your resolution is both surprising and inevitable.”

Presenting an inevitable truth at the story’s end is what has a satisfied reader sitting back in their chair, slapping their foreheads, and saying, “Of course!”

How can a writer achieve an inevitable ending?

  1. Foreshadow the twists into the story’s initial paragraphs or section. The reader hasn’t grasped the story yet, so slipping in subtle clues sets up their unconscious expectations while still keeping the clues off the front-of-their-mind radar.
  2. State each character’s personal stake in the outcome.
  3. Use a surprise twist and up the stakes on the characters.
  4. Use another twist and up the stakes again.
  5. Mid-story, use more succinct dialogue and shorter sentences to pick up the pace. This also increases the tension.
  6. In the final third of the story, present a logical denouement that the reader has already anticipated from the story’s setup. They will feel disappointment that they figured it out. The important thing here is that they are hooked into feeling an emotion.
  7. Present the final and inevitable twist. This triggers a new and better emotion, delighted surprise.

How do you create a final and inevitable twist? This prompt has been working for me:

  1. Identify a short-term goal for each character. Share these goals with the reader as part of the general exposition. Short-term goals should be stated and obvious since they reveal each character’s desire which drives their actions.
  2. Identify a hidden long-term goal for each character. Insert and layer these hidden desires into the story in dialogue and internal monologue. This adds character depth and reader insight.
  3. The final inevitable twist is generally wrapped up in the protagonist’s hidden long-term goal. If you’ve layered enough long-term clues earlier in the story, the final twist becomes inevitable.

One last suggestion on developing a final inevitable twist is to consider using the opposite of the protagonist’s hidden long-term goal. This final twist may end up surprising even you, the writer.

What stories have you read that offered great final twists?

Monday, March 30, 2020

An Interview with the 2020 Agatha Short Story Nominated Authors!

by Paula Gail Benson

Even though we mourn the cancellation of this year’s Malice Domestic, that’s no reason not to celebrate with the Agatha nominated authors! This year’s nominated short stories offer intriguing characters facing unique situations and are written by masters of the craft. While we all have a little extra reading time, why not check out each of these delightful tales (listed in alphabetical order) at the following links:

"Alex’s Choice" by Barb Goffman in Crime Travel (Wildside Press)
"Better Days" by Art Taylor in Ellery Queen Mystery Magazine
"Grist for the Mill" by Kaye George in A Murder of Crows (Darkhouse Books)
"The Blue Ribbon" by Cynthia Kuhn in Malice Domestic 14: Mystery Most Edible (Wildside Press)
"The Last Word" by Shawn Reilly Simmons, Malice Domestic 14: Mystery Most Edible (Wildside Press)

Welcome Barb, Art, Kaye, Cynthia, and Shawn to Writers Who Kill!

How important is a plot twist in a short story?

Barb Goffman
Barb Goffman:
A plot twist can be a great way to make a short story work. You want your story to linger in the reader’s mind, and a plot twist can certainly help make that happen. That said, a plot twist isn’t essential. A great short story can have another type of ending, as I address in the next question.

Art Taylor:
Honestly, I think it can be a mistake to focus too much attention on crafting a last-minute plot twist—writers aiming for something O’Henryesque maybe but instead delivering a punchline. And to stick with that metaphor, once the punchline is delivered, the joke is over. I’ve suggested before the idea of a character twist instead: some revelation at the end of a story that helps readers to see not just a character in a new way—some submerged desire or fear, some twist of motivation—but also the entire story with a renewed perspective, letting a story linger a little longer in the mind.

Kaye George
Kaye George:
Very, very, very important. I don’t ever like to write a short story without one. Or a novel, either, for that matter. If I can do a double or triple twist, that makes me a very happy writer. To me, this is how you keep the reader interested. I never want them to be bored.

Cynthia Kuhn:
Stories without twists can be fulfilling if we admire the voice, structure, style, theme, etc. But I do adore a good twist—love being surprised. If I can guess everything that is going to happen, it often leaves me wanting more, somehow.

Shawn Reilly Simmons:
I love a good plot twist and it’s a goal of mine to always try to come up with ways to surprise the reader—I’ve always been a fan of stories where I think things are going a certain way and then they end up heading in an all new direction—that’s the most fun, I think.

What makes a satisfying conclusion to a short story?

Barb Goffman:
All of these can make a satisfying ending to a short story: A plot twist that makes the reader’s mouth drop open; a revelation that allows the reader to see the story from a different light; character growth; justice; and, simply, a conclusion that makes the reader feel something.

Art Taylor
Art Taylor:
It’s a cliche, but I think that the best endings are ones that seem both surprising and inevitable at the same time. Some of my favorite stories are ones where, when you reread them, you see the groundwork for the endings laid right there in the first lines of the story. Poe championed the idea of the single-effect story, where every aspect—every word—of a story offers service to a single effect on the reader. A satisfying ending—whether happy or sad, inspiring or tragic—is one where it’s connected to everything else in the story, all the elements working in some kind of harmony.

Kaye George:
What I strive for is a last minute twist that makes them jerk up their head and open their mouth. (Yes, I’ve embraced the singular “they” pronoun—see how useful it is? I can’t assume my reader is a male or a female, an alien, or anything else.)

Cynthia Kuhn
Cynthia Kuhn:
There’s a sense of completion—not necessarily in the protagonist’s situation but in the rightness of that final moment, image, or phrase.

Shawn Reilly Simmons:
I’m satisfied if I’ve answered at least one question the character is asking. It might not be the answer they were looking for when they got things underway, but it’s an answer that makes sense.

If a movie were made of your nominated short story, do you have an actor/actress in mind to play one of the characters?

Barb Goffman:
When I think of Maxwell, the dog in my story, I picture my late dog Scout, who was a lab/shepherd mix. But I can’t think of any famous lab/shepherd dogs. That said, if Buddy the dog from the movie Air Bud were still alive, I think he could do justice to Maxwell’s part, which requires being both athletic and cute as a button.

Art Taylor:
Oh, I’m so bad at this kind of question! But in an attempt to play along: Paul Rudd as my journalist narrator (or some slightly younger Paul Rudd? I don’t know who that would be) and Emma Stone as the bar owner who’s his love interest.

Kaye George:
My movie knowledge is rather dated, so you’ll have to reach back for these. Oscar Madison/Walter Matthau of the Odd Couple should be my MC, Kevin Grady. His neighbor could be Ellen Burstyn if she could stoop to being a cranky old woman. Okay, any two cranky old actors, one male, one female.

Cynthia Kuhn:
Allison Janney could transform into either one of the main characters. Not that she resembles them but because she’s incredibly talented!

Shawn Reilly Simmons
Shawn Reilly Simmons:
If it could be anyone (alive or dead), I’d want it to be John C. Reilly and Phillip Seymour Hoffman as the two friends from culinary school who are meeting over a special dinner to discuss the various events that have happened to them over the years. When I was living in New York many years ago, they starred together on Broadway in True West and they would switch roles from time to time throughout the production. “The Last Word” has a similar dynamic to it, where there are two characters who know each other very well, mostly talking—I think those two actors would really be great in the roles, if they could be together again.

What is the most intriguing crime you have heard of, written about, or thought of writing about?

Barb Goffman:
My story “Christmas Surprise” from my collection Don’t Get Mad, Get Even involves someone trying to break into a house by climbing down a chimney, which was partly inspired by news stories of similar attempted crimes with similar outcomes. Hint: Don’t try this yourself!

Art Taylor:
I have two here that I’ve thought before about writing. The first is the 1994 murder of Beth-Ellen Vinson  an aspiring dancer who became an escort/private dancer to help pay her way from North Carolina to New York, dreams of Broadway on her mind; her murder remains unsolved. The second is darker: the 2014 murder of a British woman by two young teens, who took Snapchat selfies and posted pictures on social media while they tortured her for several hours; coincidentally, there’s a recent film based on that murder that looks at some of the issues which drew me to this case—the social media angles specifically.

Kaye George:
I watch a lot of Dateline (love Keith Morrison’s voice!) and 48 Hours, so probably every other one. A few of my short stories were written in response to particular events. “Twelve Drummers Drumming” is supposed to be an exposure of and protest against big game hunting. “The Bathroom” was inspired by Kait Carson’s experience of getting shocked by the faucet and thrown across the bathroom, just before I took a nasty fall in the tub (using new, very slippery gel junk) and tore my rotator cuff. A lot of my stories are written for the theme for an anthology, but most of them have an origin in my own experiences…somewhere.

Cynthia Kuhn:
The 1843 double murder upon which Margaret Atwood’s amazing book Alias Grace is based. It was sensationalized in the news of the day and involved multiple love triangles, a case of amnesia (perhaps), and even a potentially supernatural explanation. I wrote about her fictionalization of the real events in my dissertation—it is an unforgettable story.

Shawn Reilly Simmons:
This is a tough one because I’ve been fascinated by crime, both true and fictional, for as long as I can remember. I listen to True Crime podcasts and have seen every episode of Forensic Files…and my bookshelves are 98% crime fiction… I’d have to say the case that I’ve read the most about, and still wonder about on a frequent basis is Elizabeth Short, the Black Dahlia. I continue to hold out hope that someday her killer will be revealed.

Thank you all for taking the time to be with us, answering questions, and all the wonderful stories you have written! And, thank you for letting us celebrate with you digitally until we can be together in person!

AUTHOR BIOS:

Barb Goffman:
Barb Goffman edits mysteries by day and writes them by night. She’s won the Agatha, Macavity, and Silver Falchion awards for her short stories, and she’s been a finalist for national crime-writing awards twenty-eight times, including thirteen times for the Agatha (a category record). Her work has appeared in many magazines and anthologies, including Ellery Queen’s Mystery Magazine, Alfred Hitchcock’s Mystery MagazineBlack Cat Mystery Magazine, and the 2019 anthology Crime Travel, which Barb also edited. To support her writing habit, Barb runs a freelance editing service, specializing in crime fiction. She lives with her dog in Virginia.

Art Taylor:
Art Taylor is the author of the story collection The Boy Detective & The Summer of ’74 and Other Tales of Suspense and of the novel in stories On the Road with Del & Louise, winner of the Agatha Award for Best First NovelHe won the 2019 Edgar Award for Best Short Story for "English 398: Fiction Workshop," originally published in Ellery Queen's Mystery Magazine, and his other awards have included the Agatha, the Anthony, the Derringer, and the Macavity.  He is an associate professor of English at George Mason University. 

Kaye George:
Kaye George is a national-bestselling, multiple-award-winning author of pre-history, traditional, and cozy mysteries (latest is Revenge Is Sweet from Lyrical Press). Her short stories have appeared online, in anthologies, magazines, her own collection, her own anthology, DAY OF THE DARK, and in A MURDER OF CROWS. She is a member of Sisters in Crime, Smoking Guns chapter, Guppies chapter, Authors Guild of TN, Knoxville Writers Group, Austin Mystery Writers, and lives in Knoxville, TN.

Cynthia Kuhn:
Cynthia Kuhn writes the Lila Maclean Academic Mysteries: The Semester of Our Discontent, The Art of Vanishing, The Spirit in Question, The Subject of Malice, and The Study of Secrets. Her work has also appeared in Mystery Most Edible, McSweeney’s Quarterly Concern, Literary Mama, Copper Nickel, Prick of the Spindle, Mama PhD, and other publications. Honors include an Agatha Award (best first novel), William F. Deeck-Malice Domestic Grant, and Lefty Award nominations (best humorous mystery). Originally from upstate New York, she lives in Colorado with her family. For more information, please visit cynthiakuhn.net.

Shawn Reilly Simmons:
Shawn Reilly Simmons is the author of The Red Carpet Catering Mysteries featuring Penelope Sutherland, an on-set movie caterer, and of several short stories appearing in a variety of anthologies including the Malice Domestic, Best New England Crime Stories, Bouchercon, and Crime Writers' Association series.

Shawn was born in Indiana, grew up in Florida, and began her professional career in New York City as a sales executive after graduating from the University of Maryland with a BA in English. Since then she has worked as a book store manager, fiction editor, mystery convention organizer, wine rep, and caterer. She serves on the Board of Malice Domestic and is co-editor at Level Best Books.

Shawn is a member of Sisters in Crime, Mystery Writers of America, the International Thriller Writers, and the Crime Writers’ Association in the U.K.