The following blog entry is one chapter in “Broken Hearted Killers,” a serial novella written by 16 Writers Who Kill. To read the complete story, please begin with Chapter One, published on the WWK blog on February 2, 2023.
By Kathleen Rockwood
The street up ahead was deserted. The leaves remaining on
the trees moved restlessly, casting a muted, shifting glow from the
streetlights.
Helen’s breath was coming harder, drowning out the sound of
the footsteps behind her. Unable to keep up the pace she’d set, she slowed.
A hand grabbed her arm. Tight.
Startled, she let out a shriek.
“Hush up,” a man’s voice hissed in her ear. His grip
tightened. “And don’t turn around.”
Petrified, she stood still.
“Where’s Ashley?” he asked.
Helen could hardly gasp out the word. “Ashley?”
“Yeah. You went into the bookstore. So did she. With the
kids. Then she left. Without the kids. I waited. She didn’t come back. The
store’s closed and dark now.”
Helen swallowed hard. “What do you want?”
The man shook her arm. “I want to know what happened to
Ashley. And the kids.”
“She picked them up. From the service entry off the alley.”
The man’s grasp weakened. “Oh,” was all he said.
He turned and strode away.
Helen turned around, but all she could see was the back of a
man with a hoodie pulled over his head and his hands shoved in his pockets.
Shivering, she hurried home.
As she opened the door, the phone rang. Her voice was high
and strangled as she answered. “Hello?”
“Helen? It’s Nella. You sound upset. Are you all right?”
“Yes. I just had a scare….” Helen’s words petered out.
“I’ll be right there.”
Nella hung up before Helen could protest.
She set about making a pot of tea to calm herself and heated
up some scones to share with Nella. She set the table, adding marmalade and
lemon curd for the scones.
When she sat down with a cup, though, her hand trembled too
much to hold it.
Opening the door with her key, Nella came dashing in and
gave her a hug. “What happened?”
Much to her dismay, Helen started crying as she described
the incident.
“We should call Detective Torres,” Nella said.
“How about Gus, instead?” Helen countered. “He’ll know if we
need to call Detective Torres.”
“Okay.” Nella stepped away to make the call on her phone,
which seemed to take a long time.
Helen didn’t even try to listen. She closed her eyes and
concentrated on slowing her breathing to ease the tightness in her chest and
throat.
“He didn’t answer, so I left a message, telling him about
the young man who accosted you,” Nella said, pouring herself a cup of tea.
She set the cup down on the table. “There’s something I
probably should have told you sooner. But I’d promised not to be the one to
reveal it. And it seemed so unbelievable, I wanted to double-check what I could
myself. Now, though, I think it’s important for everyone to know.”
Helen sat silently, staring at the scones.
Nella took a deep breath. “Charles Fairweather approached me
a few days ago. He said he was planning to retire but was representing a few
old clients to finish things up. One was my biological mother.”
Helen reached toward her teacup but stopped. Her hand still
trembled.
“She had given me up for adoption at birth,” Nella
continued. “And I had a twin, who was placed separately.”
Focusing her thoughts and glancing up, Helen was
disconcerted to see Nella blink back tears.
“Did he tell you the name of your biological mother?” Helen
held her breath.
“No! He said he had to speak with her first. And now, if he
doesn’t regain consciousness, I may never know the truth! He asked me not to
say anything, but everything’s changed.”
Willing her own tremors away, Helen reached out and covered
Nella’s hand with her own.
“And….” Nella’s voice trailed off as she tried to clear her
throat. “I finally get a chance to find out who my birth mother is, and the
opportunity is snatched away.”
Helen got up and put her arm around Nella’s quaking
shoulders as her friend tried to swallow her sobs.
“Now I may never find out! Or meet my twin.”
After a few minutes, Nella took a paper napkin and swiped at
her eyes. “Sorry.”
“Nothing to be sorry for,” Helen assured her.
“What makes it worse,” Nella said, “is that the baby nurse
who handed me to my adoptive parents was your neighbor, Renee Peabody. She knew
this all the time and never said anything.”
Helen gave her another hug. “Back then, adoptions were almost
always secret. She probably felt like she had an obligation to keep quiet.”
“I suppose.” Nella blew her nose on the napkin. “If Gus got
my message, he should be here any time. By the way, he told me something
interesting.”
“What was that?”
“He said Ashley’s ex-husband didn’t report back to prison.”
Helen was confused. “Report back to prison?”
“Yes. He’s supposed to be paroled soon, so he’s been on a
work-release program. Where he goes out to work during the day and reports back
to the prison at night. He didn’t come back a few nights ago, and he hasn’t
been seen since. So, there’s an arrest warrant out for him.”
“Really.” Helen wondered if that didn’t have something to do
with the scary man who was looking for Ashley.
“And,” Nella sniffed hard, “his job was in a hobby shop that
specializes in model trains.”
Helen tsked. “Everywhere we look it’s model trains.” She
lifted the teacup to her lips and sipped, feeling a vague frisson of fear.
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Suspects, and more suspects! Who could the killer be? Inquiring minds want to know.
ReplyDeleteAnd the plot thickens and twists and turns!
ReplyDelete“Everywhere we look it’s model trains.” I love that line.
ReplyDeleteOh man, this had my heart racing! More twists, more twists....
ReplyDeleteWhat an unexpected twist!
ReplyDeleteSo much happening. Will the murders ever be solved?
ReplyDeleteMore clues! More red herrings! And where will the model trains take us?
ReplyDeleteMore twists. I do think Helen should have called the detective, especially after she couldn't reach Gus. Scary hooded guy!!
ReplyDeleteGreat developments, as usual!
ReplyDeleteExcellent chapter, Kathleen. We can always rely on your knowledge from working with prisoners to add details related to prisoner plot points.
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