The
following blog entry is one chapter in “Broken Hearted Killers,” a serial
novella written by 16 Writers Who Kill. To read the complete story, please
begin with Chapter One, published on the WWK blog on February 2, 2023.
By Kait Carson
The freight elevator stopped with a jolt that sent Helen’s
pounding heart rocketing into her throat. She grabbed the quilted fabric that
padded the walls of the cab for support and an object, dislodged by her action,
clinked to the floor. A small, red, caboose lay beside her sneakered feet.
Helen stared at the toy in disbelief, then snatched it up and stuffed it in her
pocket, her only thought to get out of the confined space before the closing
doors shut her in.
Fear moved her from the freight alcove to the mouth of the
hallway. There were only six luxury condos on this floor and Iris’s was the
first one on the left. By clinging to the wall, Helen hoped to be able to skirt
the all-seeing eye of the camera. Who dropped the toy? Better yet, who else
knows the security cameras don’t fully cover the freight elevators? She clamped
her mind down hard on that thought and concentrated instead on getting into
Iris’s condo. The keyhole was on the far side of the door from where she stood.
Helen pulled on the gloves, snaked her hand across the front
of the door, and hoped she was still out of camera range. A trickle of
perspiration tickled the back of her neck while she fumbled to get the key into
the lock without exposing herself to camera view. The door stayed resolutely
locked. Now what? Her mind whirled through a myriad of possibilities. She tried
again, this time jiggling the key up and down a bit. The door clicked and swung
open.
The condo had a musty smell. Dark fingerprint dust coated
most of the surfaces. The great room featured floor to ceiling windows that
highlighted the view outside, and the forensic evidence holes cut into the
expensive carpet inside. A shiver ran through her. No time for that now. She
cast her eyes around the room. A bright splotch of red caught her eye. Just as
Renee described, a red envelope lay next to a fading floral arrangement.
Careful not to touch anything, Helen made her way to the marble table. The
yellow of her gloves clashed wildly with the red of the envelope. Definitely
not big enough for a marriage license. She turned the envelope over with one
finger. Sealed with a return address that Helen recognized as Philip’s scrawled
over the back.
Encouraged by her find, Helen decided to take a quick look
around the condo. The cops must be finished. The lack of crime scene tape
festooning the door and the wisdom gained through a million cop shows and crime
novels told her that. She wasn’t disturbing evidence. After all, she reasoned,
they left the envelope. Who knew what else they missed? A grouping of photos
decorated the hallway between the great room and the master bedroom. Helen
paused to look at them, hoping for a clue to the gray-haired man. Instead, the
photos featured Iris with various local politicians, including one of her
accepting the Citizen of the Year award. Helen shivered and moved on to the
bedroom.
More fingerprint dust decorated the room. A framed photo lay
face down on the floor. Helen picked it up and froze. Two photos slid into her
gloved hands from the loosened frame. One of Iris displaying her award, and
behind that, one of Charles Fairweather and Iris wrapped in a very friendly
embrace before a model train display. Ashley Ahlgren, pushing a dual stroller
before her, looked daggers at the pair from the far corner of the display
table.
Helen gasped. Iris’s hair color was different. A darker
blonde color she hadn’t sported in the last few years and changed certainly
before Ashley joined the Page Turners. Charles, toy trains, Ashley, a card from
Philip. What did it all mean? I have to get this information to Detective
Dishy, but how? Gus will know what to do.
She pulled her cell phone from her pocket. The caboose fell
to the floor. Helen stared at the toy. A caboose, the final car of old-time
trains. Did this mean another death? Her fingers shook as she pressed speed
dial four. “Gus, can you meet me at Iris’s condo? We need to talk.”
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More clues!
ReplyDeleteBut what do they mean?
Great job, Kait. Did she really evade the security cameras when she unlocked the door and entered the apartment?
ReplyDeleteHumm, so many clues - or are they misdirections!! Bring on the next chapter.
ReplyDeleteMore clues! Or red herrings?
ReplyDelete@KM - this was such a fun project
ReplyDelete@Margaret - only time will tell!
@Monica - Next chapter arrives tomorrow :)
@Shari - Only time will tell
Can't wait to see where this is going. The authors have done such a fabulous job with cohesiveness and continuity!
ReplyDeleteKait, I love your building the suspense while introducing new clues!
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