The
following blog entry is one chapter in “Broken Hearted Killers,” a serial
novella written by 16 Writers Who Kill. To read the complete story, please
begin with Chapter One, published on the WWK blog on February 2, 2023.
By Rosalie Spielman
“Renee!” gasped Helen, much louder and much more
melodramatically than she had intended. “You took evidence from a crime scene!”
Renee flushed. “I told you I was
frazzled. I didn’t mean to.”
“Regardless, you need to let that
detective know,” said Nella. She pulled out her phone and picked up the
detective’s card from the coffee table.
“No!” Renee batted the business
card from Nella’s fingertips.
Helen stared at Renee. “Why did
you do that?”
“My fingerprints are on the train
now,” Renee stuttered, reddening further, and fidgeting with the train in her
hand.
“So?” Helen said. “They’re also on
Iris, and the doorknob.”
“And the red envelope,” muttered
Nella as she bent to pick up the business card. She stood and went to the other
side of Helen’s kitchen island to call the detective, turning her back on the
other women.
Renee glared at Nella’s back, then
narrowed her eyes at Helen. “I never touched anything,” she said.
Helen thought back to the other
woman’s words. “You said her body was cold.”
Renee’s lips became even thinner,
and when she opened her mouth to speak again, some of the too-red lipstick had
transferred to her teeth. “I didn’t have to touch her to see she was dead.”
Helen shuddered at the image her
imagination concocted. “Renee, when Iris and I were walking home from A Likely
Story last night, she was in a good mood. She had a secret that she was pleased
about but not ready to share. Did she mention her secret to you?”
“No,” Renee snapped quickly,
perhaps a bit too aggressively. Her eyes narrowed and Helen could swear they
were practically glowing green with jealousy. “She didn’t seem happy at all
during our nightly talk,” she said in a snippy tone. “She seemed
frightened. And like I said, she said to tell the police to look at you. Why
would she be scared of you, Helen?”
Helen bit back a retort but couldn’t
stop her eyes from rolling. “She wasn’t scared of me, Renee,” she said as
calmly as she could manage. “In fact, I’ve never seen Iris afraid of anything,
and I’ve known her since we were kids. Perhaps she double booked her Saturday
night. You do know she had a date with Charles Fairweather on Saturday, right?”
Renee’s face went pale, then
flushed to almost purple and her fists clenched. She stood, stuck her pointy
nose in the air and stomped out, slamming the door.
Nella came back and sat down
again. “Goodness, what was that all about?”
“Renee has had the biggest crush
on Charles Fairweather ever since he was her lawyer when she was sued,” Helen
felt guilty about the pleasure she felt at poking Renee with Iris’s possible
date with Charles, but no one said she had to take the high road. The woman did
point the police at her, and for no reason other than to make trouble. “I'm not
actually sure Iris had a date with him, but she was meeting with him Saturday.”
“Maybe she needed his legal
expertise,” Nella said, but with a doubtful tone. “I was thinking about what
Renee said about the Citizen of the Year Award being the murder weapon. I
wonder….”
“What?” asked Helen. “If it was
more than just a weapon close at hand?”
“Yes. I wonder if that was used
because of what it represents,” said Nella. “I wonder if someone on the
community garden committee held a grudge?”
“Iris did have a gift for rubbing
people the wrong way, despite being the wife of a politician,” Helen said. “There’s
probably a lot of people out there with a grudge against her.”
“Maybe there’s someone from the
mayoral days, or the Friends of the Library Committee. Or in your book club.”
Nella glanced back at her phone. “Perhaps you should make a list for the
detective of the different groups she was involved with. He’ll be coming back
when he’s done with his business at the crime scene.” A slight smile flitted
across her lips.
“Oh, but I’m sure you need
to get to work though,” Helen teased. “No sense in you sticking around. You
only met Iris a time or two.”
“Oh, I think I should stay with
you in your time of need.” Nella gave her an exaggerated wink. “Besides, I’m
the boss.”
The women shared a smile, then
fell quiet. After some contemplation, Helen spoke.
“I wonder what the deal with the
train was?” she said. “If it has anything to do with the Page Turners.”
When Nella tilted her head in
confusion, Helen went on to explain. “This last meeting, Philip Seaforth led a
discussion, or rather, talked to himself for an hour about his book of choice,
an extremely boring one about model trains.” Helen raised her brows for
emphasis on the last words.
“Huh. Is there any reason Philip
would have visited Iris?” Nella leaned back into the couch and crossed her
legs. “Were they involved in any way?”
“Not that I’m aware of. She never expressed interest in him. And I don’t recall him being interested in her at all since Iris was, in fact, not a train,” Helen said. She tapped her lip with her finger, then held it in the air. “Ashley Ahlgren, now she is interested in him. And his trains.”
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Ah, the company descends into adolescent jealousies and jabs. What will come of it?
ReplyDeleteSo, so good. I'm totally immersed. Keep those chapters coming!
ReplyDeleteMy favorite line: “I don’t recall him being interested in her at all since Iris was, in fact, not a train.” Lol! So good!
ReplyDeleteThe train is an interesting clue. Love the line: "And I don’t recall him being interested in her at all since Iris was, in fact, not a train" Too funny. Next up, Ashley. What is her part!
ReplyDeleteThe interaction between these three characters helps to bring out so much! I love Helen and Nella’s friendship.
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