The
Neanderthal tribe of Enga Dancing Flower must trek south to flee the
approaching glacier, but the distance is long and the food is scarce. When a
venerable elder drowns crossing a flooded river, Enga suspects that it was not
an accident, and that a murderer travels with them.
I was on a spate of reading boring novels. So
when I discovered I’d missed the second book of Kaye George’s People of the
Wind series, Death On The Trek, I was
glad—knowing it would be a great read—much to my relief.
I wouldn’t expect to love books about
Neanderthals. But Kaye’s book captivated me. I read it in a day. The
Neanderthal Hamapa tribe must migrate when its main food source, the mammoth, has
gone south to escape glacier ice that is descending from what is now
Canada. They encounter much strife and challenges along the way, but when
murders occur, a tribe elder enlists Enga Dancing Flower, Kaye’s main character,
to discover the perpetrator.
My interview with Kaye about the first book
in the series, Death In The Time Of Ice,
is linked here. Welcome back to WWK, Kaye! E. B. Davis
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To orient modern readers, from what I could
discern, the Hamapa Neanderthal tribe started their trek at the beginning of
spring in what is now known as Wisconsin to follow their main food source, the
mammoth, south after the glaciers move toward them. By the end of the story, in
autumn, they have found mammoth located in what is now Texas. Ten thousand
years ago? Did I get that right?
Not quite. It’s probably hard to tell, but
I put them in New Mexico, near a distinctive rock formation, Tucumcari
Mountain. And the story takes place about 30,000 years ago. I had the date in
the intro to the first book. Maybe I should have repeated that in this one.
I’ll include it in the third one!
To ground readers in the story, you start
each chapter with a quote from an archeology, biology, or sociology book
that explains an aspect of the chapter. Was that a technique you developed at
the series inception or one you devised during beta readings?
I went through SO many iterations of style
and content, it’s hard to tell. Since I’m writing from inside their world, it’s
impossible to convey some of the things that might not make sense, or might be
questionable to a modern reader. I thought that including snippets of my
research might help. For instance, when I introduce the Denisovans, I can’t
call them that. So I put a short passage describing their probable dark skin,
hair, and eyes, from the genome reconstruction published online by the UK
Natural History Museum. In the chapter where the storyteller relates ancient
history about horses in North America fleeing to Asia (they originated on this
continent, then migrated to Asia and were reintroduced by the Spanish), I quote
from a book on Ice Age Mammals.
Prior to beginning the trek, Hama, the female
ruler of the tribe, receives the adult names from the supreme spirit, Dakadaga,
of two boys even though they have not come of age, as is the practice. One is
an apprentice storyteller, and the other is the fire keeper, who inherited the
job early, his predecessor having died. Enga Dancing Flower fears Hama doesn’t
think the boys will survive the trek and gives them names to die by, but that
isn’t the reason. What is?
The fire tender has already been doing the
job of an adult, so it is fitting that he gets his Passage Ceremony before they
start the trek. Also, the senior storyteller is getting old and, even if most
of the tribe survives the trip, it’s doubtful he will. The apprentice has
already learned all of the lore and is ready to step into his position, so this
will make it easier, if that has to happen during the journey. But, really, the
main reason is that the leader, through the high god, doesn’t think everyone
will survive the journey. She’s right, of course.
Enga and her sister, Ung Strong Arm, are not native to the Hamapa
tribe, having been taken in as infants. I was surprised that the tribe was mostly
unprejudiced, (although wary of adults from other tribes). Sooka, a baby of
another woman, was fathered by a Tall One, who I think may be of the homo
sapiens species. Why don’t they have fear of other tribes/species?
Yes, the Tall One, Sooka’s father, was
mostly Cro Magnon, or, as they’re now called, Anatomically Modern Humans or
Early Modern Humans. (Personally, I liked Cro Magnon better.) There’s enough space
for everyone back then, so they don’t have rivalry with other Neanderthal
tribes. Instead, they trade with them on rare get-togethers. The Hamapa haven’t
met enough people of other species to fear them. They assume others are like
them. Most of them are, but with some marked differences, as they find out. But
Enga and Ung are Neanderthals from a different tribe. They know that they are
all one bad winter away from starvation, and the winters are getting worse, so
they don’t mind helping out their own kind.
Although Enga and Ung are from another tribe,
they must have close genetics to the Hamapa, who can communicate telepathically
and verbally. Not only can they communicate telepathically, they also can
intercept others thoughts and communiqués if the transmitter doesn’t cloak
his/her thoughts, which can happen during unguarded moments. Why doesn’t telepathy cause more stress and fighting among
members?
They run into the Mikino who attack them and
take their mammoth jerky, which they brought to sustain them on their journey. Were
the disgusting small people, the Mikino, homo floresiensis? Are there
archeological clues that the species was aggressive?
Yes, that’s my portrayal of them, also
called Hobbit People. There are not clues that they were disgusting and
violent. I just wanted more conflict at the point where they encounter each
other. But the latest research, which wasn’t out when I wrote this, shows that
they were most likely descended from Homo
habilis, beings that are much more ancient than either Homo sapiens or Neanderthals, even older than Homo erectus. I’m pleased to find this out, since it might (might!)
make them more primitive and animal-like than the others in the world I
created, where I mash all these species together on the same continent.
You wrote within two POVs: Enga and Jeek, a
young boy who likes to throw spears even though it’s a “girl’s” job. Why did
you want Jeek’s POV, and why was spear throwing a female pursuit?
First of all, the spear-throwing—that’s my
feminist slant that pervades the whole set up. My thought is that, if you
didn’t know biology and you weren’t strictly monogamous, you wouldn’t
necessarily know who your father was. But you would always know who your mother
was. So I had heredity and lineage come through the matriarchal line, and also
gave them the main jobs—leading the tribe and hunting the food. As to Jeek,
after I created him, I found that I liked him a lot and could give him a major
role in the story. I wanted him to be an instrument of change for them, to
challenge the status-quo. He’s Enga’s clever helper when she solves mysteries.
I think of him like a street urchin for Holmes, only better.
They run across some helpful people they know
as the Hooden, who dine on sloth, which they pen in caves and feed. The Hamapa
are so hungry due to the Mikino attack, they need to eat the sloth. Have you
confirmed that sloth is disgusting to eat?
Yes, I did find that out! Even though they
have no body odor, the meat tastes terrible to almost everyone who has tried
it. There is one tribe who occasionally eats it, but modern people who have
tasted it never want to do that again. I had to include penned up sloth,
because I ran across an article about giant sloths being kept in pens in
Patagonia and had to use it.
When Panan One Eye is hit on the head with a rock and killed, his
apprentice Mootak claims to have seen a spirit murder Panan. Why don’t many of
the tribe believe him?
They’re pretty practical people. Even
though they pay homage to their many gods, and feel that they influence their
lives, they’re pragmatic enough to know that the gods don’t actually walk
around among them.
Enga is pregnant with Tog’s child. Tog isn’t
a great mate. He spends much of his time with another female and her child. He
urges her to dance when she could miscarry. Do the Hamapa marry?
They don’t marry, exactly. They have a First
Coupling, which is for a man or woman’s very first time. That is supposed to
happen only with the approval of Hama and it used to be done in the Holy Cave,
in the place where they lived before they set out on the trek. The Holy Cave
was reserved for First Coupling, a female’s first Red Flow, and the place where
they gave Birth. They’ll have to find a new place for this when they get to the
new land. Once someone has a First Coupling, they usually stay together, but
can change partners. The Hama does this more than anyone, it seems.
Is Vala an early sociopath?
She’s not a very good person! She is the
daughter of Nanno, who was also not nice in the first book. However, her
sister, Rho, didn’t turn out the way she did.
Why wouldn’t the Hooden touch Sooka?
I thought that, since she looked so
different from the other Hamapa, the Hooden (Denisovans) would think something
was very wrong with her.
Puka, spirit of strife? Are you having fun
yet, Kaye?
You can’t imagine how fun these books are
to write! And how difficult. I bring in all the professions I might have
pursued, if I had an infinite life: archeology, linguistics, anthropology, even
a bit of theology, to name a few.
What is your next project, Kaye?
The next People of the Wind book will be Death in the New Land and the poor
Hamapa will be introduced to the awful practice of war. In the first book, they
had their first murder ever, so they will have lost most of their innocence by
the end of the third book. I’m ascribing to the Noble Savage model for them.
My immediate next project, though, the one
I’m working on now, is a cozy series for Lyrical Press/Kensington—the Vintage
Sweets mysteries set in Fredericksburg, Texas. The first book will be called
REVENGE IS SWEET. I hope to have turned in the manuscript and to have a
publication date by the time this appears.
Thanks so much for the interview and for
your interest in my writing, and especially this series!
Amazing! How cool that the research followed your instincts.
ReplyDeleteHow difficult was it to world build for this series? It is clear from the interview how detailed and immersed you are in the setting and the characters. When I read Death in the Time of Ice it struck me how easily you move your readers from Neanderthal to modern times. Not an easy task.
Good luck with the Vintage Sweets mystery. Looking forward to reading it. Do you have a publication date yet?
Hi, Kaye, good luck with current and future projects! And maybe something set in Spain?
ReplyDeleteThanks for a great read and interview, Kaye. I'm never disappointed! What's happening in your other series?
ReplyDeleteCongratulations on your continued success, Kaye. I always wave whenever we're passing the Knoxville area on our migrations.
ReplyDelete~ Jim
Kaye, I haven't read the first book in your series, but when I go to Malice, I plan on buying both books in that series. I have read other of your books and enjoyed them. I hope your new series does well, too.
ReplyDeleteKaye, I am impressed by the depth of your research and how realistic your descriptions are of a series that is so shrouded in the mists of time. To do this, and then to switch to a modern cozy is quite remarkable. Congrats!
ReplyDeleteWow! I thought I had to do a lot of research. Sounds great.
ReplyDeleteOh my, Kaye. Congratulations on your books. You are writing in an interesting era.
ReplyDeleteI slept in on this snowy day and wake to find all these wonderful comments! Thanks so much for them.
ReplyDeleteKait,the world building was detailed and I tried to be meticulous, but it wasn't as hard as deciding how to present it on the page. That was tough! I'm very glad I abandoned some of my earlier attempts. Many thanks to the Austin Mystery Writers, who suffered through them.
Margaret, if I do something in Spain, it'll have to be put at the back of the line.
E.B., I have ideas for a 3rd Cressa Carraway and a 4th Imogene books, but, see above, they're not at the front of the line right now.
Jim Jackson, shame on you! Give me a ring and we'll meet for lunch!
Gloria, Sasscer, Warren, and Vicki, many thanks!
And thanks a million to E.B. for the interview. I ALWAYS love to be interviewed here by you.
(I don't have a pub date on Vintage Sweets because I was delayed turning in the ms. But I hope it will be fall of 2018.)
Kaye, I loved reading this interview. I was thinking how different your books are - ancient humans and a vintage sweet shop. You are a versatile writer, for sure. I loved Cressa and I'm looking forward to reading these other series.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Shari! I guess I'm easily bored.
ReplyDeleteI have to get Death on the Trek. I loved the first book! I'm in aw of your imagination conceiving this entire world, and your ability to bring the whole thing to life on the page. Not to mention keeping other irons in the fire!
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing so much with us.
Thanks very much KM!
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