Indeed.
In my Boston-based thriller, The Immaculate, an elderly nun is murdered. Rosaria O’Reilly,
mentored by the nun through a difficult childhood, is drawn into the search for
answers to the nun’s murder.
Rosaria’s age is indeterminate, but I
had thought of her in her early fifties.
Uh oh.
I was advised to make Rosaria younger. Twenties or thirties or—on the near side of
decrepitude—maybe forty. I stuck with early fifties with this logic.
1. She has more texture after the dings
and bangs of life. Her ill-fated first marriage, her close friend Nuncie dying
of cancer. Age gives a certain interesting texture.
2. She’s seen enough to get it. In time,
one picks up more—the guile on an innocent-looking face or the false cheer of
the abused wife.
3. Love is not just for the young.
Boston cop Solly Belkin annoys and interests her so much that they may have a
future together.
4. She can stand on her own two feet,
with or without a relationship. Earn her own living, make her own decisions.
Sometimes when things get complicated, Rosaria might wish she had someone to
take care of her—but not for long. The price is too high.
5. She has perspective. She knows what’s
important—whether it’s the old nun’s last secret mission or Nuncie’s right to
die on her own terms.
My plan, as I finish Buried Troubles, the next Rosaria O’Reilly
book, is to let her age—as we all do.
Like her protagonist Rosaria O’Reilly in The
Immaculate (Barking Rain Press May 2016), Marian McMahon Stanley enjoyed a
long international corporate career with a Fortune 500 company and, more
recently, a senior position at a large, urban university in Boston. She is the
mother of four adult children and a growing number of grandchildren. Marian
writes in a small, bookish and historical town outside Boston and in
Gloucester, America’s oldest seaport, on Cape Ann. She lives with her husband
Bill and — just as in the story — a Westie named Archie.
The Immaculate tells the story of the murder of an elderly, social activist
Boston nun in the days prior to the Globe’s Spotlight investigation and at the
early stages of the current opioid crisis. Rosaria O’Reilly, one of the nun’s
former students, left the neighborhood years ago for a very different life.
Now, she and a monkish local detective piece together the motive, method and
identity of the murderer through confrontations with a powerful philanthropist,
a vicious Boston crime boss and an autocratic monsignor with ambitions for his
prestigious Catholic high school.
an interesting set of characters! Looking forward to reading your book.
ReplyDeleteI get a bit fed up with the perky, shallow female characters we often see in today's books. Sometimes they are well-done and the story works fine, but they do lack the experience and insight of older women.
ReplyDeleteI bet Miss Marple was born middle-aged. I can't picture her in her twenties or thirties.
I think Agatha Christie had it right. The little old ladies are the best at crime-solving!
ReplyDeleteIt sounds like a character I would enjoy getting to know.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Margaret - would love The Immaculate to have a new reader!
ReplyDeleteYes, KM - no one would describe Rosaria O'Reilly in The Immaculate as "perky" and that suits me just fine. It's the rare person who has a fully developed sense of insight in her twenties, even our beloved Miss Marple.
And that is why you are right, E.B., old ladies are the best at crime solving! (Rosaria is not little - she's "big boned" but same sentiment.)
Marian
Thanks, Warren. After finishing The Immaculate, I missed the characters so much, including Rosaria, that I promptly started another book with her as the protagonist. Just finished it. Hope you have a chance to get to know Rosaria. Marian
ReplyDeleteGood for you arguing for an older character.I attended parochial elementary and high school and had some wonderful nuns that taught me. Of course, most of the students were entranced by the younger nuns, but ultimately, it was the older nuns and their experience and wisdom that had the greater impact on me. I corresponded with one of them at Christmas time until her death at 96. I wouldn't have traded my experience with the nuns for anything.
ReplyDeleteSo glad to know of your experience, Grace. The old nun in the story - Sister Mary Aurelius (secretly called Spike by her students because she could be tough) - was one of those old nuns that we all remember.
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Marian, I've already written the book down to order. When one of my sisters and I started writing the series I write, she wanted my main character to be a perky young woman in her 20's. Needless to say, I couldn't write her as that young and made her older and continued the series on my own after those first few chapters. My main character is only forty - much younger than I am - but has a background that I can relate to. I also have older returning characters that play important parts. Although I attended a public school, I'm a Catholic and have had some good relationships with the nuns who had positions in my church. Like you I get so attached to my characters that not only my main characters, but I need to bring back others, too - except for victims and murderers, of course.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Gloria. Sounds like we have the same philosophy on our characters. I hope you enjoy The Immaculate! Marian
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