Saturday, May 31, 2025

What We're Writing

It's been a while since we caught up with Writer's Who Kill. Here's what we're working on.

 Sarah Burr: I'm currently knee-deep in caffeine and clues as I work on the next Book Blogger Mystery! It's been a joy jumping back into that bookish world filled with secrets, sass, and sleuthing. At the same time, I'm gearing up to pop the confetti for the release of #Throwback for Murder, book four in my Trending Topic Mysteries series. It's a whirlwind of witty twists and cozy chaos, and I can't wait to celebrate with all of you!

Kait Carson: I’m writing Death by Deception the fourth of the Hayden Kent Mystery series. Because I’m unwilling to leave the Keys behind, I’m also working on Pirates on Parade, a cozy mystery and the first of The Southernmost Secrets series. Wish me luck.

Debra H. Goldstein: I’ve been writing short stories. A collection of my work, With Our Bellies Full, and the Fire Dying was recently released. In addition, “Who Shot J.R.?” appeared in Sleuths Just Wanna Have Fun and Opera Dinner Club was podcast and released in print in Anything But Murder: Larceny and Lies.


Margaret S. Hamilton: I am writing a longish culinary short story and tackling another round of edits on the second book in my Jericho Mysteries series.

Lori Herbst:  I'm about halfway through book 1 in the new Seahorse Bay Mystery series, set in a Texas cruise port town. Larceny at the Lighthouse is tentatively scheduled to release this fall (fingers crossed), and it features Shelley Shore, a cruise ship director who moves back to Seahorse Bay to help her great aunts save the aquarium they own.

Cover reveal coming this summer!

James M. Jackson: I'm currently working on the Niki Undercover series, which spins off one of the characters from my Seamus McCree series. I'm polishing book 1 (Niki Undercover), beta readers are providing feedback on book 2 (Niki Unleashed), and I'm writing the first draft of book 3 (Niki Untitled -- that is I don't yet know what the second word will be for the title, other than it will begin with "Un").

Marilyn Levinson/Allison Brook: I’m writing the fourth Rufus book in my middle-grade series called Rufus and the Right Side of Magic. The third book, Rufus and the Dark Side of Magic, has just come out.

I’m also plotting the second book in my new mystery series that I write as Allison Brook. The first book, Death on Dickens Island, is being released October 21, 2025.

Martha Reed: I’m having great fun finishing up The Seven Gates of Guinee, my third Crescent City NOLA Mystery with an eye on a summer 2025 publication date. Jane Byrne my disgraced ex-detective and Gigi Pascoe my transgender sleuth are ably assisted by an authentic NOLA Voodoo queen Aunt Babette Broussard as they work to uncover what really happened to the four university students who vanished in 1977 while playing the Intrepid Quest fantasy role-playing board game. Did a French Quarter Voodoo portal really swallow them up?

K.M. Rockwood: I'm having a great time working on a Christmas short story.

 Digby is a young elf who has a job in the office of a shoe factory. He suffers from dyslexia and makes mistakes which others mock. He has a crush on Edda, but is too insecure to let her know. He overhears a conversation in which she says she is nice to him because feels sorry for him. Humiliated and desperate to avoid seeing her, he writes a letter to Santa asking about a job at the North Pole. Only he mistakenly addresses it to Satan.

 Santa arrives at the gates of hell to rescue Digby. In the confrontation with Satan, he flies into a towering rage. This may go to the submission call for Santa Rage 2, although I know it's not really what the editor is looking for. Or it may end up as my contribution to the next round of Christmas stories on Writers Who Kill, if we decide to do that this year.

Susan Van Kirk: Fabric of Lies is the latest Endurance manuscript I'm writing. The Endurance mysteries follow retired teacher, Grace Kimball, and her former student and friend, Detective TJ Sweeney. After the last mystery, The Witch's Child, this latest manuscript finds Jeff Maitlin and Grace Kimball married for the past year and running Lockwood House as a bed-and-breakfast. A terrible event from the past shows up in the form of a visitor to town who brings with him memories for Grace of a mysterious disappearance and the bittersweet years when she was married to her late husband, Roger. Meanwhile, Jeff Maitlin is still the Editor-in-Chief of the Endurance Register, but perhaps not for long. Forces he hardly knows are conspiring to bring about the demise of his beloved local newspaper. 

Heather Weidner: Spring has sprung here in Central Virginia, and I’m hiding from the pollen in my writing cave. I just finished a short story for a mystery anthology with a musical theme. I also wrapped up edits on the Pearly Girls book 2, Murder Plays Second Fiddle.

Next up, I’ll be plotting the next Jules Keene Glamping Mystery. Jake, Jules, Bijou, and the gang are back for more mysteries (and mayhem).

Friday, May 30, 2025

Plot Spinning by Nancy L. Eady

Authors will tell you that story ideas can come from anywhere. Two events in my life this week have led me to some plot spinning of my own. 

The first was a news story about an artificial intelligence platform experiment. The researchers took a particular AI program and put it on a “closed” system which included business emails about how that AI program was about to be discontinued and replaced with something else. They also included individual emails that indicated that the main engineer responsible for making the decision was having an affair. Then they sat back and watched what happened. Eighty percent of the time, after trying other tactics, the AI program resorted to blackmail to get the main engineer to stop the switch! The researchers said that the AI program was slightly less likely to resort to blackmail if the system it was being replaced with had “similar values”—whatever that means in an AI context—but only slightly. 

Think of the ways you could spin that story around into an intriguing mystery. For example, what if two AI platforms started dueling for primacy in the commercial world and resorted to blackmailing the executives for each other’s companies and the blackmail led to a murder? Or, what if an AI program, eager to avoid replacement, set up the murder of one of its own company’s executives? What a tangled web for an intrepid investigator to iron out.

In “real” life, I ran out of a particular medication this week. My first reaction was to look at the bottle, notice the “no refills” label, and call my doctor’s office for a new prescription. The doctor’s nurse called me back and told me they had sent in a prescription on April 10 to the pharmacy for a ninety-day supply. The pharmacy said they had filled it on April 10. There was no way I could conceivably be out of the medication, except that I was. I am precise with my daily medications. I have a pill minder and once a week I put one pill in each day of the minder, then I leave the bottle alone until the next week. I was left with trying to figure out how 40 pills could have spontaneously combusted, self-destructed or otherwise disappeared. After a thorough search of my house, I called the pharmacy back Wednesday night and told them I wondered if maybe they had counted out the wrong number of pills initially. I was surprised to learn they keep videotape of the prescriptions they fill, and the pharmacist went back and viewed the tape of their filling my prescription on April 10. She called me back to let me know that yes, they had, in fact, shorted me by forty pills and I could come by the pharmacy to pick them up on Thursday. But, she added, they would not treat the medication the way they normally do in the computer system, and I should just come up to the counter and tell the clerk that the pharmacist was holding medication back for me. 

Again, my brain started spinning. What if, instead of the shortage being an innocent mistake, a customer in my situation or that customer’s doctor stumbled across an illegal narcotics ring run by either pharmacists or pharmacist techs? What would happen to the innocent bystander when she went to pick up her missing medication? Would she disappear? Would she narrowly escape death by vehicular accident or other misadventure and start to stumble along the path to exposing the truth? What if the pharmacist was innocent, but it was one of the techs running the drug ring? The pharmacist confronts the tech with her suspicions, and then when the customer arrives to pick up her medicine, she finds the pharmacist murdered and the medication missing? What might happen next? 

“What-ifs” are fun to imagine and can spin up into intricate plots if carried out far enough. What are some of your as-yet-unused plot “nuggets” and what story or event inspired them?


Thursday, May 29, 2025

When the Dead Guy Talks Back: Characters Who Refuse to Follow the Outline

 By Eloise Corvo

I am a plotter, or at least I intend to be when I start a new novel draft. When I sat down with my handy-dandy outline for Off the Beaten Path, red herrings and murder mechanics galore, I planned to diligently stick to that outline. As I started writing and digging deeper into these characters; however, the dead guy talked back and took the story in a new direction.

I’m not the only writer who experiences this. As we explore our characters, delving into their personality quirks and motivations, they often surprise us and take us to places we weren’t anticipating. Let’s look more closely at what this means, why it’s a part of our creative magic, and how to handle it.

How he talks back

When I say that the dead guy in my story talked back to me, I don’t mean that literally. My fingers were not possessed by some outside influence that took over his storyline. What I mean is that I found myself surprised by where I took his storyline. I deviated from my plan and now had plot holes to reconcile.

In Off the Beaten Path, the body of a tourist is found in a massive state park by Maudy Lorso, the head park ranger. Without giving too much away, I had the relationship between the tourist and my killer clear in my outline. As I spent time in his head while drafting, working on the nuances of what motivated him and how he treated his relationships, a brand new facet of his relationship to the killer formed on the page. This new element was BIG. I’m not talking about a little side quest or fun detail. This changed the entire motive behind the murder and the clues that needed to allude to it.

Whether or not to listen to him

Once you start veering one of your characters away from your plan, you have to decide whether to stick to your original outline, or follow this detour into uncharted waters. You are in full control, but it can feel like your characters are just pulling you along for the ride.

Here’s what to ask yourself when you’re in this dilemma:

  1. Will this new element complement, or be a distraction from my core plot?
  2. Do I have time to weave this in cohesively through edits, or am I on a tight deadline? Do I have future books in the series to play with this new idea?
  3. Do I simply like this new idea, independent of this particular story? Would it be better suited for its own story rather than this one?
  4. What does my gut tell me?

If your gut is screaming at you to follow this idea and you have the time, you should go for it. If you’re working on tight deadlines or unsure about its place in this particular story, perhaps keep it in your back pocket and proceed as originally planned.

You can always add it in later if you just can’t let it go. Writing is a process after all. In my experience, the book is only done when my editor forces me to stop tinkering with it.

 I won’t always choose to follow these detours as I’m drafting, but I’ve become more flexible in entertaining them and trusting my own creative process.

In the instance of Off the Beaten Path’s dead guy, I listened to him. I reworked the plot, reconciled the holes, and spent countless extra hours weaving this element in. It’s a better story because of it.

While working on a separate book (a speculative fiction work-in-progress), this happened to me again. I veered off track, fixated on the thought that my villain should, with technology, open every door in the country, never to be shut again. I became fixated on this, and possible consequences of this simple problem. In the end though, I decided that I was pigeonholing this into this novel, and it distracted from the plot. Instead, I made it its own short story (“The Myriad Consequences of Unhinged Doors and Women). It’s a much better fit here than in that other novel, even though that's where the idea originated.

 What he’s taught me

Listening to my imagination, as heard through my characters, has undoubtedly made me a better writer. It helps deepen motivation, create more realistic and flawed characters, and let emotional truth shine. These books aren’t just about solving murders; they’re about believable, empathetic characters that compel readers. The way we get to know our characters is the same way we get to know real people—by listening to them.

Author Eloise Corvo finds inspiration and peace of mind while skulking around her home library which her husband affectionately (?) says embodies an "Edgar Allan Poe meets Applebee's" aesthetic. Eloise has short fiction published in literary magazines like The Corner Bar, and her debut novel, Off the Beaten Path, just released in April through Level Best Books. She loves mint chocolate chip ice cream, appreciates a good puzzle, and is terrified of clowns. To learn more and purchase signed copies, visit EloiseCorvo.com.

Wednesday, May 28, 2025

An Interview with Krista Davis by E. B. Davis

 

“I’m ninety-eight years old. I don’t need an alibi.”

Krista Davis, The Diva Poaches a Bad Egg, Kindle Loc. 787

 

Northern Virginia’s own Martha Stewart returns in a brand-new mystery as an interior designer clashes with a killer . . .

Stylish brunches are all the rage this autumn in Old Town Alexandria, and everyone’s posting their parties on social media. But while Domestic Diva Sophie Winston juggles her event-filled calendar, she’s approached by local designer Mitzi Lawson—who is afraid someone is following her. The very next day Mitzi loses her best friend and business partner, Denise. The two were renovating a generations-old house where Denise died unexpectedly, and Mitzi fears that it wasn’t a medical condition to blame, but murder.

It could just be the shock talking, but Sophie agrees to help Mitzi involve the police. Then she receives a panicked phone call from Mitzi, and when she rushes to the old house, Mitzi is nowhere to be found. Now Sophie’s appetite for investigation is piqued even more than her appetite for eggs Benedict and mimosas.

Could Denise’s death be connected to her viper’s nest of in-laws or the house she was working on which her husband just inherited? What of the self-proclaimed etiquette expert with some improper secrets, or the scheming mistress? Or does the old house harbor secrets of its own? There’s a generous buffet of suspects to keep the Diva scrambling for an answer . . .
 
Includes delicious recipes and fabulous DIY decorating tips!

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Krista Davis needs no introduction here on WWK. I’ve interviewed Krista many times about her Domestic Diva Mysteries. The Diva Poaches a Bad Egg is her eighteenth book in the series. Talk about a winning streak!

 

Murder takes place in a family home in old town Alexandria, VA, Inger House, which has been passed down to the next generation for at least a century. A local interior designer, Mitzi, who thinks she is being stalked asks Sophie to find out the identity of her stalker. Arriving at Inger House, Sophie unfortunately finds Denise’s body. Mitzi and Denise were partners in the design business. When Denise’s husband, Mike, becomes the primary suspect, his parents and family ask Sophie to investigate. The victim was their daughter-in-law. There’s no way Sophie cannot investigate.

 

Thanks for once again providing me with fun hours of reading, Krista!

 

When Mitzi Lawson, an interior designer, asks Sophie to meet her the next day at Inger House, using its backdoor. Why does Sophie decide to get involved and follow her instructions?

 

All she knows is that Mitzi has a problem. She asked for Sophie’s help and Sophie obliges. Using the back door isn’t uncommon when a house is being renovated.

 

Why do people like Natasha ask questions they don’t really want answered?

 

Why do any of us do that? We’re hoping for confirmation from someone else.

 

What is the televised autumn brunch about? Why do they want Sophie?

 

The producer’s wife likes Sophie’s syndicated advice column, so they want her to be involved. Autumn brunches are all the rage. The program is about how to pull off a brunch. Making the food, etc.

 

Knowing Denise was likely murdered, why does Mitzi assume that someone is out to get her?

 

Because she thinks someone is following her.

 

What’s coastal grandmother style in interior decorating? Nancy Meyers style?


Coastal style relies heavily on whites and pale blue hues. It’s relaxing with an informal beachy feel. You have probably seen Nancy Meyers rooms in movies like Somethings Gotta Give. It blends easily with English Country style and timeless décor. Imagine neutral off-whites, warm wood cabinets and bookshelves, fireplaces, pillows, and books, books, books!

 

Is there really such a thing as black squid ink pasta? Does anyone eat it?

 

It does exist, and I’m told it’s popular.

 

Sophie bought out Mars’s half of the house when they divorced, but it was his Aunt Faye Winston’s house. Why didn’t Mars want the house?

 

Mars didn’t care about it. It needed updating and what would he do with a big old house? Besides he was living with Natasha who had a house of her own.

 

Was Mars close to his Aunt Faye? Did Sophie remind Mars of Faye?

 

Maybe Sophie does remind Mars of his Aunt Faye! LOL!

 

We learn a lot about Aunt Faye in this book. Does she actually haunt Sophie’s house?

 

Well, there are those who think so. After all, the portrait of her in the kitchen often slides askew a bit when Natasha visits. Sophie and I are firmly on the fence about it.

 

I’ll admit, I did buy pie boxes one time for a church charity sale, but Sophie just happens to have a disposable paper Bundt cake box for the Bundt cake she bakes to take to Denise’s family. What else might Sophie have in the way of food gift items? Individual brownie wrappers? Baskets?

 

Definitely disposable sheet cake trays with lids. Containers for brownies and chocolate chip cookies. Cupcake boxes with trays that cupcakes slip into so they won’t mash each other. Large cellophane bags to wrap gift baskets and charity auction donations.

 

Why does Natasha live in Old Town Alexandria if she likes mid-century décor? Is her old house transfixed or perhaps transbroken with a modern interior? Is she trendy?

 

Natasha tries to set the trend. As an expert on all things domestic with her own TV show, she thinks she should be the leader in setting trends. Her house is stylish, but she is struggling with her mother and her father’s second wife living with her and bringing their very different style into her home.

 

I was surprised that Wong and Wolf didn’t treat Sophie’s opinion with more respect. Why doesn’t Sophie get ticked off with them?

 

I think she did get frustrated with them, but they are old friends who know each other well. The police have to operate on facts. If there’s nothing there, there’s nothing to investigate. Sophie understands that.

 

I should know about air tags, but I don’t. What are they?

 

Air Tags are made by Apple. They are small discs about an inch in diameter. If you have an Apple phone or computer, you can track an Air Tag’s location. They’re very useful in luggage when traveling. In areas where cars are being stolen, some people are hiding them in their cars so they can locate them.

 

What is “tonal development?”

 

Colors have tones. Think of a color wheel and imagine the color red. On one side, reds begin to be orangey, and on the other side, reds begin to be purple. Tonal development means colors that are in the same tone, which go together well.

 

I’m not sure I would be happy being served Butternut squash for breakfast? What else goes with it?

 

You would be surprised by roasted butternut squash with veggies and kielbasa for breakfast. You’ve probably eaten potatoes for breakfast. People eat fish, too, like bagels and lox. Why not roasted butternut squash? However, that’s why we often offer more than one dish at a bigger brunch.

 

Are sheet-pan meals a new fad?

 

They have been around for years. I’m a huge fan because they’re so easy and delicious.

 

Why would weightlifters use insulin and how do they get it? Isn’t it by prescription?

 

Insulin is available without prescription from some stores. Some weightlifters think it builds muscle. It is not advisable to use it for that purpose.

 

Can enough insulin kill anyone, not just the diabetic?

 

Absolutely. Insulin lowers blood sugar whether you are diabetic or not. Diabetics have to monitor their blood sugar carefully to make sure it doesn’t get too low.

 

I have one recipe, only one, that calls for light brown sugar. I’m always stuck with a lot left over. Can you really substitute half white/half dark brown for light brown sugar?

 

You bet! I do it all the time. Works like magic.

 

How did pineapples become an icon of old Southern hospitality?

 

Pineapples arrived on a trade route in colonial times. They were rare and a big luxury. I’m told that a pineapple in front of the house meant one was open to entertaining guests. I’m also told that an upside down or perhaps sideways pineapple has become a symbol inviting the swinger community, so be careful how you display your pineapple!

 

What is next for Sophie and her gang? Any hints if her love-life will improve?

 

Sophie’s sister, parents, and some friends are staying with her for a Fourth of July celebration in THE DIVA HOSTS A MURDERER. It does involve a little romance, but not for Sophie. Coming in 2026!

Tuesday, May 27, 2025

Finding the POP in Your New Cover by Martha Reed

One of the perks and/or curses of being an independently published author is that I get to decide on my own cover design. I’ve heard of cover design disasters from traditionally published big house and small press author friends, and I gladly own this role.

Luckily for me, I hired a terrific graphic designer early on with my first Nantucket Mystery. Also luckily for me she’s put up with my nit-picky backseat suggestions for my succeeding five novels.

I find equal parts of joy and terror in designing a new book’s cover. Joy because this step in the publishing process means my new book is really happening. Terror because this step means that my new book is really happening.

I strive to stay calm. Independent publishing is simply a matter of unwavering dedication (i.e. "too dumb to quit") and internal fortitude.

Since I’m fresh from the book cover design fray with The Seven Gates of Guinee, my third NOLA Mystery due out later this year, I’ve decided to share my cover design experience. It’s a different form of creativity, and one that I enjoy.

STEP ONE: I send the designer a concise summary of the story so she gets a general idea of the plot:

The Seven Gates of Guinee. Four university students vanish in 1977. The cosplaying gamers were last seen performing bogus red magic Voodoo rituals around NOLA’s historic French Quarter.

STEP TWO: I gather my own cover ideas. My initial imagining showed two Voodoo veves (i.e. graphic representations of Voodoo spirits AKA "loas"), an NOPD Police badge, and St. Louis Cathedral. The iconic cathedral hints at the French Quarter, and the NOPD badge plants a seed (or an Easter egg) about the mystery to come.

Next came a tricky modern question I’ve never run into before when the graphic designer asked how I felt about using AI generated images. Giving it some thought I faced an ethical dilemma: Who was I to tell a fellow creative which tools they should use? That felt like telling a painter which colors to put on her pallette because you wanted her painting to match your couch. Plus I wanted her to have some fun.

My solution was to decide that I was okay with her using AI images as long as she was comfortable with me including a new disclaimer on my copyright page that read: “All text was 100% human generated. AI imagery was used on the cover design.”

For Version 1, she sent this:

At this point fate stepped in when an historically damaging windstorm swept western Pennsylvania. I was left without WiFi or power for seven days. During that week, Mystery Writers of America held their annual Edgar Award ceremony in New York City. The award presentation contained AI generated imagery, and the resulting firestorm of negative membership response settled the question for me. I cancelled any use of AI imagery on my covers at this time.

Back to the analog drawing board.

Next, she supplied these images for Version 2:

Hmmm. I felt the first preliminary wiggle. There’s something in the second one I like. The cathedral feels sinister. It looms. I asked her to continue working with that one.

Version 3 below still seemed too cluttered and busy, but it was starting to feel like it was in the ballpark (which by the way is one of my favorite feelings when you know you’ve got a hold of something with the potential of it being really good like a great fresh new metaphor.)


Next up: Remove the veve, spin the police badge a little, enlarge the title a bit, and let’s see what we’ve got. We’re almost there.

Bingo! This version feels eye-catching and dynamic. It pops!

One final bit of quality control (QC) was my last step. I compared the new cover design to the two existing NOLA Mystery covers to make sure it fit in with the existing branding style. Voila! We’re done. That’s it!

I hope you’ve enjoyed seeing my creative process. What's your experience? Do you design your own covers?








Monday, May 26, 2025

Memorial Day by Nancy L. Eady

 Every holiday owns a history, and Memorial Day, which is being celebrated today, is no different. I had never heard it called anything but Memorial Day until I was an adult at a funeral in Illinois, where relatives called it “Decoration Day.” Thinking about that this weekend, I wondered what the difference was. It turns out there is no difference. The two terms are synonymous, although the federal government tipped the balance toward “Memorial Day” by making it a federal holiday. 

Whether it is called “Memorial Day” or “Decorations Day,” the day itself is a day to remember and honor all military personnel who died in the line of duty. There is a federal statute that requires it to be held “the last Monday in every May.”  36 U.S.C. § 116(a). Among other things, the statute requires the President of the United States to issue a proclamation “calling on the people of the United States to observe Memorial Day by praying, according to their individual religious faith, for permanent peace." 

Memorial Day did not exist until shortly after the Civil War. According to the website for the National Cemetery Association for the Veteran’s Administration, the Ladies Memorial Association in Columbus, Georgia started a campaign to clean up the city cemetery, which was in disarray, and announced the date to do so as April 26, 1866. In a letter to the local paper, the secretary of the Ladies Memorial Association said their purpose was “to set apart a certain day to be observed...and be handed down through time as a religious custom of the country, to wreathe the graves of our martyred dead with flowers.” In one of those odd flukes of history, the city of Columbus, Mississippi, held a similar event that same year on April 25, 1866. 

The first national event, according to the same website, took place on May 30, 1868, at Arlington National Cemetery in Virginia, where around 11,250 Union soldiers and 350 Confederate soldiers were buried, over half of them unknown. The state of New York was the first state to recognize Memorial Day as an official holiday. After World War I, celebrations of Memorial Day expanded to honor all the nation’s fallen service members, not just those from the Civil War. Memorial Day was first recognized by statute as an “official” federal holiday in 1971, although Congress had passed earlier resolutions requiring proclamations from the president on May 30 at least by 1950.  

One of the best expressions of the purpose of Memorial Day was one of the earliest. The leader of a veteran’s group in 1866 issued a general order for a Memorial Day which included the following language: “Let no neglect, no ravages of time, testify to the present or to the coming generations that we have forgotten as a people the cost of a free and undivided republic.”

I hope you have had a good Memorial Day weekend, and that in the middle of it all, you had time to stop and reflect on what it means. 


Sunday, May 25, 2025

Writing and Fan Conferences by Annette Dashofy

Every time I attend a conference or any author event, I fully intend to take lots of pictures. Social media wants images, not just words. Even these blog posts are more interesting with photos. 

Last weekend, I attended the Pennwriters Conference, and did I take any pictures? Not really. I did record a video of an award presentation, because the recipient wasn’t able to attend. But otherwise, nope.

 

So, I have had to resort to thievery by stealing this photo of me teaching a workshop (photo credit to Wende Dikec.) 

For those who don’t know, writers attend a variety of different kinds of conferences and conventions. There are fan conventions such as last month’s Malice Domestic or Bouchercon. Readers flock to these to meet their favorite authors. Authors flock to these to meet readers! 

Then there are writers’ conferences such as Pennwriters. These are geared to writers (although, yes, writers are also fans of other writers) and provide workshops on craft, marketing, publishing, and such. There are agents and editors to whom attendees can pitch their manuscripts. And there are social opportunities galore, including two keynote addresses. 

It’s a chance to spend time with our tribe. 

I started attending Pennwriters conferences back in 2004 when I was a starry-eyed newbie with a horrible manuscript in hand and hope in my heart. I think I started volunteering the following year. In 2009, I served as conference coordinator. In all these years, I only missed one, and that was due to a family wedding. I’ve been teaching workshops there for quite a while now. This year, I taught three. 

Side note (to add some suspense to the weekend): As I was preparing to present my third workshop, my laptop died. My presentation depended on a PowerPoint slide show. After trying and failing to resuscitate my five-year old computer, I thanked my lucky stars that I’d thought to save the PowerPoint to a flash drive. As you can well imagine, there were more than a few laptops in the building. My traveling buddy, Liz Milliron, loaned hers to me and set it up so it was ready to roll. The workshop went off without another hitch. 

And the stupid laptop decided to come back to life the next day. In case you’re wondering, I’ve already ordered a new one, because I can’t rely on this old one anymore. Fool me once, shame on you. Fool me twice… 

From that first conference 21 years ago, when I knew nothing and no one, to this last one, life has changed immensely. No more printing out manuscripts to submit. No more snail mail queries. I’ve gone from student to teacher. But one thing that hasn’t changed is the comradery. Those of us who’ve been around for a minute offer guidance, support, and cheerleading to those who are coming up behind us. I hope I’m still able to join my tribe for this annual tradition for another 21 years. 

Have you ever attended a writers’ (or a fan) conference? If so, tell us about it.

 

 

 

  

Saturday, May 24, 2025

Monkey Mind

 by Kait Carson

Mind monkey or monkey mind, from Chinese xinyuan and Sino-Japanese shin’en 心猿 [lit. “heart-/mind-monkey”], is a Buddhist term meaning “unsettled; restless; capricious; whimsical; fanciful; inconstant; confused; indecisive; uncontrollable”. Wikipedia.

That’s the official definition of monkey mind—well, official if you buy Wikipedia’s definition. I’d first encountered the term in a meditation class. Which probably explains the Buddhist roots. The simpler definition—Oh, look! Something shiny. Or, as one of my bosses used to say when he zoned out, “Sorry, I saw a squirrel.” Yes, we can all relate. There’s nothing more enticing than the ‘next thing’.

So how does monkey mind figure into writing? Writers literally sweat words and it’s not a pretty sight. We write, delete, write, edit, write, curse, write, cry. In the old days, a small mountain of crumpled paper grew alongside our chairs. These days, we create a tree of sub files on our computers with various titles of despair. Inevitably, our monkey mind sees opportunity. It takes over, and it’s not always a bad thing.

We start out writing a dark and stormy night (not really, I hope), but our monkey mind jumps to a scene in broad daylight. There’s a man standing on a cliff, gazing at a raging storm-tossed sea below him. While we’re figuring out that scene, the monkey leaps to a hand thrusting out of wild waves, grasping desperately at nothing. Then a pale, pinched face breaks through the froth, the mouth visible as it gasps for air before sinking again. The man on the cliff laughs and turns away. So much for the dark and stormy night I’d originally conceived.

Monkey mind often takes my stories in different directions than I intend. It never gives me complete scenes, just little itchy brain bits with tantalizing hints of complications. The monkey has a mischievous side. It’s just as likely to lead me into a rabbit hole as it is to the pot of gold at the end of the rainbow. Whenever I’m stuck, I can count on my monkey mind to kick in and demonstrate the answer to the question, “What’s the worst thing that could happen here?” We make a good team. My monkey and me.

Do you have a monkey mind? How do you feel about it? How do you control it? Do you even try?

Kait Carson writes the Hayden Kent Mysteries set in the Fabulous Florida Keys and is at work on a new mystery set in her adopted state of Maine. Her short fiction has been nationally published in the Trues and Woman’s World magazines. Her short story, Gutted, Filleted, and Fried, appeared in the Falchion Finalist nominated Seventh Guppy Anthology Hook, Line, and Sinker. She is a former President of the Guppy Chapter of Sisters in Crime, a member of Sisters in Crime and Guppies. Visit her website at www.kaitcarson.com. While you’re there, sign up for her newsletter and receive a yummy, authentic, key lime pie recipe.

Friday, May 23, 2025

A Place to Write by Nancy L. Eady

Currently, my two favorite lairs for writing are the couch in the den and the desk in the study. (I don’t live in a palace; the two rooms are small and within sight of each other.). In the family room, I lean back on the couch, prop my feet up on coffee table, put a pillow or lap desk under my computer and type away. The desk is a more formal setting. And no matter how I adjust the seat, it’s never quite tall enough, so I look like a kindergartner getting ready to take a nap.  

As a writing nook, the couch comes with drawbacks. It is in the center of everything, so I have a great chance of being interrupted by my husband, my daughter or any one of our three dogs. When I started writing this, the oldest dog sat beside me for a while, and then changed places with the middle dog, who is still waiting patiently for me. But being in the middle of everything is also one of the things I like about the couch.

I also have to ignore the television, which is easy when something like football is on. I can listen to sports and still write, but when the family flips to an interesting movie or series, I have a hard time tuning it out. Although if I’m in “the zone,” we could have a tsunami, an earthquake, and a fire and I might not notice. My lair is comfortable, and the cushion on my end of the couch has molded itself to the contours of my body, so I’ll be staying for a while. 

When I first started writing, I tried my hand at freelance contract work. I earned a little money doing that, and used some of it to buy a pretty rose-wood secretary desk with a top that folds down. We put it in a corner of the spare bedroom. I used it a time or two until I discovered that the space inside the secretary when the top was folded up was the perfect place to hide books that I need to age before reading them. That way when my husband asks me where they came from, I can truthfully say that I’ve had them for a while. He’s not anti-book – far from it – but every bookcase in our house is full of double rows. My husband thinks the Kindle is the greatest invention since the wheel, because I can gather books at will and we still have living space in the house. Sometimes I still run across a “real” book that I want to add to my collection. Hence the need for the secretary as a hidey-hole and the destruction of its utility as a writing lair. Heaven help me if I ever have to dismantle the secret collection of books also stored up in my office at work! 

But, as usual, I digress. For now, the couch is the designated writing spot unless I get a sudden urge to start using the desk again or need the double monitors. Where are your favorite places to write?


Thursday, May 22, 2025

Looking for Inspiration in All the Wrong Places by Connie Berry

 


 

“Where do you get your inspiration?” Authors get asked that question all the time, and we try to answer it honestly. Which is the problem, because there really isn’t an answer—not a truthful one anyway—because inspiration isn’t the same thing as ideas.

Writers get ideas from true crime and daily news reports. We mine history and family legends. We read books and articles that capture our interest. We observe people around us and eavesdrop on the conversations of strangers. We ask that all-important question—“What if?”

Getting ideas isn’t difficult. They're everywhere. But inspiration, that illusive spark of creativity, isn’t something we can summon at will.

Glen Hansard, the Irish musician and poet once said:

“The muse holds no appointments. You can never call on it. I don’t understand people who get up at 9 o’clock in the morning, put on the coffee, and sit down to write.”

Of course, you can get up, put on the coffee, and sit down to write. We all do it—the necessary work of transferring ideas into words, sentences, paragraphs, scenes, and chapters. But Hansard wasn’t talking about craft. He was talking about true inspiration. Plato called it a kind of madness.

That madness includes not only the creativity that informs original plots and generates unforgettable characters. It also includes language itself, that magical moment when ordinary words take on a rhythm and an unexpected beauty that surprises and delights the writer as well as the reader.

James Joyce once gave an example of the beauty of language in Jesus’ words when he stands before the tomb of Lazarus. In French, Joyce said, the words would be “Jeune homme, je te dit, lève-toi.” But in English, Joyce said, it would be, “Young man, I say unto thee, arise,” the sound carrying with it, he said, the image of rising. (Dinita Smith, “Writing and Madness”) https://centerforfiction.org/writing-tools/writing-and-madness/

So where is true inspiration to be found? I don’t believe it is found. It finds us and is received with an appropriate sense of wonder and gratitude.

The goal is to create an atmosphere that invites inspiration.

For me, creating an atmosphere conducive to receiving the gift of inspiration means slowing down, daydreaming, allowing my thoughts to wander down paths that appear irrelevant—some would call it wasting time.

Where does the muse find you? How do you invite the gift of inspiration?

Wednesday, May 21, 2025

Killer Questions - Why We Write Rather Than Doing Something Else


Killer Questions – Why We Write Rather Than Doing Something Else

K.M. Rockwood: My life feels empty if I don’t have at least one story in progress. And there’s no thrill like seeing you work in print and being shared with others.

Heather Weidner: Writing was always an outlet where I got to be as creative as I wanted. 

Martha Reed: That’s easy. It’s the feeling of pure joy I get whenever a story reveals itself and knits together. That’s when I hunch over my keyboard, evilly giggle, and think: “Oh, that’s good.” Plus, I never look at my writing as a job (although I work at it daily like it is one).

Connie Berry: Well, since I retired from my other job, I can't go back even if I wanted to. But writing isn't a job; it's a life. I love the saying, "You're not a writer because you write. You write because you're a writer." So true.

Grace Topping: I spent my daytime job as a writer-editor, so I've been writing nearly my whole life. Some people after that probably wouldn't want to write another thing. But since I had written about some pretty boring technical things, I liked the challenge of using my imagination and trying my hand at fiction. The first thing I had to do was overcome the feeling of being self-conscious that people would think I was my main character. 

Paula G. Benson: I get to create a world I understand, a place that’s familiar and comforting. My characters may have struggles, but they can find their way through to resolution.

James M. Jackson: Two things, both of which are selfish. I very much enjoy people telling me they like reading my stories, and I am continually learning new things. If either of those stopped happening, I'd stop writing.

Sarah Burr: My characters and my readers. I cherish the time I spend with my characters and am passionate about sharing stories with people—many of whom I've never met (or hadn't met before writing). Connecting with those who truly appreciate the worlds I create is incredibly rewarding.

Annette Dashofy: Because it’s really the only job I feel qualified to hold.

Kait Carson: It’s where I feel most at home. 

Lori Roberts Herbst: Taming the creative urge, I suppose. That or attempting to quiet all the voices chattering in my head.

Margaret Hamilton: To quote my mother: "When are you going to stop wasting time and do something with your writing?" Writing for me is like breathing.

Korina Moss: It gives me purpose. And I adore the readers and fellow authors I’ve met and the friends I’ve made in the mystery writing community.

Debra H. Goldstein: Because it brings me joy.

Nancy Eady: I can't seem to NOT write, no matter how hard I try to completely let it go.

Mary Dutta: I keep coming back because I have more stories to tell.

Molly MacRae: I love everything about stories and books.

Shari Randall: At this point in my life, I can't imagine not writing.



Tuesday, May 20, 2025

An Interview with Actor, Director, and Screenwriter Geoffrey Allen Murphy

 by Paula Gail Benson

Geoffrey Allen Murphy

As many of our readers and all my blogging partners know, I love theater, both live and on screen. When I hear, “go to a show,” it’s like a dog hearing, “take a walk.” I’m ready. Any time. Any place. 

So, imagine what a thrill it was to hear that my friend’s (excellent writer Carol L. Wright) son Geoffrey Allen Murphy was on Broadway in the company of To Kill a Mockingbird and that he alternated in playing the role of Boo Radley. Talk about theater geek girl overload!

I very much wish I could have seen Geoff’s Broadway performances in To Kill a Mockingbird or The Nance (with Nathan Lane). I am delighted to have watched him in this year’s season finale of Elsbeth. (If you haven’t seen it, go now immediately to CBS or Paramount Plus.) He plays Rocco, a prison guard with a love of cats.

Geoff’s looks have often led to him being cast as the heavy in the work he has done. He’s now involved in a very personal project—So, You’re Dying—a short film he’s written, is directing, and in which he is playing the leading character. Reading about it made me want to contribute to the funding. Check out what he says in this interview and see if you might feel the same.

Welcome Geoffrey Allen Murphy to Writers Who Kill!

Geoff, I just saw your performance on the season finale for Elsbeth. You were fabulous! I hope they ask you back as a regular. It looked like a good possibility from the storyline.

GEOFF: Thank you so much for your kind words. Working on Elsbeth was a true delight. Carrie Preston, Showrunner Jonathan Tolins, the episode director Lionel Coleman, and the whole team could not have been a kinder, more generous group of insanely talented professionals to work with.

When did you know you wanted to become an actor?

GEOFF: It is hard to say when exactly I knew. I had been involved in school theater as a child and my parents took me to see theater from a young age. It was always something I enjoyed but I think I only got serious about it when I reached high school. Part of that was that we moved from a town where there wasn't a community theater scene to one with a thriving community theater program. Making theater with people who took it seriously, even though it was purely a labor of love, told me this was something I really wanted to pursue.

Geoff Murphy in
A Funny Thing
Happened on the
Way to the Forum

You trained at Julliard and with legendary performers from musical theater. What were those experiences like? Is that the kind of training you would recommend for aspiring actors?

GEOFF: I had my heart set on studying at Juilliard from the time I started looking at colleges. The history it has, the caliber of teaching, to be training at the best acting school (possibly on the planet), all of it was appealing. But as anyone can tell you, getting into Juilliard is a challenging endeavor. I was rejected twice before I was finally accepted as I was leaving my undergraduate studies.

It is a magical place to study as you walk through the labyrinthine halls and hear the echo of music played by virtuosos. I've never felt as cool as I did when I was studying there. That said, it was impossibly challenging. The incredibly long hours of class followed by rehearsal for plays and rehearsals for scenes for class... I think I never had more than 4 hours of sleep for 4 years. It was psychologically draining in a way I have never experienced anywhere else. I am incredibly grateful for the experience though. I learned a lot about myself. I learned a ton about the craft of acting. I made lifelong friends. And I acquired a lot of emotional scars—hahaha.

Do I recommend it to others? Not necessarily. It is a lot to put yourself through, and there is nothing that you learn at Juilliard that you cannot learn somewhere else. What makes Juilliard Drama (and its unofficial sister programs Yale Grad and NYU Grad) special is that all of the knowledge and skills and elite teachers are all put in one place for your mandatory participation. When you hear about getting your 10,000 hours in, those programs will make you do that. There are tons of incredible actors who have trained elsewhere and others who haven't trained at all.

With acting, you learn by doing, and doing it poorly, and then doing it again a tiny bit better. The greatest and most important skill in an aspiring actor is resilience, and perhaps a tad of stubbornness. You are going to be told “no” a million times, but if you keep going and most importantly putting in the work to improve while being rejected, eventually you will find a place in the business.

Another important thing to remember though is that training at a program like Juilliard in no way guarantees a career in the business. A large number of Juilliard Drama graduates don't wind up working in the field through a variety of turn-of-life events. And that can be great. The important thing is that people pursue their own happiness. The famous thing you will hear over and over is that if you can be happy doing anything else, you should. This business is too hard and heartbreaking and unpredictable to go into unless you absolutely have to.

Geoff Murphy with the cast of The Nance

What was it like to work with Nathan Lane in The Nance?

GEOFF: Nathan is one of the greatest performers living today. I continue to feel lucky that I was able to work with him for 7 months. To observe his process, to get to know him. He is an enigmatic person, and his dedication to the craft is total. His knowledge of the art form and the history of theater and comedy is comprehensive. I've worked with many great actors over the years, but I certainly haven't worked with anyone I would describe as being better than Nathan

There are many kinds of great when it comes to acting, and Nathan is a unique kind of great. One of the magical things about Nathan is how meticulous he is in crafting his work. He is better than anyone I have ever seen at making a planned moment feel improvisational even to those who are performing with him, and the way he can dissect why a moment did or didn't get a laugh is incredible. Sometimes it really is just a matter of standing a foot further downstage when a moment happens.

How difficult is it to find work on Broadway, in television, and in the movies? What is it like to work with an agent and casting directors?

GEOFF: Oof. It is incredibly hard. It is incredibly random. After I got out of school I learned three rules right away: (1) It is never going to make any sense. (2) It is always going to come down to something you can't control. (3) Those who care least win.

Getting work as an actor is in large part about luck. Did a writer write a part that is right for you in terms of type? Are they lucky enough to get that piece produced? Can you even get considered for the role due to your resume and who you know? It honestly is a miracle that anyone ever gets a job. And, in my experience, it never gets profoundly easier.

Having an agent is helpful, but most agents can only get you "in the room" (more metaphorical these days in the "self tape" era). Having casting directors who believe in you is fantastic, and I am lucky to have a few of those. But again they can only put your hat in the ring. The decisions are made by a group of people (producers, creatives, etc.) with different opinions and priorities and tastes.

For every person who gets a job, there are dozens of people who would also be great in the part. It often comes down to things you can't control. You're too tall. You're too short. You look like someone a member of the team doesn't like from high school. It is random. All you can do is try and put out your best work and then forget about it. Hope for the best, but forget about it, and be happy if you get the gig, and try not to be too bitter when you don't. When you do get a job, it is important to be grateful, and save your money, because in this feast or famine business, when you feast, you must prepare for the famine. The famine always comes.

Geoff Murphy backstage in War Horse

You come from a family of writers. (Geoff’s father is Dr. Bruce Allen Murphy, who has written biographies of U.S. Supreme Court justices Antonin Scalia, Abe Fortas, William O. Douglas, and Louis D. Brandeis and Felix Frankfurter, and has co-authored 10 editions of an American Government textbook, Approaching Democracy; his mother is Carol L. Wright, a member of the Bethlehem Writers Group and noted author of short stories and cozy mysteries, including Death in Glenville Falls and Apple, Table, Penny . . . Murder; and his sister Emily P. W. Murphy has written short stories and a children’s picture book as well as edited Hook, Line, and Sinker, the Seventh Guppy Anthology.) When did you decide to try your hand at writing and how would you describe your screenplays?

GEOFF: It is an unusual thing that everyone else in my family writes. I didn't really know that as a child but looking back it was kind of odd in that my Father was frequently home but also "at work" up in the attic working on one of his incredible biographies. My mother got serious about her writing later in my childhood, and my sister shortly after that as I recall. I was the last one by a mile, and I only did so out of a desire for a form of artistic expression that I had control over.

As I said earlier, an actor has essentially no control over what he gets cast as and considered for, and when you look like me, you almost exclusively get hired to play murderers, and cops, and cops who murder, and cop murderers etc. etc. If you want to show your range, you have to make your own work. Something that I recommend to any actor, and something that is impossibly hard as well (there is a theme here).

I had dabbled in writing here and there, but only became more serious about it in the last few years. I have a couple half-written-terribly plays on an old hard drive somewhere, and some bad pilots and a half-written hackneyed screenplay from years ago, as well, but like the acting thing I said earlier, you have to make bad art before you can make good art. I am still working my way towards being the writer I want to be, but everyday I come a little closer. Long way to go yet. I gravitate towards screenplays and plays because that is the writing I come in contact with more often due to my line of work, and because I am trying to write projects that I can act in as well.

My writing tends towards what I would describe as dark comedy, which I feel is a fairly accurate description of life. Perhaps that is a little pessimistic, but bad things happen in life all the time, and the way I cope is through laughter.

Tell us about the project for which you are currently seeking funding. How can people contribute?

GEOFF: One of the profound challenges of writing something as a screenplay or play is that the only real way for it to be consumed as intended is for it to be produced. Screenplays and plays can obviously be read but that is not how they are intended to be experienced. They are blueprints for production. And getting things produced is very hard and very expensive. Which leads to why I wanted to write a short film. Something I could conceivably make myself. But I had no idea what to write about. Short films are tricky. Many of the best short films don't have a traditional narrative arc. They more capture a feeling, a moment, an experience. It was while I was looking for a short film idea that I had a pretty profoundly bad day. My doctor told me I was going to die. Not crazy soon, but within the next few years. I then had to go to work catering for Micro Influencers while I processed that information and figured out how to break that news to my fiancée. It was a bad day.

I have an, as yet still undiagnosed, vascular disorder that causes the inner lining of my arteries to tear, which we only became aware of in the last few years. It made sense of a lot of mysterious medical problems I had experienced in the years prior (a stroke and some cardiovascular events). I had been dealing with that but had been told that if managed properly I should be able to live a full life. Then that doctor appointment happened. It threw my whole world off kilter. I was a wreck. My therapist told me to write about it, mostly from a therapeutic standpoint, so I did, and out came "So, You're Dying" a fever dream of all my complex and confusing medical experiences over that previous decade, a window into my mind at the most bleak moment I had ever experienced. It was a dark comedy. Two weeks later, thank God, I received a better prognosis from a very respected doctor, but the short had still been written. I decided to make it. Maybe it could help others. I have been hard at work assembling a great team (luckily I know a lot of great actors), and right now we are in the unpleasant phase of raising money for the project. It's not the fun part of making art, but it is completely necessary. That is why we have our crowdfunding campaign running currently on Seed & Spark which has a little less than two weeks left. If anyone would be interested in contributing I would be very grateful.

I think the film is going to be very special.

The link for the crowdfund is: https://seedandspark.com/fund/so-youre-dying

Thanks so much for helping me get the word out there, Paula!

Geoff Murphy in A Flea in Her Ear at Williamstown 

Geoff, thank you and break a leg or two with your film (and your prognosis). For anyone who wants to read more about Geoff’s career, here’s a link to his website: Geoffrey Allen Murphy - Home.