Tuesday, December 28, 2021

The Ghost Who Didn’t Believe in Herself

 by Paula Gail Benson

From: Pixabay
 

           Pressing the buzzer on the entrance’s stone column caused the towering wrought iron gates to open sedately. As Miles Henshaw drove onto the estate, his new wife, Clare, and Clare’s ten-year-old daughter Dorrie watched in silence as they passed the clean, well-tended, seemingly endless lawn. When the mansion came into view, Miles stopped, allowing them to take in the enormity of the structure.

The stillness was interrupted by a gnarled fist rapping against the driver’s window. When Miles opened it, an elderly, humped-back man wearing a dark work uniform asked if he could be of service.

“No, thank you,” Clare answered. “We’re expected.”

They parked the car in the drive beside the mansion and stood before the massive exterior entrance doorway. Clare simply swooned.

“It’s impressive, isn’t it?” Her voice purred as she squeezed Miles’ hand. Turning back to Dorrie, who carried a packed duffle, she said, “Darling, you must try to make a good impression. Aunt Astrid never really fancied me, but if she took to you, she might leave you everything. She has no one else.”

Miles nodded as he turned about taking it all in. “Not to mention, what a great place this is for you to spend school holidays when your mother and I are out of the country.”

Dorrie assumed from the eagerness with which the lovebirds planned their Christmastime delayed honeymoon, their trips outside the country could be quite frequent. Of course, having a place to deposit the bride’s daughter during school breaks would be advantageous.

The great door opened. A tall blonde woman, past middle age, but still youthful in appearance, greeted them.

 “Serenity Walcott!” Clare exclaimed. “You simply never age, do you?”

“Only in unexpected ways,” Serenity replied with a smile. “Please come in. Your aunt is waiting for you. Mr. Henshaw, she’s especially looking forward to meeting you.”

The newlyweds exchanged a glance. “And I her,” Miles said.

Serenity took a moment to observe Dorrie. “Miss Pandora Whittaker, it’s been too long since last I saw you.”

“Oh, we’ve simplified things a lot these days,” Clare said. “She’s just Dorrie and I’m Clare instead of Clarissa.”

Serenity looked skeptical, but spoke as if in agreement. “Very sensible, considering modern technology, particularly with the limited characters on Twitter responses.”

Henshaw laughed. “Seems anachronistic to be talking about modern social media in this ancient edifice,” he observed.

Serenity gave him a discerning look. “You might be surprised how often discussions of technical advances have taken place in this house. Some family members were quite enamored with the sciences.”

Extending her arm toward the hall, Serenity ushered them inside before closing the door. Then, she took them through a series of front rooms adorned with heavy curtains and furniture upholstered in velvets and tapestries. Above a massive mantelpiece hung a life-sized portrait of twin girls, likely in their early twenties. One stood straight and tall, peering out with piercing eyes. The other sat, misty-eyed, with a dreamy expression. They wore identical flowing pastel dresses and posed at the edge of a garden bursting in blooms. An ancient wooden fence rose just behind the flowers. One of the fence boards seemed to contain writing or drawing. It was difficult to see clearly.

Dorrie stopped, transfixed by the painting. Her mother and stepfather moved forward toward the back of the house. Serenity remained at the connecting doorway, watching Dorrie’s face.

“Hurry, darling,” Clare called.

Serenity walked over and placed her arm around Dorrie’s shoulders. “After you meet your aunt, you’ll have to tell me which twin she is.”

“Aunt Astrid has a twin?”

“She did. Miss Ingrid passed away many years ago. Not long after that painting was completed.” Serenity stared up at the portrait. “Her death changed your aunt’s life dramatically.”

 They walked into a large room with a wall of windows. Through the sheer drapery panels, hazy shapes of a portico and bushes were visible. In the center of the room, a white haired woman sat on a wheelchair, her right elbow perched on the arm support so her hand could cup her chin. She gazed toward the shrouded grounds as if not really caring about the view.

“Auntie, how glorious to see you,” Clare cried out, clutching her husband’s hand tightly. She stopped a few feet in front of Aunt Astrid.

Lifting her head, Aunt Astrid gazed at the group assembled before her. She sighed. “I presume this is your spouse?”

 “Indeed it is!” Clare smiled and grasped her husband’s hand more tightly. “Aunt Astrid, this is Miles Henshaw. Miles, darling, this is my aunt, Astrid Eagerton.”

“Such a pleasure, madam.” Miles made a step in Aunt Astrid’s direction, but Clare pulled him back beside her.

Aunt Astrid’s lower lip bulged forward. “I would have come to your wedding if I had been invited.”

“I know, Auntie,” Clare chattered. “The elopement was very romantic for us, but completely dissatisfying for family and friends. We mean to make amends by having a huge party in the new year. We promise that you’ll be the guest of honor.”

“How perfectly ridiculous to honor an elderly spinster at a wedding reception. I suppose you suggest it because you want me to host it here.”

The response genuinely stunned Clare, and confirmed that Aunt Astrid had never really fancied her. “Of course, we would have no right to expect such an extravagance,” Clare said.

“You seem confident enough to leave your daughter here for the holiday while you head off to tropical locales.”

This time, Miles took his step forward. “Please know how grateful we are for your generous hospitality. If you would be willing to have our reception here, I would certainly pay all expenses as well as a rental fee.”

Aunt Astrid took a moment to look him over before dismissing him with a wave of her hand. “This home is not a rentable event venue, but I gladly open it to family celebrations. We can discuss details later. I’m sure you’re anxious to begin your journey.”

Clare moved to tentatively kiss her aunt’s cheek. “Thank you so much. May you have the best ever of holidays!”

“It will be what it is,” Aunt Astrid replied.

Miles bowed. “Delighted to meet you, Miss Eagerton.” He gently cuffed Dorrie on the shoulder. “Take care, young scamp!”

“My sweet darling.” Clare pulled Dorrie close in an embrace. “We will miss you dreadfully, but how we shall celebrate when we are all together again.”

As Serenity escorted the couple out, Dorrie found herself alone with her aunt, who took the time to examine her from head to toe.

Finally, Aunt Astrid spoke. “Pandora seems a bit pretentious. What do they call you at school?”

“Dorrie.”

“Like that fish in the cartoon?”

“Yes. Except spelled with two ‘r’s’ and an ‘ie’ instead of a single ‘r’ and ‘y.’”

Aunt Astrid shook her head. “A poor choice.”

Dorrie traced a pattern in the carpet with the toe of her shoe. “I suppose it’s preferable to ‘Panda’ or ‘Ora,’ although there’s nothing wrong with either of those.”

“Huh.” Aunt Astrid rolled her eyes. “Your father was a fanciful sort, but I rather admired his desire for you to have a classical name. I doubt he’d approve of having it shortened. I shall take the matter under advisement and let you know when I determine how to address you.”

“May I call you Aunt Astrid?”

The question seemed to please her. “Yes, thank you. I can think of no alternative.” When Serenity reappeared at the doorway, Aunt Astrid turned to her. “Please escort the child to her room. Whichever one you think appropriate, just not the one we discussed.”

Serenity led the way back through the rooms they had passed. Dorrie took a moment to look again at the portrait. She wasn’t sure which twin was Astrid and which Ingrid.

As they went up the broad staircase, Dorrie asked, “What room did Aunt Astrid not want me to stay in?”

Serenity gazed back, then continued climbing. “Don’t take any offense. Miss Astrid doesn’t like for anyone to go into the rooms she shared with Miss Ingrid when they were young. She barely lets us keep them dusted.”

“Why?”

“That’s a good question. Miss Astrid used to go there often herself, until her arthritis left her dependent upon the wheelchair and restricted to the first floor. I believe she hoped to find a message from her sister in their childhood suite.”

“What kind of message?”

Serenity stopped at a door. “You should be very comfortable here. Let me help you get your things put away.”

With its mahogany canopy bed and writing desk, the room seemed a very dreary, adult place to Dorrie. They unpacked her bag, and Serenity showed her the connecting bathroom where fresh towels awaited.

“Now, is there anything else I can do for you?” Serenity asked.

Dorrie was about to ask for more information about the twins when a bell rang.

“Please excuse me. I need to check with your aunt. Dinner will be at six o’clock sharp. Come downstairs a little before that time and I’ll take you to the dining room.”

Serenity hurried off. Dorrie looked around the room. No reading matter or television. Dorrie didn’t feel like spending the time on her tablet.

Exiting, she made her way along the upstairs hallway, passing by portraits of stern looking ancestors and closed doors. As she neared the end of the hall, and was ready to turn around, she heard the soft tinny notes of an old-fashioned song, “My Wild Irish Rose.”

Listening closely, Dorrie located the room with the music and opened the door. For a moment, she felt blinded by the sunlight. When she could focus, she saw white furniture groupings and white bookcases lining the walls. In the center, twin desks and chairs faced the windows. A tall woman--her hair cut short in a bob; her dress long and straight, ending just below her knee; and her skinny legs in dark stockings crossed and propped across one desk--sat holding a music box.

She glanced in Dorrie’s direction. “Took you long enough.”

Dorrie had become fascinated by the image on the top of the music box--a painting of a sweet, cherub-like face ringed by curls and wearing a morning glory blossom upside down on its head, like a pointed hat. She turned her attention to the woman. “I beg your pardon?”

“You might well do so, since you’ve taken so much time to get here.”

Dorrie didn’t understand why she was being criticized. “I just arrived.”

“You’ve been well on your way to this spot since you saw the portrait. Hearing that you shouldn’t be in one room of the house piqued your curiosity to find the forbidden place.”

Dorrie had to concede that was true. “Have you been waiting for me?”

“Of course not.” The woman swung her legs off the desk, closed the music box, and put it down. “You’ve been conjuring me up. I’m a figment of your imagination.”

Dorrie hadn’t conversed with an imaginary figment before. “You look very real to me.”

Standing, the woman shrugged her shoulders and took a few steps toward the windows. “I would expect nothing less from your imagination.”

“Thank you,” Dorrie said. “Could you tell me who you are?”

“Ingrid, of course.”

Dorrie took a closer look. “Yes, I see a resemblance to the portrait.”

“But, to which twin?”

Dorrie examined her critically. Ingrid seemed sharp and direct, like the twin with the piercing gaze. But, somehow, Dorrie couldn’t imagine Aunt Astrid as dewy eyed and dreamy.

“I’m not sure. Both, I suppose.”

“Many people confused us, mostly because they didn’t know us and took no time to learn about us. They’d say, ‘Those are the Eagerton twins.’ Never, ‘that’s Astrid, whose drawings capture the essence of their subjects, or that’s Ingrid, who’s brilliant at the sciences.’ Only Wilton Smythe looked deeper.”

“Who’s Wilton Smythe?”

“The portrait painter, of course.” Ingrid sighed dramatically, crisscrossing her arms around her waist. “Astrid always suspected that he loved me instead of her.”

“Did he?”

Ingrid turned to face her. “Why are you asking me questions for which you don’t have the answers?”

“You’ve already provided information I didn’t know.”

Ingrid shook her head. “You’re mistaken.”

Dorrie remained resolute. “I didn’t know Wilton Smythe’s name until you told me.”

Ingrid rolled her eyes. “Then you must have seen his signature on the portrait.”

“But, I didn’t,” Dorrie insisted. “I was looking at the faces.”

Ingrid stamped a foot. “Well, Wilton’s always skulking around pretending to look after the landscaping so he can be near Astrid. He’ll never quit hoping that she’ll forgive him for helping me.”

Dorrie thought back to the man they met after coming through the gate. “We did see someone on the lawn.”

“Bent over and wearing a black jump suit?” When Dorrie nodded, Ingrid continued, “That’s him. You must have seen his name stitched on a pocket.”

Dorrie shook her head. “No, I didn’t. Look, why are you purposely trying to hide your identity?”

Ingrid tilted her head and scrunched her eyebrows. “How dare you accuse me, and what on earth do you mean?”

Dorrie gave her a quick nod. “On earth exactly. Since Ingrid is deceased, you can’t be here, except as a ghost. That’s what I believe you are--a ghost, not something I’ve made up.”

Ingrid threw her head back, laughed, and flopped back into the desk chair. “You are fanciful. Just like your father.”

“You couldn’t have known my father.”

“But, you did.” Ingrid propped her legs back across the desk. “Which is why my contention, that I’m a figment of your imagination, is more probable than me being a ghost. What you’ve made up about me is based more on your own creative speculations than any facts. Besides, as a student of science, I know ghosts aren’t real.”

Remembering her own scientific studies, Dorrie recognized something false about that statement. “How do you know ghosts aren’t real? Can you prove it?”

Ingrid stared at her coolly. “I don’t have to prove nonexistence when there is no credible evidence of a being in reality. Ghosts are the stuff of legends and belief systems. They have been used by charlatans to manipulate, storytellers to entertain, and . . .,” she paused, maintaining eye contact, “by children to analyze situations they don’t understand. That is why you have conceived me.”

As Dorrie formulated a response, she heard Serenity’s voice calling to her from below. “Please wash your hands and come downstairs, dear. Your aunt has decided to have dinner early.”

Ingrid stretched out her arms and legs. “By all means answer the call. No doubt your mind can summon me up at a later time, if you’re still interested.”

Dorrie headed to the door, looking back to see if Ingrid had levitated from her position across the desk. No one was there, which convinced Dorrie all the more that Ingrid was a ghost.

“If I had imagined you, then I would have made you polite enough to not disappear until I had left,” Dorrie said to the empty room.

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The meal offered simple fare: a hearty beef and vegetable soup accompanied by a crusty roll with creamy butter. Dorrie figured it was to let her know that a great house did not always provide sumptuous cuisine. She didn’t mind, particularly when served a treacle tart for dessert.

She remained preoccupied with the ghost or figment she had experienced upstairs. She didn’t realize how quiet she had been until Aunt Astrid asked, “Why are you so lost in contemplation?”

Dorrie shrugged. “I don’t know.”

Aunt Astrid made a huffing sound. “Of course you do. You’re just reluctant to tell me.”

Dorrie considered that Aunt Astrid was always forthright. Perhaps she should be, too. “That’s true,” she admitted.

“Good.” Aunt Astrid nodded. “Tell me anyway.”

How was the best way to put it? “It’s hard to explain.”

“Tell me the question you’re pondering.”

“Have you . . .,” Dorrie hesitated, took a deep breath, and continued, “ever had to convince someone they were real?”

Aunt Astrid sat back in her chair. “That’s a very peculiar thought.”

“I know. I’m sorry to bother you.”

“What would you consider doing, to convince someone?”

Dorrie thought for a moment. “If it were a usual situation, I would pinch the person.”

Aunt Astrid laughed. “Good answer. Show the person by a sensory response. My scientific sister would approve. Why can’t you pinch the person?”

Dorrie was elated to hear her aunt mention Ingrid, but puzzled as to how to answer the question. “This person is difficult to get close to.”

Aunt Astrid straightened her back, holding her head higher. “I hope you don’t mean me.”

“Oh, no, Aunt Astrid. I’m very sure you know you are real.”

Aunt Astrid laughed again. “And, I presume you don’t question your reality, because if you pinched yourself, you might still wonder if that action was real or imagined.”

“True.”

“You have admirable intelligence. Let me ask you a question. Have you ever heard of pareidolia?”

Dorrie shook her head. “No.”

“Well, it’s how a brain processes information by putting all the sensory pieces together. Have you ever looked at the clouds and seen shapes of animals or thought there was a face on the moon?”

Dorrie had to admit she had.

“That’s how pareidolia works,” Aunt Astrid continued. “It translates what a person sees or experiences based on what the person knows of life.”

Dorrie nodded without really understanding. “Yes, ma’am,” she said to be polite. “How did you learn about it?”

“From my sister. We talked about it while having our portrait painted. But, I see that you don’t truly comprehend. If you did, I’d see the light in your eyes. Never hesitate to ask questions. Let me try another example. Do you know the musical, Hello Dolly?”

“No, ma’am.”

“I will tell your mother that your education is lacking. Hello Dolly is the story of a woman who acts as a matchmaker for others while seeking a spouse for herself.”

Dorrie didn’t see the connection with pareidolia, but continued to nod politely.

“The matchmaker’s first husband had a saying. ‘Money, pardon the expression, is like manure. It’s not worth a thing unless it’s spread around, encouraging young things to grow.’”

Dorrie still had no idea what it all meant, but she had to stop nodding. She was getting dizzy.

“The matchmaker picked out her new spouse, but wanted a sign from her first husband that he approved.”

“Her dead first husband?” Dorrie found this remarkable. She couldn’t imagine her mother seeking her dead father’s permission to remarry.

“Exactly.” Aunt Astrid’s eyes twinkled. “Do you know how she got the sign?”

“No.”

“She heard her intended speak the same words her first husband used to say about money. To her, that confirmed that her first husband approved and that she could continue to live as a community benefactress.”

Dorrie pondered what she had just heard. At first it seemed to support the argument that Ingrid was a figment rather than a ghost, but then she thought a little more. “It was sort of like the matchmaker’s intended channeled a message from her first husband.”

Aunt Astrid thought about that for a minute before agreeing. “Yes, particularly since the intended seemed to be a stingy man while the first husband had been generous.”

“Thank you, Aunt Astrid. You’ve given me a lot to consider.”

#######

During the next morning, while a huge evergreen was being delivered and set up in the room with the portrait, Dorrie wandered outside onto the portico. In the winter, the garden had only short green bushes along dark patches of ground where flowers would bloom in the spring. Following the path, Dorrie reached the place where a set of weathered boards remained anchored in the soil, remnants of a fence. As she drew closer, Dorrie noticed a pattern on one of the boards. She reached out to touch it, wondering if it had occurred naturally or been drawn there.

“Young miss, you’ll take care, please,” a voice called to her.

She turned to see the dark-uniformed caretaker who had asked if her family needed assistance when they arrived. He took off his cap and bowed his head slightly.

“Might be you think it silly,” he told her, “with those boards so close to falling down, but they have a sentimental meaning, you see, so I mean to preserve them as long as possible.”

“They are in the portrait with the twins,” Dorrie said.

Smiling, the man replaced his cap. “You noticed.”

“Oh, yes. And this one,” she pointed to the pattern, “reminds me of an image I’ve seen. A child or maybe a fairy wearing a morning glory blossom as a pointed hat.”

The man’s face turned ashen. “You saw it drawn? Where?”

“In the twins’ room. On a music box that played ‘My Wild Irish Rose.’”

Somehow, the man’s face grew paler. “But that’s impossible.”

“Why?”

He shook his head. “That box left here long ago.”

“With Ingrid?”

He looked frightened by her question. “How is it you know?”

“The same way I know you’re Wilton Smythe. Ingrid haunts this place and told me. She carries the music box with her.”

He stood, eying the cold, hard ground as if reasoning out what he had just heard. Finally, he sighed. “I can’t say I’m surprised. She wouldn’t let go of this place without her whole story being told. She only left because she thought she might never have another chance to work at a lab and that was her life’s dream, to make wonderful discoveries and better the world. How she would have loved to work on a cure for the arthritis that plagues Astrid.”

“Tell me about her. Tell me about the three of you.”

He pointed toward a bench. After Dorrie followed and sat, he perched beside her and began the telling. “We grew up in this community, the three of us the same age. The twins had private tutors while I went to the small public school, with all the year-groups in a single room. When Mr. Eagerton learned I had some artistic talent, he invited me to take drawing lessons with his daughters in their home. I’d finished public school and had no means to go to college, so I gladly accepted, along with a job to keep up the landscaping. Astrid and I loved composing pictures and painting, while Ingrid excelled at copying images with precision and detail. She adored filling her notebooks with sketches of plants and animals. Observing how things were put together gave her the same joy as solving a mathematic equation.

“Back in those days, the goal for young ladies was to marry well, have families, and keep organized homes. Astrid’s love of art seemed an appropriate hobby that provided decorating skill, but Ingrid’s wanting to be a scientist was viewed as odd. Her father forbade her to study the biology and chemistry texts she found so captivating. She defied him by finding a position with a lab in Birmingham. I agreed to take her to the station after the rest of the house had gone to sleep.”

He leaned against the back of the bench, breathing hard, as if talking had taken something out of him. “Late that night, Ingrid snuck out of the house and got into my old truck. We rode along in silence for a bit. Then I noticed she was crying.

“‘What’s the matter?’ I asked. ‘I’m leaving without a remembrance of my sister,’ she said. I felt like saying, can’t you look in the mirror, but that seemed unkind when she was so forlorn. So I did a thing I shouldn’t have done and now live to regret.”

Dorrie patted his hand. “You loved her very much.”

“No!” He drew his hand away. “Oh, I liked Ingrid well enough, but my heart belonged to Astrid. Always has. If only I’d just consoled Ingrid that night, or even taken her back home, things might have been different. Instead, I gave her the music box I’d made for Astrid. The one with the image you described, the fairy wearing a bloom for a hat. What, as young art students, we thought we saw in the plank from the old wooden fence.”

“That’s why you included the fence in the portrait.”

“Yes. That’s why. For Christmas that year, I had found a music box that played ‘My Wild Irish Rose,’ the song I hummed for Astrid, and painted the image on the cover. I planned to give it to her and ask her to marry me. Sadly, that was all I had to offer Ingrid. She took it with her to Birmingham. When she was killed in a traffic accident, crossing the road as she left the station, her bag was returned to the family. Seeing the music box among Ingrid’s possessions, Astrid thought that meant I had loved Ingrid instead of her. I heard Astrid threw the box away. She’s only spoken to me in passing since.”

Dorrie took his hand. “I have an idea.” She whispered her thoughts in his ear.

As he listened, he became more animated. “Yes, yes,” he agreed. “That I can do.”

“Then, bring it with you and return tonight as we are finishing the tree.”

#######

Following dinner that evening, Serenity had a fire going in the room with the portrait and Christmas tree. She wheeled Miss Astrid in to admire the decorations while having a cup of tea.

Giving it a thorough once over, Astrid agreed, “It is quite handsomely appointed. I commend your efforts.”

“There is one ornament more, Aunt Astrid,” Dorrie told her. “May I invite in a Christmas guest?”

“It seems a late hour for visiting.”

“But, this is important and already has been delayed too long,” Dorrie said.

The doorbell rang. Serenity went to answer it and returned with Wilton Smythe, still dressed in his black uniform and holding his cap in his hands.

Aunt Astrid flinched. “We have no need to communicate.”

“Please Aunt Astrid,” Dorrie begged. “See what he has brought.”

Wilton handed her a flat, round wooden circle with a painting of the fairy wearing a bloom hat. “I drew this for you many years ago, placing it on a music box that played ‘My Wild Irish Rose,’ the tune I always hummed for you. I gave the box to Ingrid because she was sad about leaving home. I thought I could make another for you, but after she was killed and you found the box in her bag, you presumed my love had been for her.” Slowly, he knelt beside the wheelchair. “I admired Ingrid’s intelligence, but I loved only you. I still love only you.”

The logs in the fireplace crackled. The firelight shone in Wilton Smythe’s and Astrid Eagerton’s eyes.

“I’ve been such an old fool,” Astrid said, dropping the ornament in her lap and reaching for Wilton’s hands.

He lifted her fingers to his lips. “No more so than I.”

Quietly, Serenity stepped forward to retrieve the ornament. “We’ll place this on the tree and leave you alone to talk.”

As Serenity hung the ornament, Dorrie looked at the portrait. It had a third figure. A younger version of Wilton knelt beside the sitting girl who looked at him adoringly. Meanwhile, her standing sister looked out toward Dorrie and winked.

Declining Serenity’s offer of hot chocolate, Dorrie took the steps two at a time to the second floor. She opened the door to the twins’ room. The moonlight shown on the white furnishings making them glisten. The music box sat on the desk where Ingrid had lounged.

Beside the music box, Dorrie found a note with her name. She opened it to read: “I concede you are correct. I am a ghost, haunting this place until I could find someone to believe me and return the music box to my sister. I entrust that task to you. In your future, may you come to value pareidolia as we did. With gratitude, Ingrid P.S. Despite being incorrigible, pinching me would have been a sound method of proving reality, if it could have been accomplished. Farewell.”

#######

When Miles and Clare returned to the mansion on the morning of December 30th, they found themselves surprisingly intruding upon a rollicking party.

Greeting them at the door, Serenity welcomed them warmly. “Mr. and Mrs. Wilton Smythe will be so delighted you returned in time for their wedding reception.”

“Mr. and Mrs. Wilton Smythe?” Clare asked.

“Your Aunt Astrid, of course,” Serenity explained. “She wanted to have the ceremony while Pandora was still here and could be her attendant.”

“Pandora?” Miles asked.

“Yes, Mrs. Smythe and your lovely stepdaughter much prefer that to a nickname. Come join them. The bride is about to toss the bouquet.”

Miles and Clare found themselves following Serenity into an unexpected world.


 

11 comments:

  1. Charming story! A satisfying resolution after so many years.

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  2. A fun story and good reminder of the cost of not speaking the truth.

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  3. A wonderful Christmas story. May the Smythes have a long and happy life!

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  4. Delightful story and I enjoyed how you worked your love for Broadway into it.

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  5. How I loved this story! What a charmer!

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  6. It's perfect! Even your settings, furniture, drapes, and so forth, are inserted so skillfully that I didn't gloss over a thing. Love it!

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  7. What a wonderful story! I loved the setting, the characters, and the premise. Thank you for a great read.

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  8. I loved it! A big manor house, a young girl left in her aunt's care by her parents, a mysterious portrait... Wonderful atmosphere and a great ending.

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  9. KM, thank you. How kind.

    Jim, you make an excellent point. Thanks!

    Kait, so glad you enjoyed it. Definitely, a toast to the Smythes!

    Debra, you know me too well, my friend. Thank you for reading.

    Shari, thank you. You are an inspiration to me.

    Kaye, your words mean so much. Thank you!

    Pat, you are so kind. I'm delighted you enjoyed the story.

    Thank you, Korina! Many thanks!

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